“…I was just lost in the rapture of having the man who gave me everything I ever wanted. He knew me better than I knew myself.”
Opens with yet more unpleasantness with Deacon. Accompanied by his henchman, they take a straight guy against his will. Then there’s his churlish verbiage and insistent attention to females.
Elijah is really trying hard, but his mate is a callous douche. Whether it’s the cringe disciplining of Slade or the groan-worthy push and pull with Elijah, Deacon remains a serious drag on this series.
In later chapters, the pain “play” and water sports render sections nearly unreadable. Deacon has zero chemistry with Elijah, and it’s grating.
Alright…Josef. I admit—when I saw another werewolf POV, I was not exactly pumped. But Josef is surprisingly well-written. He doesn’t have the magnetism of Theoden or the relatability of Noel, but he’s levels and levels above the cretin that is Deacon.
Josef is a demanding power bottom. His POV is hot, and he’s nothing like how Deacon describes him.
Noel and Theoden remain fire together. Excellent detail, and the share of energy is always compelling.
Dante is slowly learning.
Noel is maturing—and he drops a bombshell revelation on Theoden! Theoden is delighted with Noel’s progress, both in general and with Marco’s tutelage.
Noel and Lady Adeline…not good. Marco’s brutality is, for once, welcome.
“I love you.”