But, but, but...It can't end like that! It can't end like that! Not a cliffhanger! Nooooo!
Oh, fine. At least part of the ending was satisfying.
I've given "Merchant of Alyss" four stars, but it's really more like four-and-a-half stars, which is a half-star improvement over the rating I gave previous book, "Emissary". (I'm withholding that last half-a-star until I know how things work out in the final book.)
While this story was still as quickly paced as "Emissary", I felt like the characters, both old and new, and their relationships were developed better in this story than in "Emissary". I also have fewer complaints about the writing style, particularly in the realm of descriptions (or lack thereof). Mr. Locke's descriptions still tend to be minimalistic, which isn't bad in and of itself, but it's not a style I'm used to reading, and there was still a time or two when I had trouble picturing some things based on the little information given.
As far as the story itself goes, things pick up about a year and a half after the ending of “Emissary”, and after getting a brief glimpse of what everyone has been doing in that time, events are set into motion and never stop. I’m going to pretty vague here because I don’t want to spoil anything, but overall, I liked the story. I liked seeing the main characters grow and change and overcome seemingly impossible challenges. I enjoyed getting to discover new parts of “The Realm” that we didn’t see in “Emissary”, and I thought the new mythological creatures that we meet were pretty cool.
My only complaints are that A) Occasionally it felt like some things happened specifically for the purpose of moving the plot along quickly rather than feeling natural, but it wasn’t often enough to bother me too much. B) Love triangle. Whyyyyyy. It wasn’t the worst love triangle ever, but one of the parties involved annoyed me a little until she matured and finally let it go. Seriously, could the girl not take a hint? He’s obviously not into you like that, not to mention HE’S ALREADY MARRIED! And C) Ciffhanger ending. Whyyyyyyyy? I would have less of a problem with this if the next book was already out, or there was at least a set release date for the next book, but as far as I know, there isn’t, and I wanna know what happens!
In closing, for those thinking about starting this series I suggest that you read "Emissary" and "Merchant of Alyss back-to-back if you can, or at least don't wait so long between them that you forget the plot of "Emissary", because the author very much expects the reader to keep up without having to remind you of everything. Seriously, aside from the occasional allusion to things that happened in the previous story (pretty much only when it's directly relevant to the plot of the current story) you have to remember who the characters are, what they've been through, and how they know each other all on your own. You. Will. Not. Be. Reminded.
This wasn’t a problem for me because I didn’t get around to reading “Emissary” until late last year and have a good memory for literature anyway, but I have a feeling that I'll have to refresh my memory by the time the last book comes out.
So... When's the next book coming out?