A-MA-ZING.
It was tense. Lip biting worthy. I did have lots of qualms with the main character's choices but it was really good. REally REALLY good.
And speaking of our MC Tory- note to everyone: If someone likes you and you don't like them back or aren't sure if you do: TELL THEM THAT. It saves so much anguish and awkwardness if you just spell out plainly and bluntly. They react badly, their loss but you did the right thing and you'll feel better for it. Trust me.
Quickly without spoilers: I'm a little disappointed that Ella was mostly plot device. She was a great character, don't get me wrong, but I'm really disappointed that she only came in on this book (and that we didn't hear anything of the soccer stuff) and not before. I'm not the biggest fan of sudden character appearance importance (SUCAI) in books. Makes me really annoyed. If Ella doesn't continue to play a large roll, or at least a Taylor-sized roll within this book, I'm gonna have problems.
Helpful hint if you're about to read this book or whatever- when you get to "part 4: Jeopardy" and you're really confused who's talking, here's the POV switch in order from chapter 43 to chapter 48:
Shelton -- Tory -- Ben -- Tory -- Hi -- Tory
--Spoilers--
So, obviously this one took me a while to finish but I can promise the next one won't take me forever. BECAUSE OH MY GOSH THAT ENDING. So I accidentally spoiled the whole Chance-reveal thing at the end for myself (wait to go me) but I'd already been expecting it after that excerpt from Chance's POV in the beginning but I had thought of it as, like, a threat, or something. NOT resignation. I definitely didn't see the whole "you have access to everything now- please try and fix this" spiel either. YIKES
Can I cave the twins' heads in, please? PLEASE? The fact that they thought they could control a COP and not just any cop, but HAWFIELD, is SO dumb. And that scene where we saw Hawfield's mind was... like watching a scene from 'Criminal Minds'. I agreed with Tory's assessment though. Killing him was involuntary, but because of his actions and his attempts, it was earned. He was not a good man. He was not even a man. He was a dirty, conniving, horrible animal.
Tory and Ben's forgiving each other/opening up to each other scene was perfect and sweet (and, naturally, ruined by her father). His anguish was so palpable I was near tears. Tory's release of feelings afterwards DID make me cry. That whole scene was what I had been waiting for out of that subplot and Reichs paid dually.
And, of course, we can't talk about that scene without talking about--
BENJAMIN AND VICTORIA. THAT KISS. OH, MY GOSH. AHHHHHH okay. I'm normal again. I think.
nOPE. YAYAYAYAYAY Her and Ben are... Ben's 'stupid grin' was the most innocent and sweetest thing I've read in forever. After all his panic, all his anger and the whole debacle of this book of whether or not she should forgive Ben and face the music (aka his feelings for her and hers for him), that scene made up for it all. I was so happy- I was pretty much Ben for that whole end of the book (until the sledgehammer named Chance Claybourne came around). And the way she did it too!! 'It's totally you" had me grinning probably as stupidly as Ben. Ben is most certainly a hero and that kiss definitely settled any leftover nervousness between the two of them. Also, Tory's response to Ella afterwards of her convincing statement being "a surprise" made me so giddy.