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Boundaries #1
Out of Bounds
When the weather outside starts cooling down, inside the dorm things are heating up. Can these college roommates fall in love without going out of bounds?
Beaten and heartbroken, Jesse Cole is placed in a new dorm room after his last roommate attacked him. Just wanting to be left alone to heal in peace, he's shocked when tall, dark and dangerous-looking Nick Moretti walks in.
Nick doesn't have time to tiptoe around his new roommate—he's too busy working in order to pay for school. But something about Jesse brings out his protective instincts. As their cautious friendship grows and becomes loaded with sexual tension, he wants to make Jesse comfortable.
Enter the perfect plan: a line of tape down the center of the room. Boundaries established.
But as innocent movie nights become hours-long temptation marathons, and whispered chats from across the room delve into straight-up dirty territory, crossing the line has never been so satisfying.
Beaten and heartbroken, Jesse Cole is placed in a new dorm room after his last roommate attacked him. Just wanting to be left alone to heal in peace, he's shocked when tall, dark and dangerous-looking Nick Moretti walks in.
Nick doesn't have time to tiptoe around his new roommate—he's too busy working in order to pay for school. But something about Jesse brings out his protective instincts. As their cautious friendship grows and becomes loaded with sexual tension, he wants to make Jesse comfortable.
Enter the perfect plan: a line of tape down the center of the room. Boundaries established.
But as innocent movie nights become hours-long temptation marathons, and whispered chats from across the room delve into straight-up dirty territory, crossing the line has never been so satisfying.
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First published March 14, 2016
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March 20, 2016
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2.5 Hearts--Dear "Out of Bounds",
After being subjected to that phrase a gazillion (maybe less than gazillion but boy was I smothered), I'm just going to refer you to as OOB. Are you cool with that, OOB?
It's cool. I'm not a hugger anyway.
OOB...*deep breath* I want you to know something. I like a good number of genres but New Adult has a special place with me. See, I gorged myself when the genre was in its infancy. Imagine all the het college romances that is. And I'm not going to lie, OOB...I might revisit from time to time. Because I sometimes like to read about the crazy kids juggling trying to adult, life and a borderline ignorant alpha hero mixed in from time to time.
What? What was that? Oh you think you have a possessive alpha in this novel? Really? *smirks*
OOB, I'm going to get into your 6' 6" alpha-ish main character, Nick Moretti, soon.
Let's get the triggers out the way, huh OOB? Triggers: gay bashing, PTSD
OOB is a first time MM venture by het romance author, A.R. Barley. Set in New York, it starts with nineteen year-old Jesse who was gay bashed by his roommate. He is rescued by a buff, hunky older RA, Kelly and placed in the only open spot in the senior dorms. His new roommate, Nick Moretti, is older by 5 years, has a past (abandoned by his only parent in his teens, on the streets since) and doesn't do relationships. Nick is the antisocial bear to Jesse's twink virgin. Sounds good, am I right, OOB? Who doesn't love reading the antisocial, gruff, big guy who can't emote?
OOB? After reading you, you're what I call serviceable.
I don't think you'll appeal to every MM reader, probably best for first timers who are crossing over from MF.
OOB follows a tried and true plot device - start with with a damaged protag, place together with a "bad boy" alpha-like male, have them talk but not actually talk, insert outside drama and voilà, you have a relationship. But underneath the candy coated facade, there are cracks, OOB. And sometimes, the story can be good enough to outshine the story's flaws. Not the case with you, OOB, that tape in the middle of the room trick could only work for so long.
Nick is allegedly a thug and I'm guessing street smart but...I've had sandwiches that were more street savvy, OOB. He wouldn't last on the streets for long since he told more than did anything that showcased his alleged tragic past. Living on the streets would have made him tougher, no?
Now, I left the MF New Adult lane years ago because the plots became tepid copies of one another, OOB. There was a certain writing style that became more prevalent - more emotional based, relying on drama to get the story moving kind of style. The external conflict would have no relevance to the romance sometimes.
Can you believe it, OOB? Well pick up your lip, because you had this going on at times too, OOB.
I know, I know, you had some things going for you. You were very easy to read. Super easy. And the friendship development between the main characters was nice. Granted, the sex was hot. I mean, frottage and handjobs always has that certain something. I'm a fan of the hands.
And deflowering.
And versatile couples.
So for OOB, you get a B for the sex. Wear your grade with pride.
Your secondary characters though, OOB. *heavy sigh*
They weren't written to their potential. I didn't like the way Jesse spoke sometimes especially to his mother. Kelly, the savior RA, played a major role in Nick's life and it was kinda mailing it in toward the end. Wasted potential because there was too much telling. FYI, OOB - you're a first timer in the MM genre. I'll make it real easy as an example - if you and I were a couple and our straight friend offered to be a third, do you think that would be acceptable? No? (Better not be, OOB, I'm a little possessive.) So why would a gay friend offer to be a third in Jesse and Nick's relationship? Why would a gay stranger ask that too?
OOB, you know what would have made you a better read for me? Nixing the ridiculous external conflicts. Your main characters were supposed to have enough development to carry the story. You don't need silly bar fights, non communication after the main characters talked for weeks and ridiculous misunderstandings. You cheapened the story with that stuff.
You had some inconsistencies too, OOB. Don't look at me that way! You're the one that had your characters saying "out of bounds" every other minute in between wearing cherry lip balm all the time! You made me hate cherry lip balm for an entire day from your overkill. Once or twice is fine but anything more than that is redundant. And that purple prose, OOB? You got really flowery at times and I doubt many 19 year old boys would speak in some of those older terms.
And what's up with wearing feminine like clothes as a punishment? Not cool, OOB. Besides it not being cool, if Nick works in a drag bar, why would he see it as something bad? Or how about Jesse suffering from PTSD including having panic attacks yet he has no problem traveling in a plane across country. That's a 6 hour flight, OOB. He nearly passed out from strangers touching him and states he doesn't want to be in enclosed spaces...so when you figure that out, get back to me, okay?
The story had cute moments. It got the job done. Doesn't really offer anything memorable. And the PTSD and angst is too easily overcome and solved, OOB. The villain just apologizes after his homophobic slurs and all is forgiven. Really? The victim just lets their tormentor get off like that? You just--
Look at me. *smh* I could go on and on about your flaws, OOB. But here's the thing, there is possible potential in this writing. I mean I'm possibly going to read your sequel, OOB, though if the writing style doesn't improve (oh dear, I'm afraid there will be kink brought in), I'm pretty sure I'll be out...of...bounds.
Damn it! Look what you made me say!
OOB, you seriously have me considering creating a shelf titled - "fence books" - you know where I could probably talk myself into loving or hating it. I'm so in the middle of the fence with you.
OOB, you're best for NA lovers who don't mind underdeveloped characters and like this type of writing style, those looking for a quick escape and don't want to bust their brain.
For a first time MM book, it could have been worse.
Bet you're happy we skipped that hug.
Sincerely,
SRAL
P.S. Try other flavor lip balms once in awhile. There is more to life than cherry.
A copy provided for an honest review via Netgalley
2.5 Hearts--Dear "Out of Bounds",
After being subjected to that phrase a gazillion (maybe less than gazillion but boy was I smothered), I'm just going to refer you to as OOB. Are you cool with that, OOB?
It's cool. I'm not a hugger anyway.
OOB...*deep breath* I want you to know something. I like a good number of genres but New Adult has a special place with me. See, I gorged myself when the genre was in its infancy. Imagine all the het college romances that is. And I'm not going to lie, OOB...I might revisit from time to time. Because I sometimes like to read about the crazy kids juggling trying to adult, life and a borderline ignorant alpha hero mixed in from time to time.
What? What was that? Oh you think you have a possessive alpha in this novel? Really? *smirks*
OOB, I'm going to get into your 6' 6" alpha-ish main character, Nick Moretti, soon.
Let's get the triggers out the way, huh OOB? Triggers: gay bashing, PTSD
OOB is a first time MM venture by het romance author, A.R. Barley. Set in New York, it starts with nineteen year-old Jesse who was gay bashed by his roommate. He is rescued by a buff, hunky older RA, Kelly and placed in the only open spot in the senior dorms. His new roommate, Nick Moretti, is older by 5 years, has a past (abandoned by his only parent in his teens, on the streets since) and doesn't do relationships. Nick is the antisocial bear to Jesse's twink virgin. Sounds good, am I right, OOB? Who doesn't love reading the antisocial, gruff, big guy who can't emote?
OOB? After reading you, you're what I call serviceable.
I don't think you'll appeal to every MM reader, probably best for first timers who are crossing over from MF.
OOB follows a tried and true plot device - start with with a damaged protag, place together with a "bad boy" alpha-like male, have them talk but not actually talk, insert outside drama and voilà, you have a relationship. But underneath the candy coated facade, there are cracks, OOB. And sometimes, the story can be good enough to outshine the story's flaws. Not the case with you, OOB, that tape in the middle of the room trick could only work for so long.
Nick is allegedly a thug and I'm guessing street smart but...I've had sandwiches that were more street savvy, OOB. He wouldn't last on the streets for long since he told more than did anything that showcased his alleged tragic past. Living on the streets would have made him tougher, no?
Now, I left the MF New Adult lane years ago because the plots became tepid copies of one another, OOB. There was a certain writing style that became more prevalent - more emotional based, relying on drama to get the story moving kind of style. The external conflict would have no relevance to the romance sometimes.
