As an avid mafia romance reviewer, I must say this is the first one I’ve read that featured the Irish Mafioso on the soil of their very own mother land, The Emerald Isle. It was quite a refreshing twist of location. Along with references to across the pond, dear old Boston, where Lar’s and Moira first met and a past fatal attack occurred killing a member of the hero’s family and supposedly her, as well. This same incident interconnected with a deadly bombing in Dublin decades earlier, which killed most of Moira’s family when she was only eight years old. Are you confused yet? Wait, there’s more! Also still cloaked in mystery, just waiting to be solved, is exactly who ordered the hit on Lar’s mother when he was just a lad. For you see, nothing ever appears to be as it seems. Moira is not only not dead, but she’s not the person Lar’s thought she was when he fell for her. In the case of the attacks, neither are the alleged master minds.
There were so many twists and turns and sub-characters I’m not even going to attempt to navigate you through them all, folks. I’ll just say it was one of the more complicated, intriguing multiple plots I’ve come across in quite some time. Instead I feel more inclined to focus on the main characters and the writing style, the good, the bad, and the ugly.
**spoilers possible**
Unfortunately, the heroine broke one of my important book character rules of conduct. You see, I prefer my heroines keep their self-respect/dignity at all times, in regards to not only their personal life, but their profession, as well. It did not sit well with me Moira would lower herself to work as a stripper and even have sex with men if that’s what it took to get the job done. By her own admission, it seemed to be a common occurrence. Meaning, by whatever means necessary, she would use her body, give away a piece of her soul, to complete the mission. Surely such a highly intelligent, resourceful MI6 agent would be more creative than that.
There were also some minor things that irritated me in a major way. Lar fathering a child at age 14 with a 17 year old girl. That notion/image doesn’t sit well with me, at all. Frankly, there was enough going on with this story, it just wasn’t necessary to add that unwelcome element, along with his teenage daughter walking in on them during an intimate moment. Again, it served no point. Then there was a very crass/crude opening scene with a sub-character that will likely offend many readers. I almost stopped reading right then and there. He seemed to always be caught with his pants down, figuratively and literally. Some may consider it humorous. I found it juvenile/crass.
By 70% into it, I noticed the writing style was starting to come across as a little choppy and bland. Like maybe even the author was getting tired of trying to piece everything together. I started to wonder if it was worth finishing. Now that I have and can reflect back, I can honestly say there were so many interesting sub-plots interwoven I’m not really sure which one was the main plot or if it really matters, because I did want to see each one resolved. I just question some of the delivery of it. The romance portion definitely took a backseat to all the drama. It ends with a HEA for the main couple but also an ominous cliffhanger that definitely leaves you with the impression it could be short lived. Someone close to them is going to be a threat to their new found happiness and an unidentified nemesis is about to step out of the shadows, as well. Yes, if my sources are correct, “Kiss Shot” will be the sequel featuring Shane, the hero’s cousin and business partner.
I hope I haven’t overly confused you. I’m still somewhat conflicted on how to rate this one. I enjoyed it but found it a little overwhelming at times. There was a lot to keep track of, my romance book-loving friends. Also, the issues I mentioned above definitely affect my rating, as well. Here’s to hoping you decide for yourself if Final Target earns a spot on your bookshelf.
Title: Final Target, Series: Dublin Mafia: Triskelion Team, Book 1, Author: Zara Keane, Pages: 242, stand-alone, some violence, very steamy scenes, no cheating, no OW/OM drama.
(This review is based on ARC generously provided via NetGalley in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. No compensation was paid to the reviewer nor is there any affiliation between the reviewer and author/publisher.)