Imagine one of your loved ones being held captive in the hands of mad scientists at a semi-known location which you happen to know isn't too far away from where you currently are yourself. Would you dawdle for 4 days before trying to figure out if you could rescue said person? No? Me neither. Not if the person with the knowledge was conscious enough to give even a hint of directions.
If something bad then happened due to your negligence, would you then wait another day before informing anyone still worrying about said person? No? Me neither.
The above really annoyed me, and totally ruined an otherwise crappy story.
Besides that it has some linguistic errors, but only in the beginning. The characters are shallow but ok, and the dialogue is uninspired. Don't get me started again on the story, the plot or the timeline. I think I've ranted enough for one review. In other words; do yourself a favour and find something better to read!
Read as part of the 'Gathering Darkness' anthology