Can you believe it, OOB? Well pick up your lip, because you had this going on at times too, OOB.
I know, I know, you had some things going for you. You were very easy to read. Super easy. And the friendship development between the main characters was nice. Granted, the sex was hot. I mean, frottage and handjobs always has that certain something. I'm a fan of the hands.
And deflowering.
And versatile couples.
So for OOB, you get a B for the sex. Wear your grade with pride.
Your secondary characters though, OOB. *heavy sigh*
They weren't written to their potential. I didn't like the way Jesse spoke sometimes especially to his mother. Kelly, the savior RA, played a major role in Nick's life and it was kinda mailing it in toward the end. Wasted potential because there was too much telling. FYI, OOB - you're a first timer in the MM genre. I'll make it real easy as an example - if you and I were a couple and our straight friend offered to be a third, do you think that would be acceptable? No? (Better not be, OOB, I'm a little possessive.) So why would a gay friend offer to be a third in Jesse and Nick's relationship? Why would a gay stranger ask that too?
OOB, you know what would have made you a better read for me? Nixing the ridiculous external conflicts. Your main characters were supposed to have enough development to carry the story. You don't need silly bar fights, non communication after the main characters talked for weeks and ridiculous misunderstandings. You cheapened the story with that stuff.
You had some inconsistencies too, OOB. Don't look at me that way! You're the one that had your characters saying "out of bounds" every other minute in between wearing cherry lip balm all the time! You made me hate cherry lip balm for an entire day from your overkill. Once or twice is fine but anything more than that is redundant. And that purple prose, OOB? You got really flowery at times and I doubt many 19 year old boys would speak in some of those older terms.
And what's up with wearing feminine like clothes as a punishment? Not cool, OOB. Besides it not being cool, if Nick works in a drag bar, why would he see it as something bad? Or how about Jesse suffering from PTSD including having panic attacks yet he has no problem traveling in a plane across country. That's a 6 hour flight, OOB. He nearly passed out from strangers touching him and states he doesn't want to be in enclosed spaces...so when you figure that out, get back to me, okay?
The story had cute moments. It got the job done. Doesn't really offer anything memorable. And the PTSD and angst is too easily overcome and solved, OOB. The villain just apologizes after his homophobic slurs and all is forgiven. Really? The victim just lets their tormentor get off like that? You just--
Look at me. *smh* I could go on and on about your flaws, OOB. But here's the thing, there is possible potential in this writing. I mean I'm possibly going to read your sequel, OOB, though if the writing style doesn't improve (oh dear, I'm afraid there will be kink brought in), I'm pretty sure I'll be out...of...bounds.
Damn it! Look what you made me say!
OOB, you seriously have me considering creating a shelf titled - "fence books" - you know where I could probably talk myself into loving or hating it. I'm so in the middle of the fence with you.
OOB, you're best for NA lovers who don't mind underdeveloped characters and like this type of writing style, those looking for a quick escape and don't want to bust their brain.
For a first time MM book, it could have been worse.
Bet you're happy we skipped that hug.
Sincerely,
SRAL
P.S. Try other flavor lip balms once in awhile. There is more to life than cherry.
A copy provided for an honest review via Netgalley
January 22, 2016
~3.5~
I loved the juxtaposition of slightly feminine Jesse with rough-n-tumble Nick. In general, I found Nick to be a more sympathetic character than Jesse, even though Jesse's the one who gets hurt.
Nick has a chip on his shoulder and feels unworthy because he used to make money fighting. Jesse doesn't like violence and tells Nick that if he fights he'll be "out of bounds," which is their code for a line (literal and metaphorical) you can't cross.
Jesse moves into Nick's dorm room halfway through fall semester after his roommate & BFF freaks out on him (clearly, Ryan is gay, closeted, and ashamed, but his reaction felt over the top).
Nick takes care of Jesse, and the two move from tentative friendship to relationship. I think this happened too fast. Jesse went from not knowing Nick was gay to a mutual masturbation session faster than you can say hello. Granted, that scene was hot squared, but it sort of came out of nowhere.
This book wasn't peppered with steam and more steam, but the couple included scenes were well done and sexy as fuck. Jesse's fear and reticence clearly doesn't extend to sex.
The ending is a solid HEA. There's talk of forever and puppies (okay, not the latter, but it's the natural order of things: Let's be together. FOREVER. And get a puppy).
The drag queens at the club where Nick works as a bouncer are all kinds of fabulous. I have a feeling sexy Latin boy is going to be an MC in a later book.
There's a lot to like here, but I had issues (no real spoilers, but this review is long enough):
In terms of readability, this book easily gets 4+ stars. I couldn't put it down. But there were also too many improbable plot points that I couldn't overlook.
I'm still rounding UP because the story is well written, and I will definitely read the next book in the series.
I loved the juxtaposition of slightly feminine Jesse with rough-n-tumble Nick. In general, I found Nick to be a more sympathetic character than Jesse, even though Jesse's the one who gets hurt.
Nick has a chip on his shoulder and feels unworthy because he used to make money fighting. Jesse doesn't like violence and tells Nick that if he fights he'll be "out of bounds," which is their code for a line (literal and metaphorical) you can't cross.
Jesse moves into Nick's dorm room halfway through fall semester after his roommate & BFF freaks out on him (clearly, Ryan is gay, closeted, and ashamed, but his reaction felt over the top).
Nick takes care of Jesse, and the two move from tentative friendship to relationship. I think this happened too fast. Jesse went from not knowing Nick was gay to a mutual masturbation session faster than you can say hello. Granted, that scene was hot squared, but it sort of came out of nowhere.
This book wasn't peppered with steam and more steam, but the couple included scenes were well done and sexy as fuck. Jesse's fear and reticence clearly doesn't extend to sex.
The ending is a solid HEA. There's talk of forever and puppies (okay, not the latter, but it's the natural order of things: Let's be together. FOREVER. And get a puppy).
The drag queens at the club where Nick works as a bouncer are all kinds of fabulous. I have a feeling sexy Latin boy is going to be an MC in a later book.
There's a lot to like here, but I had issues (no real spoilers, but this review is long enough):
In terms of readability, this book easily gets 4+ stars. I couldn't put it down. But there were also too many improbable plot points that I couldn't overlook.
I'm still rounding UP because the story is well written, and I will definitely read the next book in the series.
September 13, 2016
I loved established M/F author Aleah Barley's first foray into writing M/M (under the pen name A.R. Barley). I saw the book on NetGalley and was immediately pulled in by the blurb.
This story was so touching, tender and full of feels that the book grabbed my attention and held on from the very first chapter.
As the story begins, 19 y.o. Jesse has been severely beaten by his roommate, Ryan, after mistakenly taking his flirty behavior as the green light for a kiss.
Jesse then flees into the cold night and is discovered by Kelly, a resident assistant in a senior dorm, and taken to the hospital to be patched up.
But the interesting parts of the story truly begin when Kelly places Jesse in a room with Kelly's gruff, people-hating ex-boyfriend, Nick.
Nick is a huge, muscle-bound bruiser, with a penchant for getting into fights, so Jesse is immediately hesitant to relax around his new, much larger roommate and trust the guy.
However, Nick's been kicked in the teeth by the world a few times himself in his 24 years, so he recognizes Jesse's fragile state and puts forth a very uncharacteristic extra effort to make him feel comfortable in his new home.
And home is really what I ultimately saw this book as being about. Feeling entirely lost and adrift, then connecting with that one person who makes you feel whole again. Like you are genuinely cared for, cherished and loved.
Finally safe. Finally home.
I adored seeing how strong and committed that Nick was to a very shaken Jesse for the majority of the story, then how, at the end, it was Jesse who found the strength that the two needed to persevere when things got tough.
To me, that give and take was very realistic and I loved it. Plus, as an added bonus, the quiet, insecure Jesse turned out not to be quite so timid when push came to a big ole' sexy shove, either.
The naughty bits of the story weren't in every chapter, but when they did make an appearance, they were invariably smoking HOT.
The steamy scene where the boys come together (quite literally, oops) across the line of gaffers tape, put down to bisect the room into Jesse's side and Nick's side to help Jesse feel safe? With Nick ending up on his knees?
Sweet. Baby. Jesus. That was some insane heat on-page right there, people.
Plus, the scenes where Jesse loses first his bottoming virginity, then later on his topping virginity. Wow.
My one and only niggle was the fairly heavy-handed use of the " out of bounds " phrase (pretty sure that I counted 33 times), which sort of came across as being repeatedly flicked on the nose with the book title. So I personally wouldn't have minded that being dialed back a notch or two.
But, other than that small peeve, I found the book to be pretty perfect, with just the right touch of soft and hard for my tastes, so a very solid 4.25 *mine-mine-mine-mine* stars for this fun and flirty story of finding your other half and holding on with all you've got.
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My ARC copy of the book was provided by the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for a fair, unbiased review.
May 23, 2016
3.5 Stars!
I've been meaning to read this one forever, and as usual it got lost in the shuffle. But I was in the mood for something with a college setting and this one fit the bill.
I can't say it wowed me or anything but it was definitely an easy, entertaining read with a nice bit of steam.
Overall low angst and drama.
On the shorter side, at just around 150 pages. Both MCs were likable. Some of the secondary characters however, were not. Not sure I can bring myself to read Kelly's book.
So no complaints really with this one. It worked for my Sunday afternoon read!
I've been meaning to read this one forever, and as usual it got lost in the shuffle. But I was in the mood for something with a college setting and this one fit the bill.
