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Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? Light Novel #6
Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon? Light Novels, Vol. 6
(Volume 5)Bell, along with his adventuring party of Welf the swordsmith and Lilly the supporter, has made it into the middle floors of the Dungeon, but the schemes of another party have stranded them there! Hestia's going to need to send help, but will the rescuers arrive in time to save Bell and his friends from the monster that's got them cornered? The familia myth of the boy and the goddess continues!
260 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 13, 2014
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Fujino Omori
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Name (in native language): 大森藤ノ
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ŌMORI Fujino
Name (in native language): 大森藤ノ
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OMORI Fujino
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June 6, 2017
I was planning to read each of the books in the series, but after watching the anime (which covers the first five volumes) I decided to just go ahead and skip to volume 6 since I was feeling impatient. This volume was great, and I see why some people say why the first five volumes are really just the start of this series. I think the author himself says this in the afterward as well.
Personally, chapter 2 was my favorite by far, but chapter five was great too despite there being loads of action, but the quick viewpoint shifts kept me pretty engaged and the ending was pretty fun.
I haven't said too much about the writing and obvious typos and such these books have had, but some things were a bit annoying in their inconsistently. The first two chapters are almost entirely told from Bell's perspective, and they're in present tense. Then the book goes into past tense, even when going back into Bell's point of view, which is odd. Another thing is that there's page breaks in between viewpoint shifts for most of this book, but in the later sections a lot of those page breaks disappear and we're jumping around in peoples heads very frequently without much of an indication for the reader, which is a little confusing.
One last thing is that despite Bell getting the first two chapters primarily to himself, I wish there had been more scenes from his point of view. At times it seems like we get every point of view that isn't Bell, and he's the main character.
Those issues aside, I rather enjoyed the story, and story wise, I give this book five stars.
Personally, chapter 2 was my favorite by far, but chapter five was great too despite there being loads of action, but the quick viewpoint shifts kept me pretty engaged and the ending was pretty fun.
I haven't said too much about the writing and obvious typos and such these books have had, but some things were a bit annoying in their inconsistently. The first two chapters are almost entirely told from Bell's perspective, and they're in present tense. Then the book goes into past tense, even when going back into Bell's point of view, which is odd. Another thing is that there's page breaks in between viewpoint shifts for most of this book, but in the later sections a lot of those page breaks disappear and we're jumping around in peoples heads very frequently without much of an indication for the reader, which is a little confusing.
One last thing is that despite Bell getting the first two chapters primarily to himself, I wish there had been more scenes from his point of view. At times it seems like we get every point of view that isn't Bell, and he's the main character.
Those issues aside, I rather enjoyed the story, and story wise, I give this book five stars.
September 7, 2020
Certainly the best of the mainline novels thus far. Big things happen in this book. Bigger than the other volumes. Not just to Bell but the people around him. I can't talk about it too specifically without spoiling things. I know there is a spoiler tag, but that would cover pretty much everything.
There are some really great character moments, some really fantastic familia moments, and some really big happenstance in this one. Ahh, I am sitting here wanting to tell you all about it but also fighting myself holding back so as to not tell you what actually happens. Just know it's worth reading.
Verdict: The first five volumes are good and give you a solid introduction to the characters and world... but if you felt like the series hadn't actually gotten very far -- read on since this one kicks it into high gear!
There are some really great character moments, some really fantastic familia moments, and some really big happenstance in this one. Ahh, I am sitting here wanting to tell you all about it but also fighting myself holding back so as to not tell you what actually happens. Just know it's worth reading.
Verdict: The first five volumes are good and give you a solid introduction to the characters and world... but if you felt like the series hadn't actually gotten very far -- read on since this one kicks it into high gear!
April 14, 2019
At the end of volume five of this series, the god Apollo was doing some creepy planning for something about Bell Cranell, and in this volume we find out just what that is. He wants Bell for his own, and to that end, sets up our young adventurer so that he can lay claim to him in a War Game. Of course, Hestia refuses, as she is outmatched literally a 100 to 1.
The thing is that Apollo is not a nice god, and has no notion of restraint when he wants something. He will do what he has to do to get his heart's desire. Even if it means engaging in some pretty vile actions. To this end, he relentlessly chases down and tries to harm Bell and Hestia, until Hestia relents and challenges him to a War Game. Thrilled at his inevitable (to him) victory, Apollo doesn't realize he will really regret his choices.
