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The Broken Lands #1

Rise of the Reaper: The Broken Lands: Book One

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Can you change fate? What would you risk in order to save the ones you love? Lovers of dark adventure, magic, and following your heart should not let this book slip away.

Can prophecy be overcome, or does striving to avoid fate merely drive you into its arms?

Since the day Danny Stone's mother vanished, dreams of dark and strange places have plagued him nightly. Though years have passed, the burning pain of her disappearance still consumes him - as does his need for answers. Then one lazy summer day, Danny and his friends Katrina, Poppy, and Russell discover their parents' long-hidden secret - and their lives change forever.

They enter a fragmented, broken world of magic, blades, and blood in a quest for answers, but the mystery of what happened to Danny's mother only becomes more terrifying - and yet there is hope. But there are other, bigger threats at hand, too, as evil begins to stir and the Oracle's prophesies herald a coming darkness.

It seems that Danny's dreams were only the beginning...

˃˃˃ Rise of the Reaper is the first book in an exciting new YA fantasy series by British author Lorna Reid.

A perilous quest, filled with magic, blades, and blood. This adventure will make your pulse quicken, even as the shadows begin to stir...

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398 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 1, 2015

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Lorna Reid

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Lorna Reid is a writer and aspiring actor, who currently lives in the gloomy climes of Scotland, surrounded by books, an excess of stationery, and far too many mugs of half-finished tea. She studied performing arts at Canterbury College, and currently enjoys the lively environment of CityLit's online courses, as well as rediscovering her love of Shakespeare.

Words, movies, and an incurable Columbo and Poirot habit (not to mention true crime) tend to dominate much of her time, and she has been taking advantage of lockdown to build up her acting toolbox and confidence in order to try and catch hold of the dreams that she let slip, too long ago. She writes a bit, too.

Made of shadows and tea.

You can find her lurking in the hostile wilderness of the internet on Twitter @SketchStone, on Facebook at www.facebook.com/lornareidauthor, or lornareid.net.

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138 reviews51 followers
February 9, 2016
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The author provided me with a copy in exchange for an honest review. Though it took me a while to get into, I think Rise of the Reaper is an adventurous and fun read, especially suitable for young(er) teens.

I’m going to be honest here and state up front that the beginning of the story did not really appeal to me. This is probably why I had bit of a hard time getting into the story. The beginning was slow-paced, the introductions too long. The rest of the book completely made up for that though. Almost immediately I realized the presence of not only four protagonists with their own point of views, but also the presence of all of their parents. I had an incredibly hard time trying to distinguish which character was which and how they related to each other exactly. Though I certainly appreciate the idea of parents playing an important role in the lives of their kids, it did complicate the plot a lot.

Moreover, the abundance of characters left less space for a focus on individual characters – even if that focus was present to some extent – and created a lot of subplots which I feel would have fit better in a separate book. I do think that it’s easy for readers to relate to the characters and I hope that there will be more of a focus on individual characters in the next book(s) in the series.

Once I got over my initial concerns and once the pace picked up, I really started to enjoy the book. The world-building was superb, with more than enough creative details to keep the reader occupied, such as the oracles and the portals. One of my favorite things was definitely Aquattrox, a water sport played on eccentric dolphin-like creatures, as well as the adventures at sea. I simply loved these two aspects to bits because it seemed so adventurous but also completely imaginable

Rise of the Reaper also teaches kids and teens a few important lessons. For one, how valuable friendship is and what it means to stand up for your friends. But also the value of family, that there is a reason why you should sometimes listen to your parents (hah!) and that they are there to support and protect you in times of need. For all of the excitement and fun, I believe this is also an incredibly important and great aspect of the book

To conclude, this book is great for a young teenage audience, especially the adventurous reader. There is definitely room for improvement, but I have high hopes for the next book in the series!
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801 reviews417 followers
February 23, 2017
Rise of the Reaper is one of the first self-published books that I have ever agreed to review. I, like so many others, had been put off in the past by all the horror stories that you come across. You kind of end up thinking you might end up getting stalked or maybe bottled if you end up not enjoying it, and writing an honest negative review. But I really liked the sound of this one, and especially appreciated Lorna Reid's email asking me to review it - it was clear she'd been to my blog, seen my content and my review policy (hurray)! I also got to read an extract and realised that this was a book I really wanted to read myself. After finishing it, I am so glad I decided to take a chance on this book because I really enjoyed it, and it's also made me excited to read the sequel.



