4 stars
Once in a while, I encounter a book with a unique and quirky plot. With Kids of Appetite, it was the title and premise that drew me in. But before I get to that, I want to say something first.
I'm going to be blunt with you all. This is just my personal opinion: I felt like I was reading a carbon copy of one of John Green's books. Now, that isn't to say that David Arnold is trying to emulate John Green. That isn't the case. It's just I've notice that several books have that whimsical, quirky element John Green's books has. John Green didn't invent a new genre of books since even before he wrote, there were other books out there that had that same uniqueness. With David Arnold, I had heard about his first book, Mosquitoland and was interested in it. But then I read somewhere the main character uses lipstick on her face to make war paint and the first thing that popped to mind was: "No." To me, it felt like Arnold was trying to create a quirky character and tried too hard.
But then Kids of Appetite was released and I thought that I would give Arnold a chance. Now that I'm done with it, I can say that while I enjoyed it, it did feel like a carbon copy of John Green. The book is good, don't get me wrong, but I could see how Arnold tried to make his characters stand out. Which isn't a bad thing since we are all individuals and have our own personalities, but they stood out too much to the point where the characters felt almost not believable. (Then again, when I visit Austin on occasions, the people there could feel like book characters sometimes.)
The more I got into the book, the more I started to understand the characters. The story is quirky, but at it's core it goes into so many issues such as losing a parent, abuse, suicide, etc.. Had it not been for those issues, I'd would've gave this book a lower rating. Luckily that wasn't the case because I actually enjoyed reading KOA.
So the story begins with Vic being interrogated by the police in regards to a murder that happened. And in another room, the other main character Madeline A.K.A Mad is also being interrogated. From there, we go a few days back to where Vic has runaway from his home after his mom was proposed to her boyfriend. Vic is angry and sad that this is happening because he's still having issues about his dad who died a few years ago. He took an urn containing his father's ashes with him. After a while he meets Mad and she then introduces Vic to the other characters: Baz, Zuz, and Coco. From there, they decide to spread the ashes of Vic's father in various locations that are on a list inside the urn.
I wasn't sure what to expect from KOA. I mean, we got a cast of social misfits going around town spreading the ashes of someone, what could possibly happen? A lot, apparently. There are lots of points where of the book where it's all fun and happy then sad. There is a deep story and while the plot is basic, it has a lot to offer.
What I liked about KOA was how honest Vic and Mad were. Vic is dealing with the death of his father; having trouble coping and Mad is trying to find her place in life after her parents were killed. Not to mention something bad happening behind closed doors. They each are facing troubles and are trying to overcome them. Even though Vic came off as a bit selfish at the beginning, I did understand why he was that way even though I don't agree with it. And Mad is just a wayward soul who is trying to cope as well as find a way to be free. They both just want to be better, and I liked it. Out of all the characters, they felt the most honest and believable.
Plot wise, I was entertained. There have been books where the character(s) have to complete a list of things in order to either find answers or have closure. While some parts of the plot was whimsical, there was also the sub plot of the murder.
Now let's get to the nitty gritty and talk about the negatives.
First off: Coco. Coco felt like a caricature of a loud mouth adult. She is eleven and curses, has a very colorful imagination, and is, like I said, a loud mouth. I did not believe she was a real character. Had she been older, I might've liked her or even tolerated her. That wasn't the case. Also, she didn't feel like an eleven year old to me. Granted, I'm 21 and it's been 10 years since I was eleven. I don't know how eleven year olds are acting nowadays. I can't even imagine how eleven year olds acted back then.
Second: The whimsical aspect of the story. I liked the story but parts of it did feel like a John Green book. With how the characters were acting, their quirky nicknames for some things, and the dialogue. There were parts where I was like "You guys are interesting," and other where I was like "Okay, calm down." There is a thing as being too quirky.
Verdict
Even though I did have trouble with the quirkiness of the story, I did enjoy Kids of Appetite. Though I may not read Mosquitoland, I am looking forward to see what David Arnold has in store for us in his next book.
Thanks for reading my review!
-Cesar