I tried. I really tried to plow through this book series, but there was a .0001925% chance that I made it to the end.
Why, you ask?
The answer is that over the last year, I have had it demonstrated that the Sophomore Slump is REAL. The first book is great, the second and subsequent books are underdeveloped, and could double as text-based Ambien. Snore! And so disappointing...
Is it lack of time? Pressure to publish quickly? Spankings from authority figures? Delusions of literary greatness? It can't be easy to write hundreds of pages of detailed stories under any conditions. I now believe that the environment is designed to pressure authors into producing work in severely limited timeframes (with the exception of GRRM), hence, the Slump.
The first book ALPHA was interesting and different. Not only the people/hardware/software mesh, but androids with other people's personalities running them, AI Madness, hordes of mutants ( replaces zombies in EoW fun ), the Family oligarchy, the War Widow Army, the Stepford Dome and those tricksy hackers - so many hackers.
Instead of changing reality the old fashioned way, the characters instead hack each other's software to bring about the desired effect. Gerry, Gabe and Petal can even hack and kill people this way. Some people can hack without a computer. They make the best friends in this new world, especially when everything is technical and bleak.
First Book bottom line: many factions, cool mutant snipers, much advanced hacking, weapons and warfare, the end.
The second book forgot that it was about a technological apocalypse and decided to focus on alternate crime, family and political storylines. While I have nothing against these types of stories, when presented liked half-cooked chicken, the subsequent books clearly need more attention.
According to the hype, these books have been top sellers for years on Amazon; so maybe it's just my skewed perspective that keeps me from mass agreement. If you love these books, that's wonderful -just don't flame me.
As I feared, I couldn't finish the second, third or fourth books. A three-fer DNF in grand style.
I tried...