This book is a fantasy novel, that sees our characters go from our own world into a magical word they never realised existed. This book throws you right into a whole new world, and it has a wonderful and large cast of characters. It was very jarring to me at first, but I got used to as I went on and things got more familiar. I always struggle with new fantasy books, just because there is always so much to learn about the world, the characters, the magical system, the political system and so much more. I mostly struggled with keeping characters straight in my head, as there were many characters and the teens actually had present parents, which I applaud, but they did confuse me a lot. This book jumps into that very quickly and it took me a while to catch up with the characters. But I was fascinated by the world and the magic system that Reid created.







There is so much going on in this book, which felt overwhelming at first when you get thrown into it. The final two thirds are where you have your head around everything and can enjoy the story. I loved the magical world in this book, with oracles and portals. But, without a doubt, my favourite part of this book was Aquattrox, which is the main sport played. It is an exhilarating and rather dangerous sport played in the water, involving more hardcore dolphin type creatures. Aquattrox is the first sport in fiction, since Quidditch, that has actually fascinated me and made me wish I could go watch it in real life - this means a lot, coming from someone who does not do sports!



Another thing that I enjoyed, that others might not, was all the swearing! That might just be because I'm a terrible person, with a rather big fondness for the word fuck. But it also just felt more real for this book and the characters, as it felt like how people would actually talk in those situations. I do think it is a bit of a shame though, as this feels like a book that could really appeal and work for middle grade readers as well, if it didn't have all the swearing - which might put off a lot of parents from getting it for their children.





I loved getting to know the world and the characters in this book. It's a great start to a series and you learn so much about the world in this one. I know the sequel will be one I could jump straight into and know exactly what was going on, which means I could get lost in the story straight away. I am eagerly awaiting the sequel in this series and can't wait to see where the story goes next. If you are looking for a new YA fantasy series to start, then Rise of the Reaper is a great place to start.





4/5 Butterflies










1. How long did Rise of the Reaper take from first concept to completion?



I started Rise of the Reaper while I was bored at my job one day, many years ago. After silly amounts of planning and working things out I finally got to work. It took about a year to finish, and then came the dreaded editing, which took ages. And then about a decade passed while I wrote books two, three, and half of four (along with what would be my first published book, a standalone Britcom-style book called The Septic Circle).



I eventually hit a road block with book four and it had been playing on my mind that I *really* needed to go back and re-write Rise of the Reaper. So much had changed with the characters alone over those years, let alone anything else. That took a while, then throw in the professional editing and proofing needed … so, over a decade from start to finish. I should probably look at improving my speed, come to think of it. I think there's a slug with a pen in my garden who's put out more books than I have.






2. What did you enjoy most about writing Rise of the Reaper?



Finishing it. Just kidding! No, seriously, I think I enjoyed the characters slowly coming to life and developing beyond what I had planned for them. I love writing the banter and non-essential stuff the most. I'm always at my happiest when I'm writing about the adult characters chatting, arguing, and messing about (I love writing Thom and Pete), or Danny doing something shocking or Poppy being so outraged she could scrape your face off with a steely glare. That's the fun stuff for me. Of course, if you follow 'the rules' those are the bits you should consider cutting or trimming back. That sucks. Screw the rules, I'll fight you on the beaches for the right to keep my absolutely non-essential (but so much fun) ice-skating party or Aquattrox match (the food fight from book one had to go, though. RIP).






3. Rise of the Reaper is book one in a new series, how many books do you plan to write for the series and have you wrote the first draft of book two yet? 



No set end point, but given that I have about two thirds of a handwritten draft for book four laying under my bed, I'd say it has a way to go yet. Maybe at a guesstimate… seven? And that's just the start. I want to write some spin-offs focussed on just one or two of the younger characters at a time, and I also want to go back to visit the lives of the adult characters in their own series – I love them too much to not focus on them at some point. There's so much cool history (cool and good, bad, and *very* ugly) and character stuff there that I'd be crazy not to. (Also, I've been shipping those adult characters hard for years - shhh.)



Not only that, but I have some plans for some shorter stories or a couple of collections - Tales From the Black Pass or similar - and stories from the city, with Air or others involved. So, not too much then.



