Overview – “Dark Aemilia” is a story about a strong and passionate woman, is extremely well researched, and proposes that perhaps Aemilia Bassano was the woman behind Shakespeare’s musings. However, I found few good character moments in the storyline and felt that more detail should have been given to the process of Aemilia’s writing craft. I was so excited to read this story but was sadly let down.
Part 1: Passion – There is no depth or emotion. The characters continually jump into bed together and make stupid choices. When did Amelia fall in love with Will Shakespeare? The only “out of bed” moment was when he was criticizing her poetry. And they never really talked nicely or lovey-dovey to each other. Aemilia is supposedly learned, and I thought this would come out with her moments with Shakespeare (especially as he fleshes out plays – I wanted some of this as I used to study Shakespeare in college!), but she ends up being more of a bragger and insulter than a doer.
Additionally, there were lots of lewd comments and name calling. The main character makes stupid choices ("this guy seems to want to rape me, but I'm going to stay and have a glass of wine and read him my poems"). And I really got frustrated with the overuse of the word "cunt," which I'm not a fan of.
The preview of the book states: The daughter of a Venetian musician, Aemilia Bassano came of age in Queen Elizabeth’s royal court. The Queen’s favorite, she develops a love of poetry and learning, maturing into a young woman known not only for her beauty but also her sharp mind and quick tongue. None of this was in the book! This is the stuff I wanted and expected to read about! How did she become the queen’s favorite? What does it feel like to play a virginal instrument for the queen? What books of learning were her favorite and where did she study them? Nothing. So this book does not give the reader a chance to get to know the character. It portrays her only as a prostitute and never rises above this, which is extremely disappointing if you’re trying to build an interesting and strong female protagonist. Aemilia even refers to herself often in derogatory and condescending terms.
I will state that the verbiage feels very authentic and helps to set the historical stage. I appreciate the terms and vernacular use in Aemilia’s thoughts, metaphors, and phrases (at the same time, less use of the “f” word and other fornication terms would be welcome). However, the vocab list at the back of the book should be expanded. A lot of words are missed. And while it states around the title pages that there are maps, no such maps are in the advanced reader copies sadly (I really like historical maps).
Part 2: Prophecy & Part 3: Petulance - I'm glad to be past the "passion" part of the story where love and sex seems to be the same thing. In these new chapters, Aemilia’s son is 10 years old, and he’s a manipulative hellion. He calls his mom a whore and says to her that he needs to climb trees, play with dead frogs like footballs, and blind cats “like all normal boys do.” I was disgusted. He wants to participate in the bawdy and lewd entertainment including following plague carts? I know motherly love knows no bounds, but Henry makes it hard for the audience to connect with. This boy seems much older than 10 and extremely ill-witted.
I feel like the author knows a great deal about this time period but does not respect it. Every character is a stereotype. Priests, papists, players, and common people are all lacking manners and morals. Almost every interaction is vulgar. And the word “dugs” is grating on my nerves.
Aemilia’s servant, Joan, is the only appealing character in these chapters. She’s made mistakes in the past, has learned from them, and lives her life to help others. Her sacrifice is very heartrending, though I would have been fine with less gore. While its brief, the author choses her words carefully to make the action very succinct and easy to picture.
Part 3: Philosophy – It amazes me how Aemilia continues to be rather brash, stubborn, and does not listen to others. She never learns. She prays to God when it’s convenient but expects instant results. I understand how she does not want to be tamed by the world, but her personality is rather frustrating.
The story itself has a rather stunted flow to it. I’m glad the author included a brief history of events by date; otherwise, I would not have known certain things which happened including Alfonso’s first sailing expedition. When I read their discussion of this venture, I had no idea when it had happened and had to stop and review the author’s timeline. These timelines are usually reserved for events outside of the character’s lives, so I’m not sure if the author intended to use the timeline as a substitute for writing about certain events? The second expedition was mentioned prior to it occurring, but many events never seem to happen during the chapters though were mentioned afterwards. The only event experienced firsthand was Elizabeth’s death and funeral. This makes the storyline come across as piecemeal.
