Aside from forgetting characters' names, typos, and a general lack of editing, this book has 2 major issues. The first is that I don't think this author has ever been to America or even heard an American speak... ever. I get sometimes it can be hard to use a different country's linguistics, but if you are going to base a story in a different nation with characters from that nation, it is important to do your research and actually use the right terminology, linguistics, and make sure you are culturally correct. The second issue is that there was potential here, but it was never even remotely close to getting there. It's just bad. It's poorly written, it doesn't delve into the characters, nothing is particularly believable, the sex scenes are agonizingly boring, there are so many plot holes this book is like Swiss cheese, and it's just genuinely not good. I 0/10 reccomend. If you told me this was written by AI, I'd believe you.