Book two, like Rise of the Reaper, was finished years ago, but will be re-written (just starting now). Just like with book one, book two – Darkwalkers – will be re-done to better fit all the changes I've made with the story, characters, backstory, and more. I've grown as a writer in that time, too – it's over a decade since I finished book one – so it's only right that I rework



Darkwalkers, too. Hopefully, though, it will mean that, as I have the bones to work with, it won't take so long (famous last words there).






4. Can you tell us a little something about what the characters get up to in the next book?



I'm horrifically spoilery when I get talking. So bad. My sister can worm stuff out of me so easily and she *knows it*, so I have to be so careful. Okay… tell no one. Well, except all you guys, because you're special.



Book two, Darkwalkers, is something of an interruption as well as a continuation of the first book. The quest intensifies and becomes focussed through one, terrifying, dramatic event. If the race against time in the first book added pressure, then this one ups the stakes.



Not only that but the characters get divided up. Katrina and Danny will be taking a dark road together and Poppy and Russell will be getting into trouble all by themselves, as they get a better look at the face of the enemy (one of them, anyway). The characters really start to develop in Darkwalkers… they grow, often painfully, beyond those earlier more innocent days, and their relationships along with them.



The Oracle wasn't wrong when she said to Danny that the rest of his life would begin at Darrant Ridge. Remember that thing he took? His life is going to change, drastically, because of that. It will shape his destiny and more.



I could say loads more but *spoilers*, and I can see watches being tapped. That said, if you read the first book and catch me on Twitter in a gabby sort of mood, I'll tell all. Okay, not *all*. Maybe just the airspeed velocity of an unladen swallow (lies - I'm allergic to maths).






5. What books inspire you to write or are your personal favourites? 



I think my inspiration comes from all those books where the characters are thrown into an adventure. Something far removed from their ordinary life, where they can be someone else, something else, visit strange and wonderful places where magic escapes the realms of imagination and ensnares you! Looking back, so many of my books were like that. Adventures, strange worlds, magic, the empowerment of youth and also the beautiful naivety of it.





Growing up, I loved Tamora Pierce's Song of the Lioness books. There was a female character that I could identify with, whose skin I wanted to climb inside (not creepy!). She kicked arse and got respect and was the equal or better of those who would perhaps look down on her for her gender. I also loved So You Want to Be A Wizard by Diane Duane. Later on I fell in love with the work of Terry Pratchett and Ray Bradbury (The Day it Rained Forever was wonderful).





Pratchett created a world I can only envy as a writer and be devoured by as a reader – so much richness and colour and character – layers upon layers of it. It's what I strive for. What

anyone should strive for. That said, although I love the colour and vibrancy of Ankh-Morpork present day, and Reaper Man is among my all-time favourite books, Nightwatch was perhaps his finest hour. The darkness practically cuts you.





I'm also a big fan of non-fiction – escape stories, treasure hunting, shipwrecks, maritime mysteries, and treasure islands… I suppose even in the real world I still secretly love adventure.






6. You have an aquatic sport in your books, Aquattrox. Where did that come from? Also, who's shirt do you wear? 



*Love* Aquattrox. I wanted a sport that reflected my world (although I took inspiration from the Mayans). Dark, fast, and violent. Something that's fine to watch, but which you sure as hell don't want to be a part of. I knew I wanted it to be played on water, and riding creatures that are distant cousins of dolphins made it easier for the players to speed around. I borrowed the nets from Lacross and the water spouts as goals were a nasty addition, helping to seal the whole thing up in a delicious but dangerous bow.





I don't know how many hours I lost dreaming up names for teams and thinking of all the awesome ways players could foul or injure one another. I've got a pretty cool list of penalty-worthy activities, now. Sometimes I read it and laugh, and then feel grateful it's fiction. Also, Port George Tides rule.
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756 reviews21 followers
April 8, 2018
Fantastic world building.
An interesting cast of characters
A brilliant mix of adventure, magic and excitement...
What more could you possibly want from a ya fantasy novel?!
I look forward to book 2.
Great for fans of S.J.Maas.
Thank you to Netgalley for the chance to read this.
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March 30, 2018
Thank you to NetGalley and Ravensforge Books for providing me with an ARC! All opinions are my own.

