I received a free copy of this book from NetGalley.
There’s a saying in journalism: “Don’t dump your notebook into your story.”
Alas, Joel Lobenthal has dumped his notebook into his story.
Alla Osipenko had a truly fascinating life: she was a world-famous ballerina who lived through WW2 and massive changes in the Soviet Union, performed all over the world, and had a wide variety of intellectual interests far beyond just ballet. Unfortunately, that life was described to the reader in such a disjointed fashion that I had problems following what was going on. Part 1- a description of her family – had such convoluted story telling that I remain confused as to who exactly Osipenko’s parents were, when she was born, and how her family’s past influenced her. Part 3, which begins to delve into her ballet training, is more a collection of anecdotes that might be interesting individually but fail to paint a cohesive picture about Russian ballet education and how it affected Osipenko.
The order of information was quite choppy. Lobenthal would relate an anecdote, and then, with no transition, shift to something completely different. At one point, Osipensko appears to discover documents that illuminate some of her family’s hidden history; the next paragraph, with no warning, we’re suddenly learning about her being picked to dance a special role, and the documents are never mentioned again. Not only is this hard to follow, it made me as a reader quickly loose interest, as a thread of activity would be dropped and the conclusion never picked up again.
Lobenthal states that he conducted over 40 one-on-one interviews with Osipensko. Gathered over the course of her time in the U.S., Osipensko’s words paint her as an intelligent, articulate, funny women with amazing talents and a determined, rebellious sprit. Unfortunately, the poor structuring of this book failed to truly communicate the story behind that woman.
Was this book interesting? Certainly, because Osipensko’s life was interesting. Could this book have done so much more? Yes, absolutely.