I can't say it wowed me or anything but it was definitely an easy, entertaining read with a nice bit of steam.
Overall low angst and drama.
On the shorter side, at just around 150 pages. Both MCs were likable. Some of the secondary characters however, were not. Not sure I can bring myself to read Kelly's book.
So no complaints really with this one. It worked for my Sunday afternoon read!
March 29, 2016
Out of Bounds is the first M/M offering from author A.R. Barley or Aleah Barley, as is her M/F pen name. And while I'm ALWAYS excited when an author branches out and writes something that stretches their abilities, I think that this wasn't the best first M/M for her.
I was immediately drawn in when I saw the blurb to this book and was really excited to start it. I mean, I like a good hurt/comfort book as much as the next gal, and the whole "college roommates getting it on" theme is a favorite of mine. However, I had a lot of issues with this one.
First of all, there was something that felt inauthentic about Jesse and his relationship with anxiety. For what he experienced, I would have expected things to move a lot more slowly than they did with Nick. Jesse was skiddish about certain things but then oddly relaxed about other things, and I couldn't make total sense of his character. Nick was also incredibly frustrating. I hated his misplaced guilt, his angsty-angst, and his total lack of communication skills. He didn't come across as deep or multi-layered, rather he just seemed ill-formed as a character. The relationship between the two MCs was... okay. The sex leap seemed too soon and I guess there was chemistry there, but I really had to reach to feel it.
I also had issues with the secondary characters. Ryan came across as bipolar or something. He really didn't make much sense as a character, and I struggled a lot to understand him. Also, I thought more could have been done with Kelly and the bar owner. They just seemed like pawns and not well conceived.
Finally, the writing. The constant use of the phrase out of bounds seriously grated on me. I mean, yeah, we get that it's the title of the book! We get it! It isn't clever anymore after the first couple of times, and it got to be pretty annoying. The prose also went a little purple at times for my tastes.
All in all, this book wasn't bad but I wouldn't call it good either. I've read many better college boy M/M books in my day.
**Copy provided in exchange for an honest review**
I was immediately drawn in when I saw the blurb to this book and was really excited to start it. I mean, I like a good hurt/comfort book as much as the next gal, and the whole "college roommates getting it on" theme is a favorite of mine. However, I had a lot of issues with this one.
First of all, there was something that felt inauthentic about Jesse and his relationship with anxiety. For what he experienced, I would have expected things to move a lot more slowly than they did with Nick. Jesse was skiddish about certain things but then oddly relaxed about other things, and I couldn't make total sense of his character. Nick was also incredibly frustrating. I hated his misplaced guilt, his angsty-angst, and his total lack of communication skills. He didn't come across as deep or multi-layered, rather he just seemed ill-formed as a character. The relationship between the two MCs was... okay. The sex leap seemed too soon and I guess there was chemistry there, but I really had to reach to feel it.
I also had issues with the secondary characters. Ryan came across as bipolar or something. He really didn't make much sense as a character, and I struggled a lot to understand him. Also, I thought more could have been done with Kelly and the bar owner. They just seemed like pawns and not well conceived.
Finally, the writing. The constant use of the phrase out of bounds seriously grated on me. I mean, yeah, we get that it's the title of the book! We get it! It isn't clever anymore after the first couple of times, and it got to be pretty annoying. The prose also went a little purple at times for my tastes.
All in all, this book wasn't bad but I wouldn't call it good either. I've read many better college boy M/M books in my day.
**Copy provided in exchange for an honest review**
January 31, 2016
I'll start off by saying that I love trying out established M/F author's foray into M/M Romance. Is it always successful? No. Was this one? YES! Out of Bounds is a New Adult story of two college roommates who fall in love. Jesse was moved into Nick's room after being assaulted by his hold roommate. Nick is none too happy about it first, but he was there for Jesse from the get go.
My Highlights:
*The main characters. I love the contrast between the two men, and how their roles play out in the end.
*Character development and growth.
*Dual POV
*Love how their relationship evolved from roommates to friends to lovers. The progression felt natural.
*Their friends and family. They weren't perfect, but their loyalty shone through.
*The pace was smooth and effortless.
*The intimacy between Jesse and Nick was equal parts tender and hot.
Why not 5 Stars? Well...
*Jesse's actions after the assault didn't always match the reactions following such a traumatic experience. I know everyone reacts differently, but I don't think I'd be so quick to check out my new roommate after what had just occurred with the last one. Little things like that just niggled a bit.
*The biggest thing though is how there was NO disciplinary or criminal action taken against his roommate? I know that it was kind of explained, but it gnawed at me.
For those two reasons, I docked a half a star.
In the end, though the writing had me forgetting about those two points and I was hooked. If you love college romances, I highly recommend this one. It was a sweet, feel good story of two young men who help each other heal. Solid 4.5 Stars, and I can't wait to read the following books in the series.
*ARC kindly provided by Carina Press via NetGalley for an honest review.
*This review is cross-posted at Gay Book Reviews.
November 8, 2017
**2.5 Stars**
I think this is just a "me" thing. There were parts I really liked but some I didn't with the parts I didn't, dominating.
It really had potential but too many things niggled at my brain. For instance, what was up with Ryan? Why was there not some kind of recourse there? He just gets off scot-free? Nothing? Plus, it just didn't make any sense to me his behavior.
And good grief...Kelly? I did not like him at all but I couldn't figure him out. I felt like he needed more fleshing out but what I did see I didn't like.
The whole "out of bounds" thing was overdone. And there at the end, again it made no sense. COMMUNICATION people.
But, I did like Nick. And while I wasn't sure about him in the beginning, I ended up liking him (well, other than his dumbass move towards the end *rolling my eyes here*. I liked Jesse but I felt he was a bit wishy-washy at times.
So, overall, it was OKAY...nothing earth-shattering though.
I think this is just a "me" thing. There were parts I really liked but some I didn't with the parts I didn't, dominating.
It really had potential but too many things niggled at my brain. For instance, what was up with Ryan? Why was there not some kind of recourse there? He just gets off scot-free? Nothing? Plus, it just didn't make any sense to me his behavior.
And good grief...Kelly? I did not like him at all but I couldn't figure him out. I felt like he needed more fleshing out but what I did see I didn't like.
The whole "out of bounds" thing was overdone. And there at the end, again it made no sense. COMMUNICATION people.
But, I did like Nick. And while I wasn't sure about him in the beginning, I ended up liking him (well, other than his dumbass move towards the end *rolling my eyes here*. I liked Jesse but I felt he was a bit wishy-washy at times.
So, overall, it was OKAY...nothing earth-shattering though.
January 6, 2017
BR with BABY!
2.5 Stars
Characters make or break a book for me. A good character can take me from liking a book to LOVING ALL THE THINGS. Here the characters were mediocre. There wasn’t anything special or noteworthy about either of them aside from their drama llamadom, but I never felt the need to DNF. However, I did become increasingly annoyed with their antics, yet determinedly soldiered on to see how big of a shit show they could concoct. Amazingly enough the big conflict is communication based.
Out of Bounds is a coming of age romance between Nick and Jesse. Nick is a somewhat non-traditional student, having fought tooth and nail (literally) to get to college. He’s a 24 yr old senior while Jesse is a 19 yr old sophomore. Jesse gets dumped on Nick mid-semester after his previous roommate, and best friend, gay bashed him which I’ll come back to. He’s skittish and jumpy as a cat in room full of rockers. Nick uses the old ‘line in the sand’ trick, or in this case tape on the floor. You cross it you die! Or get a penalty. Dying packs more of a punch, but this ain’t that kind of book.
It started off well enough with Nick being a grumpy giant. I like the grumps and the big uns. 6’6”!!!! But then his grumpitude morphed into angst, insecurity and wildly off the wall assumptions compounded by god awful communication skills. Jesse’s characterization is much the same only spottier. He turns on a dime from scared rabbit into confident playah and as a virgin who’s just come off a gay bashing incident I found that peculiar. I can give a little latitude when a character’s very young but after a while…
Another stumbling block to my enjoyment of Out of Bounds is verbiage.
Either these guys are next in line to becoming X-Men or the DOD needs to get them on the horn. Like NOW. Could be a titch awkward with them having to make the seeeexxx to for all the things happen but I’m sure it’s doable.
The repetition was another thing that became tiresome. You don’t have to tell me multiple times how many variations of green a character’s eyes are. And, p.s., Nick’s eye color changed to blue briefly. The phrase “out of bounds” got beaten into the ground. I don’t want anyone to ever speak to me again about cherry lip balm. Ever. I really want to know how it is that Nick constantly smells of coffee and chocolate yet never once ingests it. Is this a new body wash at Lush? I never thought of applying caffeine topically before.
This could be a case of it’s me not you, but I found some of the actions/reactions weird. I know all people aren’t the same, but if I’m going into someone’s home and they’re clearly sick and then basically pass out on my 19 yr old son you can bet your ass I’m not going to just stand there all Judgey McJudgerton letting him bring my son down to his knees. Who does that? There was a whole scene with Kelly that I couldn’t make heads or tails out of. And then there was Ryan. There was just something slightly off about all the characters, something that rang false or maybe forced. Perhaps it can be explained by the overemphasis on the details rather than putting some meat on the bones of their characterizations. I'd rather know what motivated so and so to do such and such over what they were wearing when they did it.
I didn’t hate it or the characters, but it didn’t bowl me over. I wouldn’t be completely opposed to continuing on with this series, especially if one of them were to feature Kelly. Recommended for fans of NA and college romances.