DNF at 27% (hence why I'm not rating it). I really wanted to love this book because the concept sounded awesome, unfortunately, I had some problems with the writing. Overall, the descriptions and constant repetitions of some things took me out of the story and made me lose interest, but it was an original story and I hope the author continues writing and improving, because it sure had potential. You can see my full review here: https://helinabooks.wordpress.com/201...
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153 reviews6 followers
March 22, 2018
I voluntarily read and reviewed this book and it was worth every moment of reading🙌

Lorna Reid is a masterful world building and has created a magical myriad of worlds within this book that I desperately want to visit! Their is detail into their humor, their favorite sports, their medicine, their animals, methods of travel and of course, the types of magic 💥

The broken lands sound like truly mystical and terrifying places to be and the descriptions are rich and vivid. I was totally engulfed and in love!

The dark pass reminded me of a twisted version of the fold/unsea in the Grisha trilogy and had the same creepy, crippling darkness that made me love it!🌌 not to mention actual ports and towns are there. Suffice to say I LOST MY SHIT 🤗

The characters would fit right in in Australia. They're snarky, sarcastic, show attitude, swear (definitely language warning for children, teens are fine) but underneath it all they all have their own flaws, quirks, beauty and personalities.

These characters are not all sunshine and roses. They fight. They argue and they are real. Lorna Reid captures several generations and different types of characters perfectly!

I was surprised how much I loved this book. It's well written and had a nice, smooth pace despite being a bit bland at the start for me. The minute they entered the other lands everything changed and I was HOOKED 😍

Read this if you're after a realistic view on what adventure into magic would be like for the everyday young adult and liked the Grisha trilogy. It ends up quite dark and twisty which I love! Not a happy fairytale read but I loved it
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June 9, 2016
WHY YOU NEED TO READ RISE OF THE REAPER BY LORNA REID:


I was thrown right into the story which was confusing at first but after a chapter or so I got used to the pacing of the novel and really began to enjoy myself! It's definitely one of those books that once you start reading you can't stop because the story is so addictive!


It wasn't similar to HARRY POTTER but RISE OF THE REAPER had that same comforting feeling that I always feel surrounded by when I read HARRY POTTER. I think it was due to the amazing depth of the world building and the cast of characters that all had such original and deep personalities that made me feel that way, but whatever it was, I loved it!


The world created in here is more wonderful then I can put into words! I get so tired of reading about fantasy worlds that all sort of merge into one another but it was such a delight reading RISE OF THE REAPER and immersing myself in such a unique fantasy world that I've NEVER read anything like it before! I LOVED how the swearing was used! It was executed SO well as it was used when it was needed or to get a point across but not SO much that it was unnecessary. LOVED IT I TELL YOU. <3

I CAN NOT PUT INTO WORDS HOW MUCH I ADORED THE SPORT, AQUATTROX! It's really hard to explain it but basically it's got animals that are kind of like a more brutal version of dolphins, it's played in the water and it is SAVAGE. I loved it!

RISE OF THE REAPER is self-published but it's been edited so well not only story wise but flow wise. It's so professional how it reads and to get it to this polished level takes an enormous effect that you can see Lorna really put into it!


THE COVER IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Yup, that is totally a reason to read this book! I mean, JUST LOOK AT IT. I want it on my wall.

A very special thanks to the author, Lorna for not only sending me a copy of her wondrous book but also sending mean amazing bag full of swag as well, a picture of what she sent me below!
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65 reviews2 followers
January 7, 2016
I have received a Goodreads giveaway copy of this book.


Rise of the Reaper starts off a little slow in order to introduce the main characters and distinguishes their personalities but, quickly, events pick up and there’s never a dull moment. I was a little confused in the first third of the book trying to keep all the characters straight in my head and who was whose parent (to be honest, I’m still getting Katrina and Poppy’s parents confused). Then, I wished that there was slightly better pacing with the explanation of the world as it was a little much at one point but then things started to click together as the characters’ journey progressed.


The writing style was absolutely fantastic and highly enjoyable. I loved how it was the children kept in the dark and that the parents were quite active characters; I really hope we get more interactions with both generation of characters in future books. I would also like to see more of the world and more of the sport Aquattrox.


As you read the book, you can’t help but grow attached to the characters. In terms of character growth, there wasn’t much but, at least to me, it felt more like a kick-off to the future; the characters are quite flawed and there is plenty of room for development.