This volume is the first to tell the story beyond the thirteen episode anime adaptation, which covered the first five books of the series. Here we see what could be seen as the first "arc" (the founding and expansion of Hestia Familia) completed after six books.
I can't get into much more of what I mean without major spoilers, but it's really cool.
This is the most action-packed story so far in the series, even more so than book five. From about a third of the way through onward, the action just doesn't stop for more than a short and brief period of time. Literally half the book is fight sequences. They are really well-written to the point that I could fly through them, when normally I don't like uninterrupted action scenes.
The furthering of the mythology of the story, with subtle hints here and there, was also neat, was was the clear fleshing out of Bell's and Aiz's growing relationship and the realization of the tensions it can cause between their Familias.
Really, other than making things a bit too pat and easy by creating an easy enemy to blame in Lilly's part of the story, there isn't anything I can complain about when it comes to volume six of Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon. The cast of characters that aid Hestia, Welf, and Lilly are fun to see come together for a common purpose. I can't say anything beyond that vagueness without giving away the plot, but it's really fun to read, because it shows us more facets to the characters, god and follower both.
Highly Recommended for fans of this series or fantasy in general.
The thing is that Apollo is not a nice god, and has no notion of restraint when he wants something. He will do what he has to do to get his heart's desire. Even if it means engaging in some pretty vile actions. To this end, he relentlessly chases down and tries to harm Bell and Hestia, until Hestia relents and challenges him to a War Game. Thrilled at his inevitable (to him) victory, Apollo doesn't realize he will really regret his choices.
This volume is the first to tell the story beyond the thirteen episode anime adaptation, which covered the first five books of the series. Here we see what could be seen as the first "arc" (the founding and expansion of Hestia Familia) completed after six books.
I can't get into much more of what I mean without major spoilers, but it's really cool.
This is the most action-packed story so far in the series, even more so than book five. From about a third of the way through onward, the action just doesn't stop for more than a short and brief period of time. Literally half the book is fight sequences. They are really well-written to the point that I could fly through them, when normally I don't like uninterrupted action scenes.
The furthering of the mythology of the story, with subtle hints here and there, was also neat, was was the clear fleshing out of Bell's and Aiz's growing relationship and the realization of the tensions it can cause between their Familias.
Really, other than making things a bit too pat and easy by creating an easy enemy to blame in Lilly's part of the story, there isn't anything I can complain about when it comes to volume six of Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon. The cast of characters that aid Hestia, Welf, and Lilly are fun to see come together for a common purpose. I can't say anything beyond that vagueness without giving away the plot, but it's really fun to read, because it shows us more facets to the characters, god and follower both.
Highly Recommended for fans of this series or fantasy in general.
November 8, 2016
The story is starting to really take off.
This story was very intense. There was action around every corner. This is the first book the really takes place outside the dungeon. I personally like it. I hope it is a sign of what is to come because it means a expanded view of the world. I want to see how far Bell can go. The family is finally growing in more ways then one. While I cannot wait for the next one I have to.
This story was very intense. There was action around every corner. This is the first book the really takes place outside the dungeon. I personally like it. I hope it is a sign of what is to come because it means a expanded view of the world. I want to see how far Bell can go. The family is finally growing in more ways then one. While I cannot wait for the next one I have to.
June 11, 2017
Good story.
Very good sequence on the series. Character progress is great and I like the way the've been evolving. Also I like the way the author didn't waste time to extend the story and make this one very dynamic.
Very good sequence on the series. Character progress is great and I like the way the've been evolving. Also I like the way the author didn't waste time to extend the story and make this one very dynamic.
December 9, 2016
I want to read it becase it's really good
February 13, 2022
Not one foot is placed inside the dungeon this volume but that doesn't make it a filler or a boring volume because while we don't fight against monsters we get great fights against a different familia.
I really enjoyed the pacing, coming off the big events from the last volume it starts of slow with Bell gathering his energie given the reader a look into a different side of Otario. Before slowly building up to the big war game.
Besides great pacing we also get some more time with the other characters. Lily, Welf and Mikoto to name the big ones. While I really like Bell as a character it is always nice to get to know what really drives the other characters adventuring along side Bell.