An ARC was provided by NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
2.5 Stars
Characters make or break a book for me. A good character can take me from liking a book to LOVING ALL THE THINGS. Here the characters were mediocre. There wasn’t anything special or noteworthy about either of them aside from their drama llamadom, but I never felt the need to DNF. However, I did become increasingly annoyed with their antics, yet determinedly soldiered on to see how big of a shit show they could concoct. Amazingly enough the big conflict is communication based.
Out of Bounds is a coming of age romance between Nick and Jesse. Nick is a somewhat non-traditional student, having fought tooth and nail (literally) to get to college. He’s a 24 yr old senior while Jesse is a 19 yr old sophomore. Jesse gets dumped on Nick mid-semester after his previous roommate, and best friend, gay bashed him which I’ll come back to. He’s skittish and jumpy as a cat in room full of rockers. Nick uses the old ‘line in the sand’ trick, or in this case tape on the floor. You cross it you die! Or get a penalty. Dying packs more of a punch, but this ain’t that kind of book.
It started off well enough with Nick being a grumpy giant. I like the grumps and the big uns. 6’6”!!!! But then his grumpitude morphed into angst, insecurity and wildly off the wall assumptions compounded by god awful communication skills. Jesse’s characterization is much the same only spottier. He turns on a dime from scared rabbit into confident playah and as a virgin who’s just come off a gay bashing incident I found that peculiar. I can give a little latitude when a character’s very young but after a while…
Another stumbling block to my enjoyment of Out of Bounds is verbiage.
The earth moved. Somewhere in the distance world’s exploded.
The sky fell and stars tumbled to the ground…
He needed to come-now-to feel the crack of thunder and surge of lightning as he spilled against Jesse’s belly, marking him in the most primal way possible.
Either these guys are next in line to becoming X-Men or the DOD needs to get them on the horn. Like NOW. Could be a titch awkward with them having to make the seeeexxx to for all the things happen but I’m sure it’s doable.
The repetition was another thing that became tiresome. You don’t have to tell me multiple times how many variations of green a character’s eyes are. And, p.s., Nick’s eye color changed to blue briefly. The phrase “out of bounds” got beaten into the ground. I don’t want anyone to ever speak to me again about cherry lip balm. Ever. I really want to know how it is that Nick constantly smells of coffee and chocolate yet never once ingests it. Is this a new body wash at Lush? I never thought of applying caffeine topically before.
This could be a case of it’s me not you, but I found some of the actions/reactions weird. I know all people aren’t the same, but if I’m going into someone’s home and they’re clearly sick and then basically pass out on my 19 yr old son you can bet your ass I’m not going to just stand there all Judgey McJudgerton letting him bring my son down to his knees. Who does that? There was a whole scene with Kelly that I couldn’t make heads or tails out of. And then there was Ryan. There was just something slightly off about all the characters, something that rang false or maybe forced. Perhaps it can be explained by the overemphasis on the details rather than putting some meat on the bones of their characterizations. I'd rather know what motivated so and so to do such and such over what they were wearing when they did it.
I didn’t hate it or the characters, but it didn’t bowl me over. I wouldn’t be completely opposed to continuing on with this series, especially if one of them were to feature Kelly. Recommended for fans of NA and college romances.
An ARC was provided by NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
March 20, 2016
I only have three things to say.
One. How many times can you repeat the phrase "out of bounds" in 154 pages? Apparently, 33 times!. Whaaa? Aren't there any synonym phrases?
Two. If I bought my partner flowers and they
Three. I hated Kelly. I hated him with a vengeance. He told Nick such hurtful things, my jaw literally dropped. And this is important, because Kelly is the MC in the second book.
BUT. Despite the above, it was a pretty easy and engaging story. I'll definately read the next one.
One. How many times can you repeat the phrase "out of bounds" in 154 pages? Apparently, 33 times!. Whaaa? Aren't there any synonym phrases?
Two. If I bought my partner flowers and they
Three. I hated Kelly. I hated him with a vengeance. He told Nick such hurtful things, my jaw literally dropped. And this is important, because Kelly is the MC in the second book.
BUT. Despite the above, it was a pretty easy and engaging story. I'll definately read the next one.
January 22, 2017
A cute and quick college-set M/M romance novel.
After having been beaten up by his former best friend and roommate, sophomore Jesse is left traumatized and without accommodation. It's just his luck that the only available bed is in senior Nick's room, of all people - a gruff, intimidating mountain of a man who scares the shit out of Jesse.
Nick isn't exactly a people's person. Having been on his own for the better part of his life, he's the most comfortable when everybody just leaves him the hell alone. What he wasn't expecting was the fierce protectiveness that overcomes him when shy, jumpy Jesse enters his room - and his life.
Soon, Jesse and Nick form a bond based on patience, trust and, ultimately, love.
Okay, so I didn't love this book. I enjoyed it well enough, though. It was an easy and entertaining comfort read, funny and sweet. I was particularly happy that I didn't have to deal with the typical coming-out-of-the-closet storyline. The one where one of the main characters refuses to out himself to the world and all the relationship angst is built around that one issue? I'm not a fan of that in my reads. In Out of Bounds, both Jesse and Nick were very comfortable with their sexuality, and that made it pleasurably low on angst in that regard.
Most of the time, Nick had me tightly wrapped around his little finger (which is probably the size of my entire forearm). There's just something about those big, silent, brooding, overprotective heroes that draws me in... Maybe it's some sort of residual primal instinct that takes over when I encounter one of them. Huh. In reality, he was just one giant teddy bear - all bark, no bite, as Jesse put it. So endearing. And yeah, hot, too.
Jesse was very likable, too. Cute as a button, but not too innocent despite his lack of experience. I really liked his character development throughout the story, how he regained his strength and his confidence with the help of his new friend.
What was noticeably absent, though, were some interesting supporting characters. Okay, there was Kelly, and he was kind of cool, I guess. Lionel.. too shallow. Aside from them, the whole book was completely focused on Jesse and Nick (most of the time was spent inside their dorm room and the club where Nick worked). Good thing that this was a rather short read, otherwise it would have probably become boring after a while.
Also, there was hardly any plot. There were the main characters' sad background stories, but other than that, all we got was their relationship. Don't get me wrong, I didn't get bored. There was enough substance to fill all the pages, but a little more action really wouldn't have hurt, either.
But my biggest issue with this novel was the pacing. It felt too rushed - the development from friendship to lovers, anyway. After a promising start that hinted at a slow-burn romance, Jesse and Nick went from being friends to having sex and supposedly being in love far too quickly. There was no real build-up, no time for chemistry, or to make their love story feel realistic. I didn't buy into it and, unfortunately, didn't feel it.
At the time I finished this book, I was pretty certain I wasn't going to read the sequel. But now that I've read the first chapter that was attached to the e-book.. not so sure anymore. A kinky, BDSM themed taboo read about a professor and a student? I'd be lying if I said it didn't sound intriguing.
We'll see, we'll see.
ARC provided by Carina Press via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
November 3, 2016
I really liked Nick and Jessie. At first you wouldn't think these two would work together. But let me tell you, they absolutely did. They each brought something different to the relationship and they complemented each other perfectly. In the beginning I thought Jessie was going to be a weak character. In reality he was so strong. He had to heal from a bad situation and Nick made him feel secure again. By the end of the book he was fierce and fought for what he wanted. I can't wait to read more by this author.
February 2, 2016
This book was a pleasant surprise! I enjoyed the heck out of it and read it pretty much all in one sitting. I'm not usually a fan of the whole "twink" thing, but Jesse was a realistic and dynamic character, and his development throughout the course of the book really made him a great protagonist. Also, Nick... can I please have Nick? I needs the precious!!! He's just completely droolworthy!
So the book wasn't perfect... some things moved really quickly and were a little unbelievable, but in all honesty, that wasn't super-noticeable because I was having too much fun watching these two polar opposites find their way into the other's arms.
I'll definitely check out book two when it releases.
If I get some time later, I'll add some funny quotes I highlighted -- the author's sense of humor is quite entertaining. :)
So the book wasn't perfect... some things moved really quickly and were a little unbelievable, but in all honesty, that wasn't super-noticeable because I was having too much fun watching these two polar opposites find their way into the other's arms.
I'll definitely check out book two when it releases.
If I get some time later, I'll add some funny quotes I highlighted -- the author's sense of humor is quite entertaining. :)
February 5, 2017
3.5 stars
I really like hurt/comfort and I really like college boys. So even though I had some issues with this book, I still enjoyed it.
Jesse has been beaten up by his former roommate for kissing him, and is therefore placed in a new dorm room. His new roommate is Nick, tall and intimidating Nick.
Because Jesse can’t seem to relax around Nick, Nick comes up with a plan. He divides the room in two, by putting a line of tape in the middle.
Nick wants Jesse to feel safe and doesn’t want to be intimidating. So he tries really hard to be as gentle with Jesse as possible.
The two become friends pretty fast and Jesse is very surprised to learn Nick is gay too. He expected a big guy like Nick to be straight, like his former roommate.
They both acknowledge that they are attracted to each other, but Jesse is still somewhat scared to act on his feelings. He is also inexperienced and has no idea how to start something. But after arriving home from a party together, they share a hot mutual masturbation session without them ever crossing the tape line in the middle of the room.
After this their relationship naturally evolves into something more. I found these guys to be very sweet and sexy together.