Overall, Rise of the Reaper really impressed me and I would recommend it to everyone who enjoys fantasy, adventure and quests. If you enjoy RPG games, you absolutely must read this book, you won’t regret it.
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December 23, 2015
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Danny Stone’s mother vanished years ago and since then he has been haunted by her disappearance. One summer day, Danny and his friends’ lives will forever change when they discover their parents’ secrets.

They find themselves in a time portal where blood, magic and blades prevail. While Danny seeks answers to his mother’s disappearance, they are drawn into Oracle's prophesies herald a coming darkness.

As they venture for knowledge, they are swept into a dark world. Will they be able to survive and return to their world? Nice read for young readers who are into quests.
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39 reviews
May 10, 2018
This review was made possible by #netgalley

Oh. My. Heck. I loved this book.

Now, I'm usually pretty lenient in rating books, because I realize that something I don't care for might be another person's cup of tea. This book, however, needed no leniency; It was brilliant from page one. I would highly recommend this book to anyone who likes Harry Potter, The Chronicles of Narnia, or Garth Nix's work. Lorna Reid did a great job blending fantasy and being a teen. I'm really excited to read the next book in this series!

I think the thing that's best about this book is how real the characters feel. Sure, they're teens, but the level of melodramatic angst is just right. They make stupid, rash decisions, curse occasionally, and forget to think about other people some times - like real kids.

Even though the book is a little long for a YA novel, it is extremely fast-paced. You will not get bored or stuck in one place; It's all action, all the time. The fast pace was consistent across the novel, so the climax wasn't unexpectedly fast - it was the same pace as the rest of the book, which was refreshing.

Overall, READ THIS BOOK PLEASE. It's pretty awesome.
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186 reviews6 followers
February 20, 2018
This is an adventure filled with action and great character!
There is one thing I wished the author had included, an index over the different families and who was where because they are mentioned in the beginning and then the story accelerate quick with action. I really liked the book and want to read more about the kids that are the main character. There is a lot of things I want to learn more about and get answers to. If you like Harry Potter you are going to like this book because they are similar but totally different!
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69 reviews1 follower
April 14, 2018
I really enjoyed this book! It has a great cast of characters with a lot of adventure and even some magic. First book by this author but she did a great job drawing me into the storyline and kept me there till the very end.

Looking forward to reading book 2.
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356 reviews18 followers
April 28, 2018
Awesome book. Well written with a great plot and characters. The world building is phenomenal! Lorna Reid is also creative making up a new sport called Aquattrox. We follow 4 teenagers who learn that their parents are warriors that can wield magic. Which in turn thrusts these 4 teens into coping with this info plus starting to dabble in magic themselves. I like what the book is hinting at where it may go, and I can't wait to read the next book! I voluntarily read and reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book from Netgalley.
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694 reviews41 followers
February 21, 2020
After reading this book, I wanted to write and post this review to share my honest experiences toward the story.

Wow, what an amazing tale! Right from the start, the story hooks you in as we are introduced to four teens, all in detention on their last day of classes before summer break, unaware that they will be having the summer break of a lifetime. These kids are all from broken families, but are unaware until later that day of their parent’s long-hidden secret – one that will change their lives forever.

This is a fast-paced, action packed read with an interesting magic system and amazing world building. The characters are also amazing, all different and all having a different view on things, but having to work together to achieve a common goal. It truly was an enjoyable read, which I would definitely recommend to anyone into young adult dark fantasy. Fair warning – the story contains a large amount of cursing and adult language, so if this is a trigger for you, it might not be the right read for you, but for me it was not a problem. Looking forward to seeing how the story continues. The author has really set the bar high this time, and I can’t want to continue Danny, Katrina, Russell and Poppy’s adventure!
86 reviews3 followers
February 14, 2020
Rise of the Reaper

Wow. Honestly, I've just finished reading this book, and it's like I've emerged from another world. This book absorbed me and captivated me completely, and I felt like I was actually part of the story.

The characters were well-developed and complimented each other well. They all have come from broken families, and the story starts with them all being in detention on their last day of school. This should give you an indication of what these kids are like. When they find themselves in a strange world, they are determined to do what they believe is right, and they don't let anyone stop them.

