Read for 2021 SPSFC
Overall Thoughts
This one was interesting to place in this list. I felt like I wanted to know the characters more than I did, but at the same time I also wanted to learn more about the world outside the planet, Petra, where all the action takes place. Petra is definitely a space opera, except the entire story is on one planet, and we don’t really see any of the movers and shakers behind how things got started. That said, it gives a nice, focused look at a heist story for a planet that is meant to be an inescapable prison.
Plot
The story starts with some history on the main character, Kane, who’s coming in to talk with the chief warden of Petra, an entire world meant to act as a prison. The subject matter is to be whether Kane can negotiate his planet joining the consortium of worlds that use the prison planet. It will be a betrayal of his ideals to do so, but all that goes out the window quickly as a group attempts to break free of the prison, dragging Kane into the plot to work against the omniscient controls of the warden.
Setting
This uses a really interesting concept of an entire world as a prison. It’s not new—it’s certainly been used in space opera before, but rarely do we have a book focused on the prison world and what its ramifications are. That said, I felt some of the worldbuilding could have been stronger in this one. It actually took me a good third of the book before I figured out that the world is just an open colony world. The only reason it’s a prison is because there is restricted travel to and from it. This puts things into a much different perspective—the warden is allowing tribes, factions, and even kingdoms to vie against each other, and people are born on this world, confined only from the sins of their parents. I wanted to lean into this more while reading, but although we do see some interaction with one of the feudal kingdoms, I wanted more. There are other books in the series, so perhaps there is more detail in those. As I said above, I also wanted more information on the other planets, what their disputes were, and why they sent people to this planet. Basically, I felt this book could have been just a little longer to help build out some of the reasons why the characters acted as they did.
Character
Kane is a great everyman POV to learn about the world as we dig deeper in it, but I also found myself wanting a little more about him. We find out some about his family, and ties he has to Petra itself, but a lot of them felt tenuous. I wanted stronger ties to bind him to the crew that’s trying to escape. Speaking of which, the crew and the warder are the other major players, and I actually found myself learning the most about the warden’s character over the length of the book. There are several people in the crew escaping, and some of them tend to blend together, meaning injuries and deaths that happen are not as impactful as I would have liked. Again, there may be more of this in the sequels, but this book doesn’t entice me quite enough to read them. But it might for you, and I’d encourage you to give it a read!
Score out of 10 (My personal score, not the final contest score)
Temporary score until more books in the contest are read: An interesting space opera/escape heist from a prison planet. Cool action, but I could have used more attachment to the characters. 6/10.