What the Marquess Sees by Amy Quinton is the second book in her Agents of Change Series. I haven't had the opportunity to read the first book, but this one was easily read as a stand alone one.
The story revolves around Cliff, The Marquess of Dansbury, who is a spy for the Crown. At the beginning of the story he has his first encounter with Lady Beatryce Beckett. From the shadows on a patio he sees her and immediately falls in lust with her. He is fascinated by her, but before he gets an opportunity to meet her, he finds out through a conversation he overhears her having, that she is actually a horrible woman, one who has no qualms about destroying people's reputations.
A year later Beatryce is set to wed Ambrose, The Duke of Stonebridge, who is a good friend of the Marquess. It's an arranged marriage, and Ambrose is actually in love with another woman, Grace. At the last minute much to Cliff's amazement, but happiness, Ambrose comes to his senses and decides he can't go through with the marriage. Bea is horrified when she finds out because The Duke was to be her escape from her wicked father, who not only made her the way she is, but who also is part of a secret society that Cliff has been investigating for the Crown. Bea has a lot of information about what her father has done or knows about, including murder, and now that her marriage and means of escape has been taken away from her she is frightened for her life.
She beseeches the Marquess to help her escape her father and lets him know that she has all the information about the society and her father that he could want. He doesn't want to help her, but when Bea's father is murdered and the assassin sends a note to her implying she is next, he knows he must help keep her safe, and that is how the pair are thrust together in this story.
From there there is mystery and intrigue and a few huge twists that I didn't see coming about who is trying to get to Bea. All the way through the book there is a sense of peril because the couple are on the run. And of course, as this is a romance book, there are feelings developing between the couple despite neither of them wanting them. There are some very passionate love making scenes too, and here lies the main negative thing I have to say about this book. The scenes were too much like erotica for my tastes. Some too in-depth descriptiveness which just wasn't necessary in a book of this type.
The other problem I have with this book is that some of the wording and scenes seemed too modern for the time era the story takes place in. Bea exercises to work off her upset and stress, doing sit ups, push ups and the such. Did women even know of those exercises back then? As for the modern words, they were ones like ass, buns, blockhead, stuff it, and f**k you. They just didn't sit right in the story. At times it felt like a contemporary author was making her first attempt at historical romance, and it just didn't meld.
That said, I still loved the story, and particularly enjoyed some of the funny scenes in the book that had me laughing out loud. I also would still highly recommend this book but with a little aside telling you to expect the erotica and the modern phrasing here and there.
I was given a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.