A lot of hyperventilating
Just ok for me. Not that great of a book. I notice the author loves to use the word hyperventilating. The sad part is I don't think the author knows what it means and is not using it in the right context. Hyperventilating is panic or anxiety and overreaching. It just didn't fit in the context the author kept using it in. If torn was hyperventilating that much he would need to seek medical attention. Sorry I work in the medical field so it irks me when research isn't done. Every time tyrese asked tron a question the author would say tron hyperventilated and said. Doesn't sound right. His fried tyrese was so immature, his way of thinking was not from a grown man's point of view. He was still thinking like a young boy. Tyrese didn't want a good hardworking woman with values, his idea of a good woman was someone who was willing to lay on her back and drop to her knees at the drop of a dime. Sounds like that's all he expected out of a woman. He was the last person tron should have been getting advice for.. getting advice is ok, but u gotta go with ur gut, ur heart and ur own mind. What may be good for someone else may not work for u. Like shawna"s sister and her advice to her about leaving tron alone for good. I'm not saying she should leave or stay. But whatever choice she makes should be hers alone. It's easy for someone who's heart is not involved to tell u that u should leave. But if they were in that situation it's no telling what they would do. Don't ever say what up won't allow or do. Just b because a person cheats doesn't make it a deal breaker. It all depends. If it's a one time thing we might b able to get pass it. But if it's something that continues we can't. Nalique was wrong for trying to bring her brother into the situation with her and tyrese. U do not bring ur family into ur affairs. U shouldn't tell ur family the bad things because if u forgive him doesn't mean ur family will. That makes for a tense situation. Everyone always has an opinion on what someone should do in their relationship. That's why I don't go broadcasting my relationship. Whatever we go through I keep it to myself one thing u never do is go to the side chick asking her questions. Most of the time they r going to embellish and not b truthful. Why would use go looking for answers from the woman who wants ur man? If I wanted someone's man I'm going to say whatever I have to whether it's a lie or not to get her to leave him alone. Shawn was stupid for going to get answers out of the side chick. I guess the author thought it was cute to end it the way she did. I'm trying to figure out what the side chick was so mad about. She was the grimy one. It was corny that the two of them came together. The author could have saved that.