Short stories are difficult for even the best of authors to pull off, seeing as how they have so little time to hook the reader and send him away satisfied. It's even harder in Christian fiction, where you're expected to convey an uplifting spiritual message to boot.
As much as it pains me to say, the stories in this anthology don't quite work for me. I love the concept of this book, I admire the publisher who released it, and I am enthused by the potential that the authors display here. That being said, I don't think their potential was fully tapped for this project. Of course, if I were grading these stories for a college writing class, I'd give each one an "A" without hesitation. As far as amateur fiction goes, these stories are top-notch. But can they compete with quality mainstream fiction from a major publisher? The answer, unfortunately, is no.
(Of course, keep in mind that I recently wrote a scathing review of a short story collection I later learned won several prestigious awards. In other words, take my opinion with a huge grain of salt.)
On the one hand, I love that this anthology gives Christian authors the freedom to be more "real" in their storytelling. Several of these stories explore some pretty dark terrain, and that is something I greatly appreciate. However, each author seems duty-bound to present an overtly Christian message regardless of whether the story actually calls for one. For me, that's a bug rather than a feature. Others will disagree.
I think part of my frustration with these stories is the editing. I'm not talking about typos; the publisher did a terrific job in that regard. I just get the feeling that, apart from proofreading, these stories were published "as is." There is a lot of fat needing to me trimmed, a lot of darlings needing to be killed, some awkward phrasing crying out to be re-worded... A ruthless editor and some judicious re-writing could have made all the difference here.