I have to admit it was a bit sudden how they went from friends to something more. And as many reviewers have said, it was ridiculous how many times the term ‘out of bounds’ is mentioned. Also the fact that the former roommate just got away with his behavior was very unrealistic.
But other than that, I enjoyed it. There is some relationship angst near the end, but it wasn’t dragged out and Jesse was persistent enough to get Nick to see how wrong he was.
A nice college romance with some hurt/comfort thrown in (don’t expect too much in that department).
I really like hurt/comfort and I really like college boys. So even though I had some issues with this book, I still enjoyed it.
Jesse has been beaten up by his former roommate for kissing him, and is therefore placed in a new dorm room. His new roommate is Nick, tall and intimidating Nick.
Because Jesse can’t seem to relax around Nick, Nick comes up with a plan. He divides the room in two, by putting a line of tape in the middle.
Nick wants Jesse to feel safe and doesn’t want to be intimidating. So he tries really hard to be as gentle with Jesse as possible.
The two become friends pretty fast and Jesse is very surprised to learn Nick is gay too. He expected a big guy like Nick to be straight, like his former roommate.
They both acknowledge that they are attracted to each other, but Jesse is still somewhat scared to act on his feelings. He is also inexperienced and has no idea how to start something. But after arriving home from a party together, they share a hot mutual masturbation session without them ever crossing the tape line in the middle of the room.
After this their relationship naturally evolves into something more. I found these guys to be very sweet and sexy together.
I have to admit it was a bit sudden how they went from friends to something more. And as many reviewers have said, it was ridiculous how many times the term ‘out of bounds’ is mentioned. Also the fact that the former roommate just got away with his behavior was very unrealistic.
But other than that, I enjoyed it. There is some relationship angst near the end, but it wasn’t dragged out and Jesse was persistent enough to get Nick to see how wrong he was.
A nice college romance with some hurt/comfort thrown in (don’t expect too much in that department).
January 14, 2016
Jesse is a sophomore in college, beaten up by his room-mate, he is found on campus by another student who gets him to hospital and finds him a room in another dorm. Jesse is naturally terrified when his new room-mate is huge and is afraid to do anything in case he turns out to be the same as his previous room-mate.
Nick is furious when he wakes up to find himself with a new room-mate but when he hears his story, he is nothing but kind to Jesse. He gives him clothes to wear, feeds him and does everything he can to make him comfortable including putting a line down the middle of the room that he promises never to cross. When he sees how nervous Jesse is about going around campus on his own, he walks him to classes, waits to walk him back and slowly Jesse comes to trust him.
Jesse comes to realise that behind Nick's huge gruff exterior lies a sweet, cuddly teddy bear who will do anything to protect those he cares about. Nick has been on his own for a long time and has no idea of his own self-worth. This leads to some tension between them later on in the book but everything works out nicely and these two really are perfect together.
AR Barley is a new to me author but I believe she writes m/f stories under a different pen-name. I really enjoyed this book and am definitely interested in reading the next book.
*Received from Netgalley
May 15, 2016
'Quick' and 'sweet' would sum this book up nicely.
I really liked how Nick and Jesse's relationship develops, with the two using the tape that separates their bedroom to deepen both their emotional and physical bonds. The dynamic between the two, with Jesse the shy timid one and Nick being all protective and understanding, worked well.
Plus, the sex was pretty hot.
Despite the serious subject matter - gay bashing and the resulting psychological trauma - this was a fairly easy read. The pacing of the story was natural and believable. There is some angst with Jesse dealing with the fallout of the bashing and Nick's sad back story, but overall the progression from strangers, to friends, to lovers was fairly smooth.
Which is why the bit of drama at the end seemed so out of place. It seemed like it was there just to give the MCs something to angst over. But thankfully it didn't take long for the two to get back on track.
Overall, 'Out of Bounds' was a sweet NA romance. NA isn't usually my thing, so there were a few things that I let slide that might normally have annoyed me. However, if you're looking for an easy read, this book will likely fit the bill.
Review copy provided through NetGalley.
I really liked how Nick and Jesse's relationship develops, with the two using the tape that separates their bedroom to deepen both their emotional and physical bonds. The dynamic between the two, with Jesse the shy timid one and Nick being all protective and understanding, worked well.
Plus, the sex was pretty hot.
Despite the serious subject matter - gay bashing and the resulting psychological trauma - this was a fairly easy read. The pacing of the story was natural and believable. There is some angst with Jesse dealing with the fallout of the bashing and Nick's sad back story, but overall the progression from strangers, to friends, to lovers was fairly smooth.
Which is why the bit of drama at the end seemed so out of place. It seemed like it was there just to give the MCs something to angst over. But thankfully it didn't take long for the two to get back on track.
Overall, 'Out of Bounds' was a sweet NA romance. NA isn't usually my thing, so there were a few things that I let slide that might normally have annoyed me. However, if you're looking for an easy read, this book will likely fit the bill.
Review copy provided through NetGalley.
December 13, 2015
New author, new adult story... not usually my choice of book, but the blurb did get my attention, so I thought I shall live dangerously.
I liked this book so much, waaaay more than I thought I would, and I would've given it 4.5 stars if it wasn't for the whole "out of bounds" thing. Let me explain. Jesse Cole gets beat up by his best friend/roommate after Jesse made the mistake of kissing him. Alone and hurt, Jesse accept the help of another student, who finds Jesse another dorm to stay in.
Imagine Nick's displeasure when he wakes up with a stranger in his room, and finds out Jesse is his new roommate. Nick is tall, muscled, and very intimidating, and he find himself with no patience to tip-toe around Jesse's skittish and fearful state; all Nick wants is some peace and quiet so that he can comfortably study in his own dorm room, but once he hears Jesse's story, Nick's true personality comes out: he's a caregiver (be still my heart!). Nick gives Jesse food and clothes, and some much needed peace of mind by walking him to classes everyday. He even puts tape on the middle of the floor, creating a line that he promises not to cross, and Jesse starts feeling safer knowing that Nick will not step out of bounds. I kind of liked the idea of the set boundaries, because it helps Jesse become more confident and it built the trust he eventually has in Nick.
Under Nick's rough exterior lies a very affectionate and protective cuddle bug, who would do anything to protect those he cares about. Nick has been by himself for a long time, kicked out by his mother at the tender age of 15 and left to fend for himself. He's kept himself safe all this time by never hesitating to swing his fists, so his reputation is somewhat tarnished, and his sense of self-worth is nowhere to be found. But Jesse sees Nick for who he really is, and is determined to prove to Nick just how wonderful and worthy of love he is.
There is some tension between Jesse and Nick towards the end of the book caused by a good dose of misunderstanding and of Nick's poor opinion about himself, although I felt that it could've been prevented. When did Out of Bounds in term of the safety line become Out of Bounds in terms of Nick fighting? I mean for fuck's sake, he's a bouncer so fighting sometimes can't be prevented no matter how hard he tries. I thought that whole drama was pointless and used solely as a source of angst, so I could've gone without it.
On the plus side, for a new adult book, this packed some steam... phone sex, some frottage, and even a couple of steamy sex scenes! Plus, VIRGIN alert, people! Overall, a pretty good book.
I liked this book so much, waaaay more than I thought I would, and I would've given it 4.5 stars if it wasn't for the whole "out of bounds" thing. Let me explain. Jesse Cole gets beat up by his best friend/roommate after Jesse made the mistake of kissing him. Alone and hurt, Jesse accept the help of another student, who finds Jesse another dorm to stay in.
Imagine Nick's displeasure when he wakes up with a stranger in his room, and finds out Jesse is his new roommate. Nick is tall, muscled, and very intimidating, and he find himself with no patience to tip-toe around Jesse's skittish and fearful state; all Nick wants is some peace and quiet so that he can comfortably study in his own dorm room, but once he hears Jesse's story, Nick's true personality comes out: he's a caregiver (be still my heart!). Nick gives Jesse food and clothes, and some much needed peace of mind by walking him to classes everyday. He even puts tape on the middle of the floor, creating a line that he promises not to cross, and Jesse starts feeling safer knowing that Nick will not step out of bounds. I kind of liked the idea of the set boundaries, because it helps Jesse become more confident and it built the trust he eventually has in Nick.
Under Nick's rough exterior lies a very affectionate and protective cuddle bug, who would do anything to protect those he cares about. Nick has been by himself for a long time, kicked out by his mother at the tender age of 15 and left to fend for himself. He's kept himself safe all this time by never hesitating to swing his fists, so his reputation is somewhat tarnished, and his sense of self-worth is nowhere to be found. But Jesse sees Nick for who he really is, and is determined to prove to Nick just how wonderful and worthy of love he is.
There is some tension between Jesse and Nick towards the end of the book caused by a good dose of misunderstanding and of Nick's poor opinion about himself, although I felt that it could've been prevented. When did Out of Bounds in term of the safety line become Out of Bounds in terms of Nick fighting? I mean for fuck's sake, he's a bouncer so fighting sometimes can't be prevented no matter how hard he tries. I thought that whole drama was pointless and used solely as a source of angst, so I could've gone without it.
On the plus side, for a new adult book, this packed some steam... phone sex, some frottage, and even a couple of steamy sex scenes! Plus, VIRGIN alert, people! Overall, a pretty good book.
