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165 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2016

Based on the synopsis and the first couple of chapters, I really wanted to like this book. On one hand you've got the story about a girl and her best friends brother, who learn that their hate for each other is actually a whole lot of sexual tension that neither would acknowledge. On the other side, you've got a short story about a girl and her brothers best friend.
My main problem with First was this: if there was a guide on how to make the most predictable and cliched New Adult book, this would be in there as the example. Every single aspect that you could possibly imagine in a book of this genre are stuffed between these covers. Best friends brother, don't know where you're at in life, unresolved past issues, saying the opposite of what you mean, shot down declarations of love, death, 'this was a mistake' sex, one of the characters is hurt provide the others to realize how much they care, etc. it was way too much going on for such a short amount of time. There were times I actually cringed from how naive one of the heroines is. I don't care how little experience you have, it sounded like she had the knowledge of a 12 year old.
The story line held promise and I was intrigued by the synopsis, I just don't think it was executed as well as it could have been. There were too many external elements and not nearly enough back story, emotion, or dialogue. The characters had no reasoning for making the decisions that they did, and little character growth was achieved. Personally, this story just didn't work for me. 2.5 Stars.