All in all 5 stars from me and ready to start the next one!
I really enjoyed the pacing, coming off the big events from the last volume it starts of slow with Bell gathering his energie given the reader a look into a different side of Otario. Before slowly building up to the big war game.
Besides great pacing we also get some more time with the other characters. Lily, Welf and Mikoto to name the big ones. While I really like Bell as a character it is always nice to get to know what really drives the other characters adventuring along side Bell.
All in all 5 stars from me and ready to start the next one!
January 14, 2018
This story was epic. It was easily the best story yet. I would give it 6 stars if I could. So much happens. Bell and Aiz dancing was awesome. Bell and Hestia being chased through the town and attacked by over 100 people was amazing. Then Hestia's familia grew considerably and Lily was freed from her familia. Oh man the story was full of action.
To finish it off the story ending with an amazing war game with Bell and friends raiding a castle. Such an epic battle. The result changed everything. This story should be an animated movie. It was just that good.
To finish it off the story ending with an amazing war game with Bell and friends raiding a castle. Such an epic battle. The result changed everything. This story should be an animated movie. It was just that good.
August 17, 2019
Very much worth reading, but...
I am enamored with the plot and characters, really loving it. The depictions of dialogue and action read quite a bit like a fan-fiction though. Not sure if that is due to translation, an attribute of the light-novel genre (it is my first time reading one), or what. Descriptions and inner monologue do not suffer from the same issue, however. If I could rate aspects individually, I'd give the plot and characterization 5's, and dialogue and action writing maybe 3's. That's why I settled on giving the book a 4 overall.
I am enamored with the plot and characters, really loving it. The depictions of dialogue and action read quite a bit like a fan-fiction though. Not sure if that is due to translation, an attribute of the light-novel genre (it is my first time reading one), or what. Descriptions and inner monologue do not suffer from the same issue, however. If I could rate aspects individually, I'd give the plot and characterization 5's, and dialogue and action writing maybe 3's. That's why I settled on giving the book a 4 overall.
October 31, 2017
Did a great job building relationship between characters in the past volumes, it really makes it worth hardships that we lived with Bell and Hestia Familia facing it with never giving up to it, I really think that choosing to build up the story for the past five volumes really makes the critical moments that I live in this volume surprisingly Efficient on me while remembering all the hardships that they have faced until now.
September 17, 2018
"En résumé, un tome qui m'a énormément plu et qui permet de se poser un peu avant de reprendre le voyage dans les strates. Le côté déité est aussi plus mis en avant, ce qui est un point non négligeable. Les personnages évoluent également et Bell prend enfin des décisions d'adulte. Il me tarde à présent de lire le tome 7 !"
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December 24, 2017
Coming from the much faster paced anime, I didnt care for a lot of the excess details or people excessively praising Bell or how he was easily incited to a bar brawl or things like them going out drinking alcohol to celebrate. It felt slow and boring in the city whereas I prefer the dungeon and monster battles.
July 16, 2019
WOW!
i normally dont read books, but as i watched the anime i got curious. Reading through this Novel made me realise how much more detail and passion these novels had. I was so into the story i didnt realise i had just finished the book.
Looking forward to reading the next volume! :)
i normally dont read books, but as i watched the anime i got curious. Reading through this Novel made me realise how much more detail and passion these novels had. I was so into the story i didnt realise i had just finished the book.
Looking forward to reading the next volume! :)
September 26, 2017
This volume finally takes us beyond the point of the anime series. And it's fantastic. There are still elements of the harem comedy about it, but the women really get a chance to shine in their own right. I look forward to reading the next volume, seeing how things develop.
July 14, 2019
Thrilling!
By far in many ways my favorite book so far! It took me back to when i first watched the thirteenth warrior. With the gathering of the members. The fighting was on a new level from anything previously read in the series. I pray the anime lives up to this book.
By far in many ways my favorite book so far! It took me back to when i first watched the thirteenth warrior. With the gathering of the members. The fighting was on a new level from anything previously read in the series. I pray the anime lives up to this book.
May 8, 2018
Excited
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June 12, 2018
Riveting
Could see about half of the twists and turns coming but the one I couldn't see coming where thrilling and kept me inthralled in the book.