August 15, 2021
Nick Moretti, 24, is an older college senior - cast out of his home at 15, he survived on the street and learned the hard way (1) not to trust anyone, and (2) always pay his own way. He's cautious and grumpy, and brings the phrase "mad, bad and dangerous to know" to mind, but inside? He's a teddy bear who offers a safe haven to a traumatized Jesse.
Jesse Cole is a slim sophomore, lips slick with cherry balm, who spent last summer as a caddy at the golf club where his father, a high-power lawyer, is a member. After a beating by his roommate, Ryan, Jesse has panic attacks and needs a support system, aka Nick, to rebuild his confidence.
The plot progresses with Nick and Jesse going from roommates to friends to lovers. There are just a few sex scenes, but hot damn darlin', they are hot. I felt the plot was fairly predictable, however, relying almost entirely on the "Out of Bounds" theme. In the context of the story, "Out of Bounds" refers to a system whereby Nick tapes a line down the middle of the dorm room, giving Jesse personal space in which to feel safe. If either roommate crosses the line, they owe the other a penalty. The phrase is used too frequently - 33 times in the book - and brings about the very annoying (IMHO) Big Misunderstanding final crisis for Nick and Jesse.
Although the book is fairly short (150+ pages), the later half of the book bogged down as a few secondary characters are added and fleshed out a bit (Lionel, Chi-Chi, Professor Larkin, Ryan) but I felt they were in "Out of Bounds" more to set up other books in the series, rather than carry this story along.
I thought the strength of "Out of Bounds" was the way the relationship developed between Nick and Jesse. I plan on reading the second book in the Boundaries series ("Against the Rules" - featuring Kelly and Ian Larkin), but hope that the "against the rules" phrase is used judiciously!
I received a galley copy from Carina Press, via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
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Jesse Cole is a slim sophomore, lips slick with cherry balm, who spent last summer as a caddy at the golf club where his father, a high-power lawyer, is a member. After a beating by his roommate, Ryan, Jesse has panic attacks and needs a support system, aka Nick, to rebuild his confidence.
The plot progresses with Nick and Jesse going from roommates to friends to lovers. There are just a few sex scenes, but hot damn darlin', they are hot. I felt the plot was fairly predictable, however, relying almost entirely on the "Out of Bounds" theme. In the context of the story, "Out of Bounds" refers to a system whereby Nick tapes a line down the middle of the dorm room, giving Jesse personal space in which to feel safe. If either roommate crosses the line, they owe the other a penalty. The phrase is used too frequently - 33 times in the book - and brings about the very annoying (IMHO) Big Misunderstanding final crisis for Nick and Jesse.
Although the book is fairly short (150+ pages), the later half of the book bogged down as a few secondary characters are added and fleshed out a bit (Lionel, Chi-Chi, Professor Larkin, Ryan) but I felt they were in "Out of Bounds" more to set up other books in the series, rather than carry this story along.
I thought the strength of "Out of Bounds" was the way the relationship developed between Nick and Jesse. I plan on reading the second book in the Boundaries series ("Against the Rules" - featuring Kelly and Ian Larkin), but hope that the "against the rules" phrase is used judiciously!
I received a galley copy from Carina Press, via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
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March 1, 2016
A Joyfully Jay review.
2.25 stars
This book for me was a case of a great premise with a lack of execution. Two college guys in close quarters in their dorm room leaves lots of possibilities, but this never took off for me. There were so many issues with the plot that I could never recover enough to enjoy the attraction between Jesse and Nick.
Jesse is badly beaten and there are no repercussions for his attacker. While it was briefly addressed further into the book, it was a weak argument and then it was compounded by the fact that we later learn that Jesse’s father is a well known lawyer and Ryan, the attacker, is not even denying anything. Jesse is then so scared he doesn’t want to leave his room, so scared that he flinches when Nick makes even the slightest move in their shared living space. He certainly needed some further help besides Nick walking him to class and a piece of tape on the floor.
So the tape was Nick’s idea to make Jesse feel more comfortable in their room. Somehow this was then turned into every move Nick made, whether in the dorm room or not, having the potential to be out of bounds. Nick was a bouncer at a club and then feared disappointing Jesse by doing his job if he got into a fight and it just didn’t come together well. Also, the number of times the phrase “out of bounds” was used was overdone and lost its effect.
Read Michelle's review in its entirety here.
2.25 stars
This book for me was a case of a great premise with a lack of execution. Two college guys in close quarters in their dorm room leaves lots of possibilities, but this never took off for me. There were so many issues with the plot that I could never recover enough to enjoy the attraction between Jesse and Nick.
Jesse is badly beaten and there are no repercussions for his attacker. While it was briefly addressed further into the book, it was a weak argument and then it was compounded by the fact that we later learn that Jesse’s father is a well known lawyer and Ryan, the attacker, is not even denying anything. Jesse is then so scared he doesn’t want to leave his room, so scared that he flinches when Nick makes even the slightest move in their shared living space. He certainly needed some further help besides Nick walking him to class and a piece of tape on the floor.
So the tape was Nick’s idea to make Jesse feel more comfortable in their room. Somehow this was then turned into every move Nick made, whether in the dorm room or not, having the potential to be out of bounds. Nick was a bouncer at a club and then feared disappointing Jesse by doing his job if he got into a fight and it just didn’t come together well. Also, the number of times the phrase “out of bounds” was used was overdone and lost its effect.
Read Michelle's review in its entirety here.
May 29, 2016
3,5
This one was a sweet, easy read!
Tough Italian guy who's actually a gentle giant? This book had my name written all over it.
Jesse and Nick were cute together and I enjoyed the hell out of their sex scenes!
There were just a couple of things I didn't like. It annoyed me a lot that Ryan never got any kind of punishment. Nothing. Not even a beating. He'll probably get his own book, but still. I kept waiting for something to happen to him and by the end of the book I was so frustrated I wanted to beat him myself.
And also, Kelly. He starts off as an asshole and although he does get better, I still don't particularly like him.
I don't care what his family situation was, being depressed does not excuse being mean. And not only was he cruel to Nick when they broke up, but he's still a bastard to him until the middle of the book and even keeps talking bad about him. Then suddenly they are BFF again and Kelly admits he knew all along that Nick was actually a marshmallow? WTF Kelly?
Anyway, I really liked this book and I'll read the rest of the series :)
This one was a sweet, easy read!
Tough Italian guy who's actually a gentle giant? This book had my name written all over it.
Jesse and Nick were cute together and I enjoyed the hell out of their sex scenes!
There were just a couple of things I didn't like. It annoyed me a lot that Ryan never got any kind of punishment. Nothing. Not even a beating. He'll probably get his own book, but still. I kept waiting for something to happen to him and by the end of the book I was so frustrated I wanted to beat him myself.
And also, Kelly. He starts off as an asshole and although he does get better, I still don't particularly like him.
I don't care what his family situation was, being depressed does not excuse being mean. And not only was he cruel to Nick when they broke up, but he's still a bastard to him until the middle of the book and even keeps talking bad about him. Then suddenly they are BFF again and Kelly admits he knew all along that Nick was actually a marshmallow? WTF Kelly?
Anyway, I really liked this book and I'll read the rest of the series :)
May 25, 2016
Sweet and cute MCs !!
But nothing new ~ This book have all the cliches xD
“I never fall for a twink but I don't know why I feel very protective of him”
Noooo, Really??? I never expected that xDD
Btw I enjoyed it! I needed something light and fluffy ~
note: Except Kelly. He's annoying :(
But nothing new ~ This book have all the cliches xD
“I never fall for a twink but I don't know why I feel very protective of him”
Noooo, Really??? I never expected that xDD
Btw I enjoyed it! I needed something light and fluffy ~
note: Except Kelly. He's annoying :(
June 29, 2016
There was no excitement here. The story dragged, and I had a hard time believing there was attraction on either side.
April 8, 2016
This was a really sweet read. I adored Jesse and Nick, and the secondary characters. Loved the excerpt of the next book, too. Can't wait to read it!:-D
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April 23, 2024Dnf, no rating. I can’t get passed the use of the word ‘kid’ on repeat from one roommate to the other.
December 28, 2015
Out of Bounds by A.R. Barley tells us the story of nineteen year old Jesse, who was physically hurt and got his heart stomped on by best friend and former room mate. Kelly, the resident assistant promised to watch out for Jesse, keep him on his floor and made sure his new room mate Nick wouldn't bother him. Being Kelly's ex boyfriend, Nick agreed to stay out of Jesse's hair, and despite wanting nothing to do with the jumpy geeky kid, he quickly developed a strong protectiveness toward him....
So I kinda liked Jesse, but something about him also irritated me a little too much, which in the end overruled my initial liking I'm afraid :(
I fell harder for Nick; wanted to dive deeper into his mind, and sadly didn't get all that far. Maybe it's just me but even after 30% both guys felt rather shallow, as did their friendship.
After Jesse found out that Nick was also into guys at around 35% I hoped their friendship would finally deepen and grow but instead took a nosedive straight into sex. Sort of? I don't know. Suddenly Nick made Jesse touch himself in front of him? Didn't work for me here, with those boys.
So, my verdict? I'm not sure. There's no doubt, the book was well written; couple scenes were pretty fun but all in all, the story, and especially the characters ((( very sadly))) didn't live up to my expectations :(
Not sure I'm fully buying Jesse's trauma being so hard on him; he'd been hurt once if I got that right, yeah? He was just so jumpy and terrified of everyone, even being outside... after a while it became a little annoying. I don't doubt that being beaten up by someone you trusted is something a person easily shrugs off, don't get me wrong, please, I just didn't particularly feel for him, with him, instead it got on my nerves :(
The bigger question here though is why the fuck did his "best friend" beat Jesse bloody? It was one kiss. Couldn't he have dealt with it better? There was no need to nearly kill the boy.
