Enjoyable
I'm giving Ms.King four stars because I enjoyed her book. I have a few issues with the story though....
1. A week is just to short of a time to decide that you trust someone and that you are in love with them. Just because you have an unlimited income and can wine and dine the check out of me doesn't make me fall in love with you or trust you.
2. I need more descriptions of the characters features. The covers of the novels rarely depict the authors descriptions. The guy on the cover did not have dark wavy hair or green eyes..the heroine was just described as pretty and brown skin. That's not enough of a visual.
3. There was no conflict to be found. And the "lie" that he told her was weak and resolved in nano seconds.
4. You mentioned the hero's family and how he had brothers but we never got an introduction. Of course each brother will have his own story, but it would have been nice to have met them.
4. Stop wrapping up such a nice story so quickly....readers love detail..nothing over the top but enough detail that you feel satisfied having read the book.
I will read another book of Ms king she's got talent...although looking at the covers of her other novels...I get annoyed seeing pregnant women on the covers. It's always and "accidental" pregnancy, what billionaire would want to practice safe sex? I'm rambling, but these are my thoughts....good job Ms king.