Billionaire Seeking Bride #1

by Mac Flynn

Vicki Loom works as a janitor in a large office building. It’s a lonely job made bearable by the company of her cantankerous old coworker, Tom. She dreams of a better life in the arms of a sensual lover, but has little hope with her line of work and hefty appearance. All that changes when a flier floats her way about an open secretary job in the upper echelons of the office building. She is interviewed for the job by the CEO of the company and finds herself the object of his lust-fueled needs. Her mind tells her it can’t be true, but her body aches for her lustful dream to become reality. ** Billionaire Seeking Bride #1 is a stand alone, steamy romance with no cliffhanger. **

Genres: Romance, Billionaires, Amazon, Contemporary Romance

29 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 16, 2015

About the author

A seductress of sensual words and a lover of paranormal plots, Mac enjoys writing thrilling paranormal stories filled with naughty fun and hilarious hijinks. She is the author of numerous paranormal series that weave suspense, adventure and a good joke into a one-of-a-kind experience that readers are guaranteed to enjoy. From long adventure novels to tasty little short-story treats, there’s a size and adventure for everyone.

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Reviews

[Dolores Marie Linthurst · Rating 4 out of 5]

Office Steam!

Talk about steamy office affairs! Wow! This was a surprise to read but enjoyable all the same! The female character is hilarious and down to earth a normal woman like us all!

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[Diana · Rating 3 out of 5]

It’s a cute & quick insta-love story. Very short. Could have benefited from a little more length.

It’s not a stand-alone.

Cute, but doesn’t entice me to read further.

[Elizabeth Bennet · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a very short read that is not a standalone. The writing is cute describing our heroine, Vicki Loom, dancing around with her broom. Fantasizing over her dream man. He happens to be one of the CEO's of the company she cleans for. Who doesn't love an under dog story? Vickie is a janitor and her friend/coworker, Tom, encourages her to apply for a secretary position. He found the application in the trash. Her idea of what she thought made her dream guy bothered me. My perception was she wanted a handsome man, definitely and lots of money. Seemed so superficial, especially when describes herself as ugly.

She does apply but reaches a slight road block with the current secretary, Vita. What a battle axe this one is. She instantly gives Vickie a hard time for thinking she qualifies to apply for the position. The book as I said is brief and in 37 pages brings the couple through their first sex scene. I like more of a build up. I want a little more time taken with the H exploring his prey.

**********POSSIBLE SPOILER**********

The story goes that: Alec Strong spends late nights at the office and so he has watched Vickie for sometime. In fact, it is no coincidence she got the application in the first place.

*******END OF SPOILER*******

That does make the story a little more believable and acceptable but I want to see into his thoughts and see the growing interest instead of hearing about it later. It is only Vickie's POV given. The story leaves off in a spot where I suppose you could quit and draw your own conclusions. I feel that there should have been more to the story than what there was. It's unfortunate. Enjoy!

[Destiny Smith · Rating 3 out of 5]

Vicki Loom is a janitor for an office building. She works with her old coworker, Tom. She dreams of a life with her imaginative lover and wants more. Things change when she finds an application for a secretary job. She meets the CEO of the company and things happen.

I enjoy this story, I give the story 6 and half out of 10 Stars or 3 out of 5 Stars. I do relate to Vicki, I am a plus size woman who used to hate myself and my body. We share similar insecurities. It was a good story and I thought the ending was cute!

[Alice Wiki · Rating 1 out of 5]

No...

Just when i was about to form a connection to the characters, the story ended.
It's frustrating to read a story and then wham it just ends.
And if the heroine is supposedly 'fat' why does the cover show a skinny woman? Will be asking for a refund and won't be reading this writer again. Just No...disappointing.

[Mykael · Rating 2 out of 5]

There was no plot, the story felt rushed like only the end goal was the reason for writing. There was no connection between the main characters. In my opinion, overall, the story needed more thought and development.

[Kyra Carr · Rating 4 out of 5]

Billionaire Seeking Bride #1

This romance was short, sweet and steamy fun. I was pretty much done with Mac Flynn, but this story made me decide to give him another shot. I like this BBW thing.

[Lina Reads smut For a living · Rating 5 out of 5]

I'm always a little sceptical when asked to review a short. But this one made me so happy! Within 15 pages this story sweeps you off your feet. Even with it being this short, it still takes its time to set the tone, the stage and the feeling. Definitely recommended if you like shorts!

[Denise A West · Rating 1 out of 5]

Very poorly written and stupid.

[Sue · Rating 1 out of 5]

Ummm, no!

This is the worse collection of words that I have ever forced myself to read. I kept hoping it would improve. It did not. Thank goodness it was short.

[Sarah Richards · Rating 5 out of 5]

Big women

I loved the first book, can't wait to get the next book. I'm an avid reader and like to read different types of books.

[Teresa Bradshaw · Rating 2 out of 5]

Billionaire seeking bride

Too short. I felt cheated. All this book was was a sex scene. No getting to know the characters. Just wrap it up and move on.

[Meiwilli · Rating 1 out of 5]

Utterly ridiculous free Amazon read I read during my commute to Miami. What. Was. I. Thinking?!

[Tine · Rating 1 out of 5]

Worse then bad.

[Anita · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fantastic read

Great book, was hard to put it down!! Keeps me on TVs edge is my seat!

Love how the story flowed!!

[☆nanui☆ · Rating 1 out of 5]

i crave the sweet release of death

[RomanceReader1 · Rating 4 out of 5]

New to me author.

Quick short story told on h POV.

It was a really sweet story although I kept wanting Alecs’ POV too.

I also wanted to see Vitras’ reaction to the news!

[Laura]

Dnf at 30%
Nope

[vandana nair · Rating 1 out of 5]

Poor

The heroine does not have any self respect.
.
It's like boss taking advantage of the employee.or her poor status

[Karin · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed the idea of the very short story. it works have been do much better as a full length book.

[Mya · Rating 5 out of 5]

I really like it and love d cover

[Ms Lady Jones · Rating 1 out of 5]

Really..you sleep with a man at a (2nd interview) for a job. And I thought he was looking for a wife not sex. This was not about him looking for a wife.

[Lisa · Rating 5 out of 5]

[Joanne Carr · Rating 5 out of 5]

Sweet & Short

I receive this book for free in exchange for an honest review.

I really enjoyed this short & sweet of a CEO and the Janitor..like a Cinderella.

[Angela Malone · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved it

A great short read with an interesting story line.
I will be reading more from Mac in the very near future .

[Josie · Rating 3 out of 5]

An opener?

Very short, but hit almost every right note. I would have liked to seen more story up front to explain his fascination with her and maybe the first time he saw her.