This book was a delight to read, and I can't wait to read the next one :)
39 reviews
April 19, 2018
Rise of the Reaper was .. more than I expected it to be. I went into this book with almost a sense of dread, the first few chapters really weren't catching my attention and I was struggling. I almost quit, but my inner book-nerd wouldn't let me. Boy am I glad I kept going. This book is captivating, with beautiful world building and relatable, 3 dimensional characters. This book is perfect for fans of SJM and LB.
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139 reviews8 followers
January 13, 2016
Rise Of The Reaper is one of those books where the sum of the parts is greater than the whole. It has all the magic ingredients for a perfect read. Magic, world building, friendship, peril, high stakes and a rich cast of characters. But while I liked it, I didn't love it.

Clocking in at 386 pages, Rise Of The Reaper isn't a quick read, and it's a book I feel would have benefited from a more ruthless edit. There's a lot of information to take in, a lot of worlds and history to get across and a lot of characters to get to grips with. The world building, and idea of numerous lands, some connected by portals, others sealed off for the safety of the rest, is superb, but the execution in getting all this information across is not easy going. The best comparison I can think of is JRR Tolkien and his Lord Of The Rings trilogy, with lots of surplus information that builds the world, but ultimately doesn't move the story along. There's a lot of meandering and a lot of plot threads are included which may have been better left for book two (or jettisoned entirely) to keep the plot tighter, and unfortunately a lot of this information comes from other characters sitting down and explaining things to the protagonists. There are some nice touches, like the introduction to the sport of Aquattrox, sort of like water polo on dagger-mouthed dolphins with water tornados (think what Quidditch is to Harry Potter) and a journey aboard a pirate ship to an otherwordly cove where the story really shines. I love this sort of stuff, where the reader is allowed to explore and see the world, rather than being given paragraphs of information about it, none of which is ever seen.

In a story like this, I like to have an anchor in the lead character. A grounding for the story and a constant in these shifting worlds, and while it was refreshing to see a quarter of friends in Danny, Katrina, Poppy and Russel, is makes for a confusion read at times. The pov changes between these four characters, sometimes from one paragraph to the next. Throw in their parents with their own stories, different lands and the people in them, prophecies and wars and I'm skipping back pages to try and remember who's who. Katrina, the first of the group to discover her own magic is my favourite character. Adventurous and determined with a sense of humour, I'd like to have read more of the story from her point of view. I think this sums up my biggest issue with the book. There's just too much going on, especially for the first book in a series, which usually means more and more is going to be introduced on top of the dangling plot threads.

Rise Of The Reaper is book one in The Broken Lands series, and now that the world are established I'm keen to see where this story goes from here. It sucks that some of the great supporting characters won't be back for reasons I won't go into because of spoilers, but it's a promising start to a new series. Hopefully I'll get more answers than question out of book two ...

Review originally posted at http://mikaylasbookshelf.blogspot.co....
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3,796 reviews30 followers
March 7, 2018
Received from Netgalley. First thoughts Danny needs a slap. Straight away the quartet’s mischievousness is shown and then the parents’ reactions made me laugh. From there it’s a new world and magic. The game lost me a bit but the rest of it was good, dropping hints and raising more questions. I thoroughly enjoyed the first book.
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326 reviews8 followers
December 14, 2019
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

The story starts with Danny, it is the last day of school, before Summer. He and his friends Katrina, Poppy, and Russell are having the last school detention. Danny doesn't care because 5 years ago his mother disappeared. Since then he doesn't care what is happening around him. Until the unthinkable happens and by accident they stroll into a portal to another world. One that their parents never told about.

Their parents reveal that some of them come from The Lands, a now broken up world caused by an all consuming war. They learn that magic is real and that this magical world is very dangerous. Danny learns that his mother got lost in this world.

Even though their parents told them not to venture out in this dangerous world, because there is a gateway that can take them to different lands. Danny sets on a mission to find his mother and doesn't care if he or his friends get hurt. They even learn they can possess magic themselves.
They are set on a course of adventure and along the way they each get confronted by what the future holds and hereby also learning painful lessons. And in the wake of all their adventures, they have to confront the most evil magical being, the Reaper and the mage darklanders.Will they succeed or fail?

