A Creepy Story…that Could Have Been Very Scary
By about mid-way through the book, I had one of those creepy feelings. You know, the kind you get where you check the doors twice before you go to bed and you are thankful your significant other is not visiting relatives or on business travel. Molelith definitely got some of my ‘flight-or-fight’ response kicking in, as I read about a series of vampire-like deaths in the Hollywood Hills. The violence is not graphic, but it is effectively described. For me, however, the story could have been more.
The politically correct term for someone like me is probably ‘implausibility-challenged’, because while I understand that you often need to accept something that is unlikely as part of a good tale, I have limits that may be lower than most. In this case, sure, there are beings like vampires. OK, I’m good to go; bring on the nightmares. Oh, I have to accept that a large city, professional police force would form a squad of detectives who are young, smart, and extremely handsome, but who have virtually no experience, several of whom have very unusual traits or worldviews, and then leave them as the only unit investigating a crime of the century for most of the story. OK, maybe. Then, put an attractive, but only slightly more seasoned female sergeant in charge, whose claim to fame is being the “bait” for a killer in a previous case (who, by the way, escaped) and who seems to lack any control over her impulses to bed just about anyone in her squad. Really? Then, you need to ignore several obvious clues, e.g., it took a specialist and two hours of investigating to realize a third person was involved when two murdered women are found securely bound, hand and foot. The depiction of the characters, especially in the first part of the book, and the storyline throughout required that I accept too much implausibility for me to become fully invested in this plot.
It was a quick and easy read. The ending has a couple of twists, although overall, the solution seems somewhat ‘convenient’. So, if you like supernatural horror/crime stories and you want to get carried along with a general feeling of dread and suspense from a rapid series of unusual murders and the resulting public panic in Tinseltown, it can be a fun read.