Didn't feel right. Kinda pissed me off to be honest.
I do recommend it if you like college-themed stories, a traumatized bully victim (sort of) and a tough guy getting all ga-ga over said boy. I myself love that concept, but as I said, sadly the execution didn't do much for me. I really am bummed about it.
Something else (very minor) kind of bugged me more than it probably should :(
But...
Seeing that there'll be a book about Kelly, Nick's ex boyfriend, I thought: Yeah I wanna read that.
But what I said in the spoiler above, kind of still bugs me, to be honest. There better be a bloody good reason for Kelly dumping Nick like he apparently did.
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Many thanks to the Publisher for providing a copy of this book in exchange for an honest and impartial review.
So I kinda liked Jesse, but something about him also irritated me a little too much, which in the end overruled my initial liking I'm afraid :(
I fell harder for Nick; wanted to dive deeper into his mind, and sadly didn't get all that far. Maybe it's just me but even after 30% both guys felt rather shallow, as did their friendship.
After Jesse found out that Nick was also into guys at around 35% I hoped their friendship would finally deepen and grow but instead took a nosedive straight into sex. Sort of? I don't know. Suddenly Nick made Jesse touch himself in front of him? Didn't work for me here, with those boys.
So, my verdict? I'm not sure. There's no doubt, the book was well written; couple scenes were pretty fun but all in all, the story, and especially the characters ((( very sadly))) didn't live up to my expectations :(
Not sure I'm fully buying Jesse's trauma being so hard on him; he'd been hurt once if I got that right, yeah? He was just so jumpy and terrified of everyone, even being outside... after a while it became a little annoying. I don't doubt that being beaten up by someone you trusted is something a person easily shrugs off, don't get me wrong, please, I just didn't particularly feel for him, with him, instead it got on my nerves :(
The bigger question here though is why the fuck did his "best friend" beat Jesse bloody? It was one kiss. Couldn't he have dealt with it better? There was no need to nearly kill the boy.
Didn't feel right. Kinda pissed me off to be honest.
I do recommend it if you like college-themed stories, a traumatized bully victim (sort of) and a tough guy getting all ga-ga over said boy. I myself love that concept, but as I said, sadly the execution didn't do much for me. I really am bummed about it.
Something else (very minor) kind of bugged me more than it probably should :(
But...
Seeing that there'll be a book about Kelly, Nick's ex boyfriend, I thought: Yeah I wanna read that.
But what I said in the spoiler above, kind of still bugs me, to be honest. There better be a bloody good reason for Kelly dumping Nick like he apparently did.
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Many thanks to the Publisher for providing a copy of this book in exchange for an honest and impartial review.
November 6, 2016
Well well well. What a pleasant surprise. I bought this on my kindle on a whim, and I was afraid it would disappoint. It didn't. I'm so glad I took a chance on this one, I ended up really enjoying it!
I love both our main characters. Jesse is the sweetest, most adorable guy, but he certainly can stand up for himself! He's vulnerable and sweet, but not a pushover, and I just love him. Jesse is the kind of guy that brings out people's protective instincts. He actually really reminds me of someone I know.
And Nick is hella awesome. He's got his baggage, but it never felt melodramatic or anything. He's tough but he's got a heart of gold. He's genuinely a good guy and I really like him. Talking more about characters...I love Chi-Chi! She's a very minor character (and I'm unsure of her pronouns? But I'm going to use she/her for now), but from what I saw of her she was sassy and pretty freaking awesome. Can we get a spin-off series about her, please?
[Edit October 2016: Omg, my wish came true!!! Chi-Chi has his own book! I'm so happy!! Also, it appears that Chi-Chi's pronouns are he/him and he is a drag queen not a trans woman. Anyways, I'm very pleased that Chi Chi is a main character of this new book and I can't wait to read it!]
So the best thing about this is that both Jesse and Nick standing alone as characters are awesome. But when they're together...wow, the romance is beautiful and sweet and so many damn feels. I LOVE the romance so much <3
So, a few complaints. Things got a little melodramatic towards the end. Like, come on Nick, get it together. Classic case of miscommunication. But they worked it out, that's good. And Kelly's kind of a jerk, but he's pretty interesting.
Tl;dr version- Overall, Out of Bounds may have its flaws but overall it was very enjoyable and I do recommend it. Was this the author's first try at writing m/m?? If so, I'm fucking impressed! This was great!
I love both our main characters. Jesse is the sweetest, most adorable guy, but he certainly can stand up for himself! He's vulnerable and sweet, but not a pushover, and I just love him. Jesse is the kind of guy that brings out people's protective instincts. He actually really reminds me of someone I know.
And Nick is hella awesome. He's got his baggage, but it never felt melodramatic or anything. He's tough but he's got a heart of gold. He's genuinely a good guy and I really like him. Talking more about characters...I love Chi-Chi! She's a very minor character (and I'm unsure of her pronouns? But I'm going to use she/her for now), but from what I saw of her she was sassy and pretty freaking awesome. Can we get a spin-off series about her, please?
[Edit October 2016: Omg, my wish came true!!! Chi-Chi has his own book! I'm so happy!! Also, it appears that Chi-Chi's pronouns are he/him and he is a drag queen not a trans woman. Anyways, I'm very pleased that Chi Chi is a main character of this new book and I can't wait to read it!]
So the best thing about this is that both Jesse and Nick standing alone as characters are awesome. But when they're together...wow, the romance is beautiful and sweet and so many damn feels. I LOVE the romance so much <3
So, a few complaints. Things got a little melodramatic towards the end. Like, come on Nick, get it together. Classic case of miscommunication. But they worked it out, that's good. And Kelly's kind of a jerk, but he's pretty interesting.
Tl;dr version- Overall, Out of Bounds may have its flaws but overall it was very enjoyable and I do recommend it. Was this the author's first try at writing m/m?? If so, I'm fucking impressed! This was great!
March 14, 2016
Yay for the college boys! I love college romances. There’s something special about characters on the cusp of adulthood that tugs at my heart-strings. And even though this particular story isn’t super original or fresh, it executed its purpose well.
Nick and Jesse are very different. While Jesse comes off as very fragile but aggressive –like a kitten hissing at you- Nick was protective and considerate. The whole “out-of-bounds” theme was used to demonstrate just that in a physical way, when Nick drew a line in the middle of their dorm room so Jesse would feel safe after his traumatic experience. And of course, they both crossed that line, literally and figuratively. Yes it was a bit cheesy and formulaic at times, but overall a very enjoyable read.
I adored Nick and Jesse together. This isn’t a sex-fest, but the connection Nick and Jesse shared was palatable and expressed physically with moderation but very successfully so. They were so very hot together!!! But more importantly, they fell in love and it was so beautifully shown in the story. The writing facilitated that easily and I fell in love with the characters.
The plot itself did not stand out much but I did not care. Give me college boys, sweet loving, and cuddles, and I’m a happy reader, adding two amazing characters to that cake of course.
If you enjoy N/A college romance novels, this will be just right for you. Recommend!
ARC provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Nick and Jesse are very different. While Jesse comes off as very fragile but aggressive –like a kitten hissing at you- Nick was protective and considerate. The whole “out-of-bounds” theme was used to demonstrate just that in a physical way, when Nick drew a line in the middle of their dorm room so Jesse would feel safe after his traumatic experience. And of course, they both crossed that line, literally and figuratively. Yes it was a bit cheesy and formulaic at times, but overall a very enjoyable read.
I adored Nick and Jesse together. This isn’t a sex-fest, but the connection Nick and Jesse shared was palatable and expressed physically with moderation but very successfully so. They were so very hot together!!! But more importantly, they fell in love and it was so beautifully shown in the story. The writing facilitated that easily and I fell in love with the characters.
The plot itself did not stand out much but I did not care. Give me college boys, sweet loving, and cuddles, and I’m a happy reader, adding two amazing characters to that cake of course.
If you enjoy N/A college romance novels, this will be just right for you. Recommend!
ARC provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
March 10, 2016
A copy of this book was provided by Carina Press via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Jesse is brutally beaten by his straight roommate and best friend after mistaking his mixed signals and attempting to kiss him. Afraid to go back to his room, he is assigned to a new room, where his new roommate is a big brute of a guy. Usually, rough and tough, something about Jesse brings out the softy in the brute, and Nick just wants to cuddle him up and protect him. So to help Jesse feel safe in the room, they divide the room in half with a tape across the floor. Nick promises he won’t cross that line for anything except an emergency. It’s the boundary line. Step out of bounds and pay a penalty.
I like the dorm room/college campus tome. It’s fun and reminds me of my younger days. It’s my first story by this author and I will definitely read more. The story kept me interested. But I struggled a bit to connect with Jesse. His personality was a bit confusing. We meet Jesse right after he’s attacked. So he’s skittish, afraid to get close to anyone physically and freaks out when he’s touched. With Nick’s kindness and friendship, he opens up a bit. I can totally understand his personality after such an attack, but then he begins to flip-flop between this meek, scared, insecure guy and this confident, self-assured guy. And I began to get lost as to which was his original nature. I couldn’t seem to meld the two together into one person who had struggled to get past a brutal attack.
