RATING FOR THE FIRST 3/4: Low 2 stars
RATING FOR THE LAST 1/4: Solid 5 stars
I am REALLY stuck between 3 and 4 for this.
Until the AWESOME finale, it was actually more like 2.5 stars.
I can't tell you how much I was anticipating this book. When I got an ARC, I whooped and danced and started reading it the minute it was in my little hands, expecting that I would have it finished within the night. It wasn't that long, I love horror, and Amy Lukavics seems like a really cool lady. So I was so excited for this; I even passed up the opportunity to have that gorgeous cover so I could read it early. My own copy is fairly standard purple, blank with spiky letters.
Then...
Well, I started reading. I liked it well enough, don't get me wrong -- this isn't the build to some savage takedown. It just didn't grab me. For a novel that took so long to get to any creepy stuff, I didn't find the characters interesting enough to compel me for several long chapters before anything much happens. Also, initially, the character seem to call each other "sister" and "daughter" at the end of every single line and, at first, it drove me nuts. Thankfully, this slackened off in the middle, or I stopped noticing, but I've read a lot of 18/19th-century literature and, though they do address each other as this from time to time, not nearly as much as the characters in this book did at first. It didn't really feel authentic to the period for me.
Also, one of the things that sadly was a HUGE hurdle to me loving it (and the thing that ultimately pulled it down from 4 stars for me) was an enormous amount of telling-over-showing. Amanda keeps telling us that Emily distrusts her and has cooled off towards her, but there is so little of their relationship that I didn't really get it. Rather than showing Amanda's emotions, Lukavics just kept telling us what Amanda was feeling.
Or, to illustrate in a broader point: Amanda's parents are religious, which is a little bit of a stumbling block for me anyway because my family isn't. I do appreciate that many people in the time period this is set (1800s) were incredibly religious but the problem with reading this novel in the 21st century is that it's no longer easy to ASSUME religion as I do when I'm reading a book actually published in the 1800s. Therefore, I found it hard to sympathise with or comprehend the threat to Amanda because she merely kept telling us that she didn't know what she would do because her parents would freak out/disown her/damn her to hell, but I never felt any particular threat because her parents, well, they barely did anything. They just sort of sat there, occasionally doing housework or asking Amanda what was wrong, but they felt like very thin, underdeveloped characters.
So Amanda keeps complaining about her own fear of the devil and feelings about her pregnancy, and, for a while, that's it. Though her sister, Emily, seems sweet, and the doctor's son who lives a little way away, Zeke, is interesting, we never really get a sense of what's interesting or promising about these characters. Until about 3/4 of the way through, the plotting is so repetitive and Amanda's thought processes are so static and predictable that I got bored several times with this book. Although Lukavics is clearly a talented writer and that kept me coming back, there is none of the real gasp or thrill factor I wanted from a horror novel. That's ultimately why it took me over two months to read a very short novel.
I know that, in order to be invested when scares pile up, we should know stuff about the characters, but ultimately this clan just seemed too dull and characterless that the supposed "character development" felt more like foot-dragging as we learned nothing about them. I also felt Lukavics kept too much mysterious - I still don't understand why the exact circumstances of Amanda's little sister, Hannah's, birth had to be kept so vague for so long, as there was nothing all that dramatic about the revelation. I don't know whether to call the pace/plot development glacial or non-existent, as it's page 154 (!) before we get our first (and, to my knowledge, only) creepy story about the prairie, and there had only been maybe a couple of scares before that. It was all just too slow and not interesting enough for my tastes.
However, this situation almost worsened by how much better the novel got in the last 50 or so pages. It went from being a fairly dull, underwhelming story with a few stilted scares to suddenly becoming a tense, thrilling, and disturbing novel about a tainted land. I loved it then -- and that made me sad, because it showed me that Amy Lukavics can write a deliciously disturbed YA horror. Suddenly the scares lined up, and I felt visibly shaken, especially from that last scene where Amanda and Emily met Dr Jacobsen and Zeke. The ending was perfectly pitched and, despite a final annoying moment where Amanda suddenly figured out everything on the spot - with no preamble - simply because the time was right. However, this is underselling the truly haunting and unusual ending, which sprung a few genuine surprises on me. I will be thinking about the fate of some of their family for a long, long time from this moment on. i honestly can't believe that some people on this Goodreads page are saying it doesn't go heavy on the horror! Maybe not at first but, after a while, trust me, Lukavics can really bring it when she chooses, which made it a pity that she doesn't do it more often.
In short, it became the novel I knew it could be, and that upset me because I didn't understand what had stopped it from getting there earlier. It was literally like the entire novel treaded water until the final section and, in many ways, it was like the plot didn't even begin until then, but, when it did...Jesus Christ. This could have been a classic YA horror, and it should have been, really. I wanted so much more from it, too: what was that thing on the land? How did it get there? AND WHAT THE HELL WAS HENRY PLAYING AT? I'm a little irritated that an entire 300-page novel didn't even bother to make an attempt to slightly explain that. One day, I think Amy Lukavics will be the one true queen of YA horror, and my main disappointment is that it won't be today.
So, my final thought on the novel is this - damn it, Lukavics, what took you so long?