Glastonbury
by Brian L. Porter
I was sold on this book just by the title, Glastonbury long being thought the location of the Isle of Avalon of the King Arthur legend. And, although that legend plays a pivotal part of the reason the characters become involved in this novel's storyline, the book is never really about the legend.
The author is from the UK, so there were the differences in sentence construction, spelling, slang, etc. for me, a reader from the US, to contend with. I read several UK authors, so although those differences sometimes caught my eye, none really pulled me out of the action. That doesn't mean there weren't some problems with the editing/proofreading. There were just a couple.
At location 93 on my Kindle the final sentence of a paragraph is screwed up in the digital, so that the first word of the sentence appears after the period of the next to the last sentence, as it should, but there is nothing else on the line after it but dead space (about half the line). The next line is indented and begins with a proper noun, so it looks like a new paragraph. Again, I think this break -- probably from a hard return in the original copy -- was simply missed in the proofing of the Kindle edition. But, it stopped me dead, almost before the story had gotten started.
At 1457, there is a misspelled word. "ion" (really a word, just not the correct one) for "on" (...without a stain ion his character.)
At 1751 -- oh the agony for a UK author -- a misspelling of Sherlock Holmes' name. All the more of a problem as it came in a sentence where the name was correctly spelled earlier: "In short, if this little case of yours were a Sherlock Holmes type mystery, and I were to describe myself as taking the part of the great detective, then Marcus would be Mycroft to my Homes."
But other than those three items, I didn't see any other problems with grammar, etc. That last one was a dozy, though, wasn't it!
Okay, in this novel, the Strata Survey Company, owned by Joe Cutler and consisting of Cutler, his field team, Winston Fortune and Sally Corbett, and his office manager, Mavis Hightower, have accepted a job from Malcolm Capshaw, an eccentric and shady multimillionaire, to find the hiding place of King Arthur's sword, Excalibur. Capshaw has produced a document, verified to be from the time of King Arthur, which purports to show where the sword was buried for safekeeping. The team is given a very small window of time in which to find the sword, a large retainer and a flat fee for the work, but with the promise of a very large bonus if and when the sword is found.
Cutler is very suspicious of the job, not really believing that the Arthurian legend is anything but a myth; but the document seems real and if Capshaw's information is correct, not only would Cutler's company stand to gain a lot of cash, but also a lot of notoriety as the finders of the long lost Excalibur. So, off to Glastonbury go Joe, Winston, and Sally, to prepare the search grid and await the arrival of Capshaw's historian, Walter Graves, a decorated military man turned history professor with a mysterious air. Soon it begins to look to the Strata crew that they have been had, and that the search is not for Arthur's sword, but for something very different. They have never completely trusted Capshaw, who has close ties to leaders of the British mafia, the Maitland brothers, Karl and Boris, nor do they trust Graves, the history professor who packs a Ruger in his jacket. When one of the sites where the team digs turns up a corpse that does not seem to be old enough to be from the time of Arthur, Sally contacts her history professor from college to help. What he uncovers, as well as research done by Mavis, clue the team that their interesting little job is suddenly not only what it seemed, but that Walter Graves could prove to be deadly dangerous.
I found this to be an exciting read. Full of interesting twists and turns, the plot moves along tirelessly, unfolding clues and hints and developing characters and plot nicely. I found that when I thought I knew who might become the Strata crew's savior, I was wrong and found the ending twist to be unexpected, and, almost unbelievable given some of the earlier description. Nevertheless, that twist made me smile, so maybe that's all that counts.