The confrontations with Ryan also fell flat for me. Ryan’s behavior was hot and cold. One second he was spewing bigotry, the next he was crying “sorry” to Jesse. I would have liked a bit more to the confrontation. The whole thing felt unfinished. I felt like nothing was really resolved there. They were supposed to have been best friends for the better part of two years, so I felt like there should have been more closure there, at least on Jesse’s part. Ryan obviously needs his own story to work out his issues, because I’m sure there is more there. He knew Jesse was gay and was okay with it. So his attack seemed to come out of left field. This whole thing should have been addressed more. Maybe in subsequent books?
Nick was street smart but he lacked self-esteem and self-assurance. Considering his mother kicked him out and he was left to fend for himself, I get why he feels the way he does. I would have liked to get more background on him as well. We only got a glimpse at his history and childhood. He barely talked about it with Jesse, and we never were truly provided with much details.
I do have to say, I loved that Nick wasn’t one of those throw-aways that survived by prostituting himself. Granted, he used his fists, but it was a refreshing change to the typical street-kid storyline.
Overall, I enjoyed the story, but I would have liked more. I felt at times like we were not given all the details. The secondary characters were present enough to make me look forward to their stories. Two more books. Could it be we will get Ryan’s and Kelly’s stories?
Jesse is brutally beaten by his straight roommate and best friend after mistaking his mixed signals and attempting to kiss him. Afraid to go back to his room, he is assigned to a new room, where his new roommate is a big brute of a guy. Usually, rough and tough, something about Jesse brings out the softy in the brute, and Nick just wants to cuddle him up and protect him. So to help Jesse feel safe in the room, they divide the room in half with a tape across the floor. Nick promises he won’t cross that line for anything except an emergency. It’s the boundary line. Step out of bounds and pay a penalty.
I like the dorm room/college campus tome. It’s fun and reminds me of my younger days. It’s my first story by this author and I will definitely read more. The story kept me interested. But I struggled a bit to connect with Jesse. His personality was a bit confusing. We meet Jesse right after he’s attacked. So he’s skittish, afraid to get close to anyone physically and freaks out when he’s touched. With Nick’s kindness and friendship, he opens up a bit. I can totally understand his personality after such an attack, but then he begins to flip-flop between this meek, scared, insecure guy and this confident, self-assured guy. And I began to get lost as to which was his original nature. I couldn’t seem to meld the two together into one person who had struggled to get past a brutal attack.
The confrontations with Ryan also fell flat for me. Ryan’s behavior was hot and cold. One second he was spewing bigotry, the next he was crying “sorry” to Jesse. I would have liked a bit more to the confrontation. The whole thing felt unfinished. I felt like nothing was really resolved there. They were supposed to have been best friends for the better part of two years, so I felt like there should have been more closure there, at least on Jesse’s part. Ryan obviously needs his own story to work out his issues, because I’m sure there is more there. He knew Jesse was gay and was okay with it. So his attack seemed to come out of left field. This whole thing should have been addressed more. Maybe in subsequent books?
Nick was street smart but he lacked self-esteem and self-assurance. Considering his mother kicked him out and he was left to fend for himself, I get why he feels the way he does. I would have liked to get more background on him as well. We only got a glimpse at his history and childhood. He barely talked about it with Jesse, and we never were truly provided with much details.
I do have to say, I loved that Nick wasn’t one of those throw-aways that survived by prostituting himself. Granted, he used his fists, but it was a refreshing change to the typical street-kid storyline.
Overall, I enjoyed the story, but I would have liked more. I felt at times like we were not given all the details. The secondary characters were present enough to make me look forward to their stories. Two more books. Could it be we will get Ryan’s and Kelly’s stories?
May 18, 2017
NTS: $5.50 for 150 pages. OUCH!
Purchased on 5-18-17 for $2.24 on Amazon
Meh. This was okay. I liked Nick and Jesse, but I guess I just wasn't feeling it. Maybe I'm too old for college aged romance? I don't know.
This also felt super long, but it was only 154 pages. It took me forever to get through and I skimmed some.
I will not be reading on in this series.
Purchased on 5-18-17 for $2.24 on Amazon
Meh. This was okay. I liked Nick and Jesse, but I guess I just wasn't feeling it. Maybe I'm too old for college aged romance? I don't know.
This also felt super long, but it was only 154 pages. It took me forever to get through and I skimmed some.
I will not be reading on in this series.
July 28, 2016
This sexy m/m new adult romance is the story of Nick and Jesse. When Jesse ends up in a bad way on campus after a vicious attack , he's put with a new roommate, Nick. Nick is a few years older and wiser, a part time student and a bouncer who works at a local gay nightclub a few nights a week. He's got a temper on him, but his new roommate brings out a lot of tender and protective feelings. To make Jesse feel safe, they've put up some rules and made it clear what sorts of things are out of bounds. But Nick and Jesse feel a strong attraction to each other. Will crossing the lines end in disaster or be the start of something worth pursuing?
I really enjoyed this story! As far as I'm aware, it's the first LGBTQ story for this author (who also writes traditional male/female romances). She does a great job of getting into the heads of these two young men. Nick's the brawnier of the pair, known for his quick fists and tough demeanor. Having been basically kicked out of his home at 15, he's made his way on his own, doing what he needed to do to survive, and managing to get himself into college all on his own. But he's got a tender and sweet side too, and this comes out when he realizes that Jesse needs at least one place to feel safe and at home, and that place is their dorm room. Jesse is a 19 year old, quiet and somewhat reserved gay male, whose crush on his last roommate ended in disaster. Although he is at first wary of Nick who is bigger and stronger than him, he soon comes to realize that Nick has a soft heart. It's not long before he's feeling comfortable enough with him to consider becoming more than just roommates when Nick makes it clear that he's quite willing to see where things between them will lead. Nick is the more sexually experienced of the pair, and things start out slowly but quickly heat up, leading to some steamy scenes. And despite their physical sizes, they are equal players in the bedroom. I liked that it was a low angst story despite the circumstances that brought them together (no graphic details of the attack on Jesse that brought him and Nick together) and it moves at a smooth pace, with a believable happy ending for them both. 4 stars for this fairly predictable but enjoyable story.
Note: a copy of this story was provided by the publisher via NetGalley for review.
This review appears at All About Romance: http://allaboutromance.com/book-revie...
I really enjoyed this story! As far as I'm aware, it's the first LGBTQ story for this author (who also writes traditional male/female romances). She does a great job of getting into the heads of these two young men. Nick's the brawnier of the pair, known for his quick fists and tough demeanor. Having been basically kicked out of his home at 15, he's made his way on his own, doing what he needed to do to survive, and managing to get himself into college all on his own. But he's got a tender and sweet side too, and this comes out when he realizes that Jesse needs at least one place to feel safe and at home, and that place is their dorm room. Jesse is a 19 year old, quiet and somewhat reserved gay male, whose crush on his last roommate ended in disaster. Although he is at first wary of Nick who is bigger and stronger than him, he soon comes to realize that Nick has a soft heart. It's not long before he's feeling comfortable enough with him to consider becoming more than just roommates when Nick makes it clear that he's quite willing to see where things between them will lead. Nick is the more sexually experienced of the pair, and things start out slowly but quickly heat up, leading to some steamy scenes. And despite their physical sizes, they are equal players in the bedroom. I liked that it was a low angst story despite the circumstances that brought them together (no graphic details of the attack on Jesse that brought him and Nick together) and it moves at a smooth pace, with a believable happy ending for them both. 4 stars for this fairly predictable but enjoyable story.
Note: a copy of this story was provided by the publisher via NetGalley for review.
This review appears at All About Romance: http://allaboutromance.com/book-revie...
January 31, 2016
After seeing the blurb for this story I knew I had to read this. What better premise than what we have here? I honestly read this in one sitting as I couldn’t put it down. We start off in the aftermath of when Jesse was attacked. Broken and battered he’s moved into a new dorm room and this is where we meet Nick. To say I was pulled into their story is an understatement. Let’s just say things are not easy for either one of these guys at first.
Both Jesse and Nick’s relationship isn’t one that just happens overnight. Jesse has some serious hang ups after what he’s been through, understandably it’s left him very skittish and jumpy. Nick has his own demons that he’s been living with. Ones that have seriously cut him to the bone and shaped who he is today. These men don’t trust easily and keep their secrets close. However seeing Nick’s protective side come out pretty much the second he laid eyes on Jesse was absolutely wonderful to see. I LOVED seeing this strong, tough man who’s had such a shitty hand dealt to him go out of his way every chance he could to make sure Jesse felt safe and secure. Nick most definitely stole the show for me. I loved how patient, determined and committed he was to Jesse. It was so endearing to see how this man tried so hard to make sure he kept all his promises he made to Jesse. Jesse became the calm in Nick’s storm as Nick gave Jesse the confidence and strength to fight back especially when Nick had his head in ass.
What I loved the most about this story was that it was more than just about two men getting it on. I loved that this story wasn’t filled with pages and pages of sex scenes. When I did get a sex scene they just felt more significant and held more meaning for me than they would have had we had one on every other page. And OMG I gotta say that first intimate scene that took place. Ya Nick on his knees HELLO? YES PLEASE! Freaking hot!
I did have some minor issues with the story that kept me from rating this higher. Some statements were a little repetitive and a few times I got confused on what was being said. Overall though I enjoyed this story. It was low in angst for me but it packed a punch with some pretty awesome tender, loving and honest moments. This author was a first time read for me and I’m glad I came across this story. I definitely would like to read the next book.
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