a sweet perfectionist attempts to give his hockey-playing beau a romantic, holiday proposal to remember
From the description, I thought this story might not be the type I would like, but I was very pleasantly surprised at how much I enjoyed it. The repeated attempts to propose came across as sweet, earnest, and realistically disastrous. Despite the overwhelming presence of this plot device dominating the short story, the ending still seemed nicely sweet and romantic and the characters' chemistry boiled nicely (if a bit schmatzly).