This is in league with 'The Chronicles of Narnia' stories especially 'The Voyage of the Dawn Treader" , the four of them going on an adventures but dangerous voyage to rescue someone they made friends with. The only thing that I didn't like about this story was that there was a lot of swearing language, for me a bit to much. But it doesn't take a way that this story is exhilarating , with adventures, action and also to experience the magic in this broken up world. And with always something new around the corner you keep on reading until the end.
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124 reviews1 follower
July 30, 2016
This is the first volume of an interesting fantasy saga for young adult readers. It's the story of Danny and his friends Katrina, Poppy, and Russell, who discover that their families hide a magic secret: a series a magical worlds, the existence of practical magic, and prophetic oracles... After a series of strange dreams, Danny Stone and his friends start the quest for his missing mother and the adventures of living the worlds of magic.
I found this book very entertaining and suitable for teenage boys and girls. Although the number of characters and events is perhaps a bit too large, I think this might be because it's the first book of a series. The characters, both the younger ones and the parents' generation, are very well depicted and likable. I miss a bit a greater "villain". The adventures are very diverse and compelling, and the reader really wants to know what's next.

I received the book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
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60 reviews9 followers
May 8, 2016
Rise of the Reaper: The Broken Lands: Book 1:
by Lorna Reid
paperback- 993.00rs
Rise of the Reaper starts off a little slow in order to introduce the main characters and distinguishes their personalities but, quickly, events pick up and there’s never a dull moment. I was a little confused in the first third of the book trying to keep all the characters straight in my head and who was whose parent (to be honest, I’m still getting Katrina and Poppy’s parents confused). Then, I wished that there was slightly better pacing with the explanation of the world as it was a little much at one point but then things started to click together as the characters’ journey progressed.
overall a good read.........
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147 reviews38 followers
July 17, 2018
I thoroughly enjoyed Rise of the Reaper it was a face-paced and fun fantasy read, with an interesting magic system, some great world building and a host of unique characters. Rise of the Reaper starts on the last day of term for four teenagers Danny, Katrina, Poppy and Russell and after escaping from detention they accidentally follow their parents into a magical world.

I lived vicariously through their adventure, because as a child I am pretty sure this would have been my perfect dream come true...

I love that we have four misfits off on an adventure, and as a parent I love that their parents ask 'why can you never do as your sodding told?' a question I ask myself internally several times a day (I have a four year old who thinks she is the boss... ok knows she is the boss). We met these four on that last day of school, we don't expect them to do as they are told and the story is such a fun read because of that.

The book got off to an interesting start (early on Russell was my favourite character because I just loved his anger fuelled rant at the teacher), though towards the end of the book I found myself more drawn to Katrina and Poppy. The book follows all four of the teenagers in 3rd person POV and this can sometimes get a little confusing at times, but it is something I quickly got used too. I loved the character development of all four of the main characters, they were so distinct and unique.

The worldbuilding in Rise of the Reaper was amazing, I love the idea of a shattered world accessible through portals. There were some really incredible places described like the Dark Pass. The system of magic also sounded really interesting and I am interested to find out more about this in the next book, I feel that we have only scratched the surface of the magic of this world and the journey to discover more is going to be an exciting one! I cannot wait to find more about this world in book two and, of course, spend more time with the main quartet of characters.

There are some sections which felt a little long, I am thinking of both the discussions of the sport Aquattrox and the description of the game. I feel that whilst the game really did help add to the world building the discussions did get a little long winded, though as I am not sporty in the least it might have had something to do with that.

Rise of the Reaper is written in British English, which so amazing as an reader from the UK as there are just some subtle differences, which can be so jarring if you are reading a book written in American English.

I would definitely recommend Rise of the Reaper it is a solid start to what promises to be a really interesting YA Fantasy series
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68 reviews2 followers
June 9, 2018
Can you change fate? What would you risk in order to save the ones you love? Lovers of dark adventure, magic, and following your heart should not let this book slip away.

Can prophecy be overcome, or does striving to avoid fate merely drive you into its arms? Since the day Danny Stone's mother vanished, dreams of dark and strange places have plagued him nightly. Though years have passed, the burning pain of her disappearance still consumes him - as does his need for answers. Then one lazy summer day, Danny and his friends Katrina, Poppy, and Russell discover their parents' long-hidden secret - and their lives change forever.

