Warning: Contains HOT Historical Regency Scenes that don't leave much to the imagination! A surprise bonus is also included inside for a limited time!
Jessica has a secret that nobody can find out about, especially her mistress, Lady Beamount.
Lady Beamount is known to be shallow and short tempered and Jessica knows that if she ever finds out about her secret, then she will lose her job before she even gets a chance to explain.
Jessica’s job is everything to her, but when a handsome Duke’s life is put into jeopardy, she faces a hard choice. She can deceive Lady Beamount, or she can keep her job and her secret, which she had fought so hard to get.
I read four of the short stories in this book. I think they were Regency-era stories, but I can't be certain because no year is given in any of the stories. One of them mentions England. I think two of them mentioned carriages, so they occurred before the Edwardian era. Authors, can we please indicate when and where our stories take place? I'll briefly speak on each story and share my own personal thoughts. I apologize in advance if this review is too long.
The Duke's Pregnant Maid is about a pregnant young lady named Jessica who accepts a job as a lady's maid for Lady Beamount. Now, from her name, I assumed Lady Beaumount is a widow. If she had never been married, she would be Lady____{Fill in the blank with her first name.} She seems to live alone in her own home, so that confirmed my assumption.
Why does a first-aid kit appear in this story? Jessica takes alcohol from her first-aid kit and uses it to clean the cuts on a maid's arm. Why does no one address the duke as "Your Grace?"
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In Two Dukes One Scandal, Louisa is informed by her father, an army general, that seven military men will be their house guests for several days. Two of the men are dukes and the father hopes Louisa can make a match with one of them. Samuel Horseforth, called "Duke Horseforth" in this story, is the first to arrive. He's attractive, but Louisa finds him a bit dull and doesn't think he appreciates her sense of humor and frankness. Arthur Jameson, called "Duke Jameson," is charming and congenial.
Why are these outings referred to as dates? People didn't "date" until after the automobile became mainstream and couples could drive away and spend time alone together. During the time this story takes place, ladies were courted. There's an awkward conversation between Louisa and her maid Claire in which Louisa asks, "Do you enjoy working here? I mean, don't you wish sometimes that you had a life like mine?" Wait for it! The maid's reply includes something about liking Louisa's pretty dresses and her good-smelling dinner, but being quite content with her health, friends, and good job.
Don't get me started on how the two dukes were addressed. There was not one "Your Grace" or "His Grace" in the entire story. I've said this a few times before, and I'll say it again. A peer's title and surname are NOT the same in the overwhelming majority of cases. For example- Arthur Worthington, the Duke of Jameson. He is the Duke of Jameson, never Duke Jameson. He is addressed as "Your Grace" and referred to as "His Grace," not by his Christian name, unless he has given the person permission to do so in private conversations.
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Only Way to Tame a Rake was my least favorite story. Gregory Hernshaw is a rake. He will sleep with any lady who's willing to lie down with him. He has a bad reputation. Fathers are told to keep their daughters away from him. Respectable people move away when they see him coming. His father is now feeling the wrath of the town's displeasure, so he insists Gregory marry.
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The Duke of London's Baby seemed to have a few plot pieces missing. I never felt like I got a complete picture of this story. Peter, the Duke of London, is returning from a military victory in America. He meets a red-haired serving girl named Tilly in a tavern.
Cassandra Michaels is a talented story-teller. The writing is good. These short stories have the potential to be good full-length novels if the plots are expanded and the characters are developed better. There are a few grammatical errors that a good editor would have caught before the book was published.
I'm reviewing the Dukes pregnant maid, but most of the stories were good. So I enjoyed the Dukes pregnant maid, I am not really a big fan of short stories usually. This story was pretty good though and enjoyable. If u like short stories you will probably really like it.
Somewhat Historical Romance and a generous bonus of other romance genre
There are 26 short romance stories written by Cassandra Michaels included in the bonus version of the kindle. I was very conflicted about writing a review of these stories especially the beginning romances which are presented as: historical romance, Regency Romance, and 1800's Victorian Romance. I am aware that the author is young and enthusiastic about writing but she desperately needs to study the period culture that she is writing about. I would recommend that she stays away from Dukes completely and focuses on the lesser nobles for her heroes. For example in The Duke's Pregnant Maid there are the following discrepancies in one small section (this shouldn't reveal the plot): The mistress sends her maid out at dusk to deliver a message to the Duke ( where's the footman, single maid at night a no no) she travels through the cold and knocks on the front door and the Duke opens the door himself ( where's the butler?, servants use servant entrance) Duke is shocked and takes her into the kitchen where HE has a kettle boiling water and makes the maid some tea (Dukes usually know nothing about kitchens sometimes not even where they are located, and they don't make tea for maids). Well that's a small taste of the problems involved. Another story has a mother invite 7 Dukes to dinner to meet her single daughter. There's no indication that these ladies have titles or money yet the Dukes show up anyway. Actual Dukes being very rare and are usually connected to the Royal Family or a Military War Hero and Leader makes this abundance of marriageble Dukes is astounding. In another story the Duke was a commoner who was friends with the King as a child. He is addressed as Sir William, and when he goes to another country he calls the Prince 'Your Grace'. He is also concerned that he'll loose his title if his King is displeased. The actual normal way to loose a Dukedom is by being beheaded and that depends on the King and the historical period you're aiming at. (So King=Your Majesty, Prince=Your Highness, and Duke=Your Grace. All the others are addressed as My Lord or Your Lordship, except for the Knights who are addressed as Sir.) I kept thinking if the author had aimed lower perhaps a Viscount, most of the jarring inconsistencies could be overlooked. I also felt that if she wrote contemporary romance and avoided the historical stuff her writing would be fine. And surprise, as I continued reading there was one historical romance concerning a young rake that totally worked because the improbable Duke was missing.
Much later several stories about contemporary Navy Seals were written that worked very well. Please don't be discouraged by this review. You can write. Drop the Dukes and aim at the lower nobility such as a Viscount who might answer his own door. Please read up on English Social Customs, traditions and history. And watch out for contemporary language such as 'okay', DNA', and maids who talk back to their employers. I could tell by the idioms used that you are fairly young. Please continue your writing but get someone with a historical background to edit the content. There are writing groups that meet, make some friends. Your contemporary romance works. Good luck.