Torn Love

by Larissa

**Revised Version**

Bella Rivera never thought she would betray her family and fall head over heels in love with her father’s enemy’s son. But her heart had a mind of its own; and when the decision between love and loyalty comes flying at her full speed, Bella is at a standstill as only death can help her heart decide what's right and what's not.

Santana is up next to take over his father’s empire; but when his eyes meet Bella, he soon has to choose between something that might last forever and a temporary setback.

Torn Love takes you into the life of Bella and Santana, who were given everything on a gold platter until they decided to play both sides, causing guns to be drawn, blood to be shed, and lives to be taken, all because of a little thing called love.

144 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 6, 2014

Reviews

[Deshawn French · Rating 3 out of 5]

Will they make it

Will they make it

I would like to see what happens to Bella and Santana. I could have done without the paragraph pertaining to the tension in the air. Example the reference to basketball ball wives and a bunch of other reality shows that is on the air. The reference to the body wash and what type of baby lotion could have been left out as well. There's some light editing issues, but I would read pt 2.

[Neila · Rating 3 out of 5]

The drama in this story is never ending!!!!! no lie @ some point I am a bit confuse I am like what the hell!!!!! who killed who ? but other than that it is that kind of story that u will read because you want to find out what is going to happen.

[Page Turner · Rating 3 out of 5]

I read this in the kindle edition which specifically says (the re-edited version). Unfortunately, if this was the re-edited version, it wasn't done very well. There were still a lot of omitted words and duplicated paragraphs and chapters. It definitely took away from my enjoyment of reading the book because I didn't feel like having to scroll time and time again to skip duplicates and it all got aggravating eventually. The story itself is a typical Romeo and Juliette in the midst of a family war story. There were no surprises, but the writing itself was still pretty good. My last 3 reads haven't worked out for me for some reason. LOL. I don't think I'll move on to the sequel simply because I'm afraid the lack of editing will annoy me again.

[Helen Clark · Rating 5 out of 5]

Suspende

This book is a 5 star read. It keeps you intrigued, love, revenge and betrayal. I would this read to everyone. Part 2 , I'm ready!!!

[Yvette Waite · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good

This book gets four stars because it started out very slow and picked up near the end. Hopefully part two will be more fast-paced

[Katrina Lawson · Rating 5 out of 5]

I love it

I like this all the way through but I dislike this..is chapter 16and17
is the same chapter but overall I give this book a 8

[Tiarra · Rating 5 out of 5]

Speechless

This was a straight page Turner. I couldn't put this book down even if I tried. Leo Sullivan you have some talented authors on your team. Larissa you are a beast when it comes to the pen keep up the good work I will continue to support I am waiting patiently for part two.

[reneeNaDaCherry · Rating 3 out of 5]

Torn Love

I liked reading this new author's work. Larissa's storyline was interesting yet moved too slow for me. Perhaps the use of so many cliches throughout this novella focused on a predictable ending. Yet I still found the familia characters worth reading about. So I'm on to the next one in this series Torn Love II.

[Donica James · Rating 5 out of 5]

That shit is crazy.I can't believe the shit Bella has to put up with in that family.Im shocked at all the twist and turns in this book.Im happy Bella stood her ground to her family.That ending was hella good I can't wait for part two

[Q Owens · Rating 5 out of 5]

LOVED IT!!!!

I absolutely loved this book. I would hate to be in a situation like Bella but love conquers all. This was a fabulous story you must read it. I can't wait to get to part 2 and whatever else that follows. Great job Larissa. You did the darn thing with this book.

[Nakia Williams · Rating 5 out of 5]

Banger!!

I started this book this morning and was finish by lunch! Wow! Never read a book by this author but now I am hooked on her books!! I recommend this book to everybody that love a good book with all kinda drama and deception!!!
On to part two now! #teamlarissa

[Tonia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Torn

This book was slow at first but then it finally picks up. I don't know why the won't let them be together as long as they don't cross each other it shouldn't matter that they love each other

[I’kia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Part 2 please!!!!

I loved the storyline and I can't wait for the next book in this series. I loved the chemistry between the Santana and Bella.

[Chaunai · Rating 5 out of 5]

ROMEO AND JULIET

ROMEO AND JULIET

The story line was great , the book was amazing , I'm so ready to read part two...keep'em coming .

[traionna jones · Rating 4 out of 5]

TORN LOVEE

Santana really loves bella , I believe he would go beyond hard to keep her safe & end the family feud but how will he feel about her secrets ? WHERE IS PART 2 ???

[MARGIE GARY · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fierce

This book is fire. I can't wait to read part two. All I can say is get this book now.

[alycia stone · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow

I couldn't take my eyes off the pages. I can't wait to read the next book. I hope it's as good

[Tasha P. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pretty good story line. There was way too much repeating things and drawn out actions of what they were doing. All in all I enjoyed the book, now it's on to part 2.

[Victoria · Rating 5 out of 5]

It is a great book to read

[Neka · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved it

I enjoyed reading part 1 I can’t wait to read part 2 to find out what happens next I hope the families to an understanding.

[°BeauutiLovve · Rating 5 out of 5]

Drama and more drama..... This was very good