They enter a fragmented, broken world of magic, blades, and blood in a quest for answers, but the mystery of what happened to Danny's mother only becomes more terrifying - and yet there is hope. But there are other, bigger threats at hand, too, as evil begins to stir and the Oracle's prophesies herald a coming darkness.

It seems that Danny's dreams were only the beginning...

Rise of the Reaper is the first book in an exciting new YA fantasy series by British author Lorna Reid. A perilous quest, filled with magic, blades, and blood. This adventure will make your pulse quicken, even as the shadows begin to stir.

I recieved this ebook from Netgalley for an honest and unbiased review.



This books jumps straight into the action from the get go. Our character's get thrown in to a magical new world that they haven't been there before. There is a vast range of character's. It can be quite confusing at first but once you get your head around them, you will be reading through this book like a bat out of hell.

Lorna's world and character building has to be some of the best I've read for along time. It's so descriptive that it will have your imagination going over time. It's not like your typical generic fantasy world. I'm never going to look at another fantasy book again. This sets a high standard.

This book does have abit of swearing in it (so if you don't like swearing then probably just skip those bits )

If you want start a new YA series then this is the best place to start. I'd highly recommend it. I would give this book a 4.5/5
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585 reviews19 followers
July 29, 2018
*Thank you to the author for a copy for review*

I enjoyed this book for the most part. I thought the world building was very strong. I liked the idea of the Lands having a whole bunch of worlds connected to each other. I also enjoyed the Aquatroxx! Not many authors include sports or games into their worlds anymore, and I liked that it was fleshed out and made the world seem more real. There was also a solid base for the magic system, I'm interested to see how it builds in future books because I really felt like this was just a foundation.
There are SO many characters in this book. I had a hard time keeping track of which child belonged to which parent and the relationships between the parents. I also really liked that the parents are a big part of this story, and find their relationships to be intriguing. Characters get introduced very frequently in this book and they all tie together in some way. It made the world more believable just slightly confusing at times. The 4 main characters are the kids. I have no clue what age they're supposed to be because the maturity levels are all over the place every other page. They follow their parents into the Lands, and promptly make stupid decisions. They are trying to find Danny's mom who vanished years ago, which left him with a slightly out of control anger issues. He is my main issue with this book. He's unbelievably selfish, angry, and immature. The adults seemingly do nothing to curb this what so ever. Other than that the author does an amazing job juggling all of these characters. You get a feel for who they are as individuals, and they all have their own fleshed out personalities. I'm interested to see where the story goes in the next book.
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46 reviews
July 31, 2017
I won this book in a giveaway and not only did the author sign the book but she also included a personal thank you card, which is pretty cool, and asked me to do a review. So here goes...
3.5 stars, I found it kind of hard to get into this book. I liked the idea for the story but I didn't like the fact that I never really did figure out how old the kids are. Sometimes they act like little grade schoolers and other times they act like they are in high school. Props to the author for even writing a book it's something I couldn't have done. I wish her much luck on her future writing endeavors.
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79 reviews6 followers
March 18, 2018
*Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for providing me with a free copy for an honest review*

This book is more of a 3.5.

Rise of the Reaper starts a bit confusing and, to be honest, a little bland, certainly for the smuttering of casual misogyny and the uncertain setting (where are they? I'm thinking the UK, but who knows?).
However, as the story progresses and you're transported in other realities along with the characters, you get more and more enthralled by the plot and twists and you yearn to know more about past events and the characters' parents.

Overall, this is an interesting book and I'm looking forward to see if further books will be published!
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909 reviews11 followers
May 6, 2019
Warning: Language

Not impressed with the delivery. It felt disjointed and obsessive over the missing parent. Like it’s continuously brought up and talked about.
Maybe my perception is different, but how many times can you have a ‘fresh’ conversation about something five years ago without anything new developing?
The world building is interesting but weak. Mostly due to character interaction/thoughts/actions.
It’s better than a lot of other Indie books, but not my cup of tea.
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1,012 reviews5 followers
July 25, 2018
Fascinating

A newly discovered author and series has been a joy. The story was very involving and kept me thoroughly absorbed. I'm looking forward to reading more of the series. Definitely worth reading.
3 reviews
May 24, 2019
The world building and lore are good, and the series has potential. However, the characters never really interested me, never made me feel for them. Bsides, the book is...slow. Extremely slow. It becomes better on the second half, but it still never goes past the point of "being OK"
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