Oh, dear... The curse of the free ebooks strikes again. First, I was totally ignorant of what BWWM meant (been a long damned time since I've read the CL personals for fun, I guess). This is a thing? Mkay. Maybe I'll learn something. Or not. Thought there might be some cultural eye openers here because the last time I read something by a black author, it felt like she was stuck in the '50s (uptight, prudish character, determined the only man to possess her physically had to be "the one.") I was hoping that wasn't a thing like big hats and church. Well, maybe kinda...
Here, the heroine doesn't have as big a stick up her arse (excepting her self-imposed celibate period) but she had lots of other weirdly traditional expectations. I mean... Who gets her Masters so she can find Mr. Wonderful and have babies? Honestly, this was the most schizophrenic character I've ever seen. She's upset with her friend for sticking with an abusive cheater, yet she's encouraging her own cheating stalker of an ex because the attention "thrills" her. Every time her inner dialogue tells her to back off from this new Eric dude, she's locking lips with him seconds later. She heads off to Fiji, having told no one where she's going, finds Eric on her bed when she arrives, and does she recognize this as another guy with controlling, potentially abusive, stalkerish tendencies? Nope. She smirks and unpacks her bag. She declares later she's calling for a separate room and he essentially rapes her, so does she get upset? Nope, she moons about how well they fit. Puhleeze.
The fact Eric has been hired to work with her, seduce her, and ultimately replace her as part of a merger would, you'd think, be a major plot issue. Nope. She finds out about this betrayal and is angry for all of 12 seconds with the parties involved.
Honestly, the sex scenes are so brief, the work details so sketchy, and the story jumps ahead in time so much and so often, I find myself wondering where the story went. No serious typo issues (aside from confusion between peek and peak), but the story itself wasn't terribly substantial or neatly woven. It's pretty much "Poor little rich girl has everything handed to her by men who know better. The end." The BWWM business? Kind of a tiny side note. No real insight there, except black ladies apparently call each other "girl" a lot.