The story has a good premise, it's easy to understand how Olivia feels, but at times she seems somewhat immature. Despite this, I really enjoyed the story. It was just one thing happening after another, to the point where you wonder if there will be a happily ever after... But that's life, isn't it? As soon as you think things are coming along, something happens and you sometimes feel like it's back to square one. So the events were exaggerated, but still realistic, despite everything.
Some things were annoying to me, but it might just be because my job forces me to pay close attention to grammar, punctuation, etc...
-The author uses the word "smirking" quite a bit when describing how the characters are feeling/speaking. Once or twice, that's fine, but when it's used repeatedly, it began to annoy me somewhat. This word indicates smugness or being conceited, which is not necessarily what I want to feel about main characters readers want to identify with. That is, I don't want to think that the main characters in a story (protagonists) are conceited people, it doesn't make me feel great about them...
-At times, paragraphs change incorrectly during dialogue when she has one character continue to speak about the same thoughts in two different paragraphs. That is, she closes the quotation marks, then changes paragraphs. Then the next paragraph opens with new quotation marks, which should indicate a different person speaking, but no.. this author continued the dialogue from the same person... This caused me to have to reread the page/section I was reading, since I had assumed that the paragraphs were changing during the conversation because a different person was talking.
-Similarly, at times the ending quotation marks were used incorrectly when there was dialogue.
Despite these problems (annoyances), I would reread this book, as well as probably other books by the same author, since the subject/plot is well thought out & interesting, as well as easy to connect to. Also, since it is a standalone book, it is a complete story, which is really nice compared to some other books I've read.