At one point, it seems like Aemilia is finally learning something about forgiveness and humbling her anger. But then, after knowing she missed a meeting with Will, she reads a spiteful letter to her about how hurt he by what happened, and she goes back to her old pride-filled ways again. Thus, she calls upon a demon to exact revenge... including on her neighbor's son who's always been a loyal friend!!! She has just seen Tom Flood ask for forgiveness for his ways, blames himself for his children’s deformity, and commits himself to the woman he loves and the conjoined twins she birthed. Yet she gives the demon HIS name for revenge? I really lost all respect for her when she let his name slip. He did not intentionally steal her play! His fate would have had more of an emotional punch if he had not been mentioned to Lilith.
Part 4: Poetry – The last two scenes in this section were beautiful. I think I felt this because the gruesome and graphic elements were avoided. It was focused on Aemilia and her emotions. However, the publication of her first poetry book was rather rushed. I thought the point of the book was for her to accomplish her dream of getting published, and we never got the payoff when it finally happened after much persecution and doubt. Men would laugh at her when she mentioned writing, yet when it happens, there was no written emotional reaction. It just sort of happened one day without a hitch. I was disappointed that the process which brought to fruition her historic poems, making her the first published female poet, were not fleshed out. And I wanted more of them included.
To my surprise, I was left completely breathless by a couple heartfelt moments. The last pages at the re-built Globe were illustrated with care and love. I enjoyed Aemilia’s observations before Burbage walked out. I think this was a great ending. However, it made it feel more like Shakespeare’s story than hers as it ended as a tribute to him.
But the moment that made this book for me was when the shades were opened. Aemilia comes to say her goodbyes to a dying Shakespeare. Sadly, since their parting, he has become badly burned from the fire at the Globe. When she walks into the room where he is dying, the shades are drawn, so she cannot see his face. At the end of their dialogue, he asks her to draw the shades. But instead of detailing how he looks now, the author substitutes this for a memory of Aemilia’s. It was a moment from when they were newly in love. So rather than seeing a burned face, the author gives us a tanned and youthful face full of love for the title character. It illustrates how Aemilia finally looks at him with her heart. I teared up when I read this and sometimes tear up just thinking about how tender this moment was. Finally, we see true love. I never got the impression Aemilia understood this until that point. Very, very well written. A truly poetic and emotionally-charged sequence. This memory is our last encounter of Shakespeare, and it’s the best part of the story.
Summary - So much more of this book could have been like these last chapters. The vulgarity was not necessary at all. It would have been nice to focus more on the craft of writing than the sex. Shakespeare and Aemilia had in common a love of the written word. Molding them together through this art would have really shown depth to their characters and relationships. I never felt their connection. But we do not get the development of this. We only get their lusty moments. This book could have been great, but I think the author focused on the wrong aspects. I do not want to read about Aemilia’s dirty thoughts or her bed habits. I want to read about her love of poetry and how this relates to her everyday life. Do certain places inspire her? What barriers does she overcome to bring the words to life (as this was a problem for her at the beginning of the story)?
The author did a great bit of research, but most of the story is fabricated (and she admits this). I appreciated her details to the small elements of life from that time period. I loved the rich vernacular that felt authentic to the period. I liked seeing Shakespeare’s plays come to life. But overall, Aemilia’s character did not show much growth. She was the same stubborn, headstrong, crass person from start to finish.
A lot of aspects are hit upon the book, but nothing is ever really focused on for long. There are the monarchs, there’s the religious bigotry, the plagues, MacBeth forgery, witchcraft, scientifically-created humans, demons, etc. It’s like O’Reilly wants to do a lot of things but does not give time enough to give these elements meaning. So I was not sure what the author was trying to get across by including such a vast array of plot elements. None of them ever get a resolution.
I remember when I was in “Romeo and Juliet” in college, and some of the other actors were extremely serious about NOT mentioning “MacBeth” behind the scenes. You could not say the word without fear of cursing the production. I thought it was interesting how the author brought this to life and never really answered if it was supernatural or natural causes to the curse upon “MacBeth.” Either way, I liked the exploration.
I would probably read another story by this author. Her attention to detail is superb. However, I hope there is more focus on other emotions besides lust and other actions than nighttime rendezvouses.