Could see about half of the twists and turns coming but the one I couldn't see coming where thrilling and kept me inthralled in the book.
April 13, 2019
Familia Ties
I loved this volume. It starts with a strong conflict and ends with a strong resolution. Can't wait to get into the next one.
I loved this volume. It starts with a strong conflict and ends with a strong resolution. Can't wait to get into the next one.
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May 21, 2019great novel
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July 20, 2019
Page turner
Fast paced action with good thrills. Liked the way each character allowed to show their skill and importance. Waiting for anime..
Fast paced action with good thrills. Liked the way each character allowed to show their skill and importance. Waiting for anime..
November 4, 2019
The climax felt rushed and didn't have the impact of the previous books, but this was still a fun read.
September 27, 2020
The volume where everything comes together for Hestia Familia.
February 28, 2021
This book was incredible with the fight scenes and the growth bell shows throughout the book. It also dives more into his relationship with Aiz! Omori hit it out of the park once again!
April 7, 2023
It's rare these days that I feel the need to write a review, but this is the best book in the series so far.
Fun, exciting.
And it was nice to see Bell's allies step up.
Fun, exciting.
And it was nice to see Bell's allies step up.
February 17, 2017
This is the first Novel that is after the anime series ended.
Where as the last 5 books have introduced 1 character per adventure and slowly built up the group this story has them working as a team in an epic battle which doesn't even touch the dungeon!
Very fun read... Enjoyed!
Where as the last 5 books have introduced 1 character per adventure and slowly built up the group this story has them working as a team in an epic battle which doesn't even touch the dungeon!
Very fun read... Enjoyed!
September 13, 2016
Good book
This is a good book. I wonder what will happen next to the hestia family. I wonder. I will be reading the next volume.
This is a good book. I wonder what will happen next to the hestia family. I wonder. I will be reading the next volume.
January 3, 2017
This series is getting exponentially better. The author (translator?) still has a very odd structure when explaining who is speaking. It tends to give you untagged speech, then a paragraph describing the actions taking place around the speech, then show who spoke during that paragraph. It's very odd but when you get used to it it's not a big deal.
Other than that, the action is fantastic, the characters are growing. The fan service stuff has been timed way down here. Characters are starting to understand each other, and you see some satisfying conclusions to minor plot threads weaving throughout the first 5 books. The end of this book feels like it marks a true beginning of chapter 1 for the series and the end of the introduction, and the afterword by the author makes clear this is accurate. Good stuff.
For those interested, this novel picks up immediately at the end of the first (only one right now) anime season and goes straight from there. You could skip the first 5 books, watch the show, and be fine. But the first 5 books are quite enjoyable.
Other than that, the action is fantastic, the characters are growing. The fan service stuff has been timed way down here. Characters are starting to understand each other, and you see some satisfying conclusions to minor plot threads weaving throughout the first 5 books. The end of this book feels like it marks a true beginning of chapter 1 for the series and the end of the introduction, and the afterword by the author makes clear this is accurate. Good stuff.
For those interested, this novel picks up immediately at the end of the first (only one right now) anime season and goes straight from there. You could skip the first 5 books, watch the show, and be fine. But the first 5 books are quite enjoyable.
September 13, 2021
As with all main series danmachi books, it's a fairly easy read, until I stumble into a character or scene that infuriates me and I have to stop reading for a month or risk throwing my reader at a wall. This book, while semi making me like characters I previously disliked, plain refuses to let a character refuse a drug dealer. It's very epic, I suppose, but it also validates the drug dealer's views so.... no. And yes, it's a drug, call it what it is instead of trying to weasel out of it.
Should I comment on the main antagonist? Better not, at least he is condemned by the story itself, explicitly.
Writing is better than ever. I believe even the author must have noticed how much worse the first pov sections were, because now they are almost absent. A change for the better. The plot seems more soloid and I like the build ups. Shame about the inherent unfairness of the setting.
Should I comment on the main antagonist? Better not, at least he is condemned by the story itself, explicitly.
Writing is better than ever. I believe even the author must have noticed how much worse the first pov sections were, because now they are almost absent. A change for the better. The plot seems more soloid and I like the build ups. Shame about the inherent unfairness of the setting.
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