Carter Anderson is Master of Evenmere, and with his wife Sarah and son Jason, is quite happy with his life. His telegraph project, an attempt to hasten communication between the members of the White Circle, is underway, and all seems well. That is, until a new threat arises in the hallways of Evenmere. The Poetry Men, a group of radical anarchists who have found a seemingly new source of power, are rampaging unchecked throughout the High House. If left to their own devices, the Poets would destroy all of Existence. And so Carter is once more called upon to stop the growing threat. But matters are complicated when the Supreme Anarchist discovers many of the secrets of the Masters of Evenmere, gaining control over the dream dimension and finding his way even to the Inner Chambers, gaining access to Jason and therefore forcing Carter into a temporary truce, with disastrous results.
The third (and final?) book in the Evenmere Series, Evenmere follows much the same style as the previous two books, though from a technical standpoint, it seems to flow somewhat better. The architectural jargon is still present, though perhaps to a lesser degree; the author seems to spend less time describing the various areas of the House and more time following the action, thus increasing the speed at which the story flows. At times, the story does feel a bit disjointed; some things that are brought up in the beginning seem almost to be forgotten by the end, or do not appear to have much to do with the overall story. One such instance is a scene where Enoch is accosted by a Poetry Woman. It is quite an interesting scene, and shows some of the power of the Windkeep, but at the same time seems to add little to the overall storyline.
Though, in Evenmere, the author spends a couple of chapters wrapping everything up, explaining all the things that happened throughout the book. Something that seems to have been a trend throughout the series is the disjointed nature of the beginning of each book compared to its conclusion. The books all begin with a certain “feel” to them, but by the end, the “feel” completely shifts to something else. That being the case, Evenmere feels much more cohesive than the previous two books, despite the odd elements at the beginning that seem somewhat out of place.
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One thing that is different from the other books is the ending of this one, in that the whole driving force of the plot is shown to be a foil, a smoke-screen, if you will, meant to mask the true threat to Existence. There are hints throughout that this is the case, but it does not become evident until the last few chapters. Such a ploy is a mark of a good story, if executed in the right way; just when the reader thinks that they have the story all figured out, the author pulls back the curtain, shouting “Surprise!” and reveals the real plot; Stoddard is able to do this very thing.
Also of note is the concept of Deep Machine, the engine that runs Evenmere. The concept of Evenmere, a House that runs Existence, is quite interesting; but in this book we discover that there is another, deeper reality that runs Evenmere. There are layers and layers and layers, as one character from the book might say. The concept of Deep Machine is really quite intriguing, and was one element that contributed to the engaging nature of this story. Generally it might be considered a poor choice to introduce an entire new concept into a series in the last book towards the end of the story; but Stoddard does it well enough to prevent it from seeming tacked on or inconsistent with the rest of the series.
Perhaps one of the largest issues with Evenmere from a plot-standpoint is the fact that the Poetry Men are a real threat, and yet they are almost glossed over at the end, when the true threat is revealed, nearly forgotten. The major problems they caused were miraculously repaired once the real threat was dealt with, and hardy receive more than passing reference. Considering that stopping the Poets was the main force driving Carter throughout the book, it seems fitting that they should have perhaps had a bit more of a wrap-up. There is one particular scene where a Poet attempts to stop Carter from freeing someone near the end of the story, and the focus given to that particular Poet seemed to imply that he was someone significant; but Carter defeats him easily, and no more is said of him.
This leads to another point, already briefly touched on earlier, which is not so much an issue, simply an interesting element within the story; and actually probably a good thing. When the source of the Poetry Men’s power is cut off, the reader may think it was too easy. And of course, it was; for the Poetry Men were not the real masterminds behind the destruction they caused; they were mere pawns in a more malevolent being’s plan. That of course adds to the drama and encourages the reader to continue reading. There is also another twist at the end of the book that certainly adds a new and really quite intriguing element to the story, which makes one see the previous books in a different light. More will not be said of it here, as it would not really be possible to mention any more without spoiling it; and that would lessen the impact when one actually reads it.
Overall, Evenmere is probably the best of the three books in the series, the most engaging for the reader, the most interesting story-wise. It has all the main characters from the previous two books, which certainly adds a sense of familiarity, and it also introduces the reader to some new characters. The stakes are brought even higher than in The False House, as the anarchists are given the means to change Existence to something more of their liking, and nearly accomplish it. Probably one of the best things about the story is that the reader knows good must win out in the end, and yet it seems uncertain; when Carter makes mistakes, it seems to the reader that perhaps the anarchists will be victorious.
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One final thought about the story’s end: Jormungand, essentially the embodiment of death in Stoddard’s world, is confined to the attic of the House throughout the series. He was bound there presumably by Christ’s death on the cross. However, when the anarchists kidnapped him in The False House, upon the destruction of their version of Evenmere, Jormungand was no longer bound in the attic. It takes the sacrifice of another innocent victim at the end of Evenmere to bind him there once more. Here is the issue from a theological standpoint: Stoddard is writing from a Christian worldview; but that being said, death was defeated once for all by Christ’s death. That leaves no room for another sacrifice; Jormungand should have been bound and unable to escape. There was another book series where something similar happened, and someone else brought this contradiction to my attention in regards to that series. If one looks at the series as something taking place in an alternate reality, then perhaps there is no issue; but Stoddard wants us to see the world of the High House as embodying our own world. If that is the case, then Christ’s once for all sacrifice should have bound Jormungand forever (it should be noted that Jormungand may be interpreted as various forms of evil; if the author’s intent was for him to represent something other than death, this whole point is rather moot).