Help, It Won't Go Soft!

by Jean-Luc Cheri

An erotic short story. This story is so hot, the rules don’t allow it to be described completely. See the look-inside for the full description.
Denise has recently returned from her first year away at college, when eighteen-year-old Sam comes home from a night out with his friends. Due to a practical joke played on him, he has a serious problem, and he needs Denise’s help to solve it. Will she be able to help Sam out, or will her attempts reveal the hidden taboo desire between them?

Contains graphic descriptions of taboo sex. Adults only.

13,458 words, or 54 standard pages, in length. (Not including supplementary material)

83 pages, Kindle Edition

Published December 30, 2015

Reviews

[Steve Naylor · Rating 4 out of 5]

Rating 4.0 stars

I wonder if I need to change my designations? Erotica is such a broad category. There are books with sex in them and then there are books pretty much only about sex. Even though this one is just about sex, I did like the setup. So I guess this would be smut though with a little more thought put into it?

19 year old is home after college sitting in her room when her brother comes home acting weird. Their parents are out of town for the weekend. They aren't really blood related but have been a family since their parents married when she was 4 and he was 3. She starts reminiscing about how close they used to be. They even used to skinny dip and take baths together. That is until she was 12 and started to develop. That is when her mother gave her the "talk". That is also when she saw her first erect penis. Her brothers. Before then it had always been soft. As she grew up she saw the effect she had on boys and loved it. She was very sexually adventurous in college. She was actually getting a little bit horny now since it had been a few weeks since she had sex. The way her brother was acting reminded her of that time he got hard looking at her. She wondered if he was in his room masturbating. She was getting turned on thinking about it. She told herself it was wrong but it happened. She decided to take care of herself as well. Using her vibrator she was working on her release when she pictured her brother again. What was wrong with her? Then she hears a knock on the door. Her brother is asking for her help. He is good looking though a bit shy. She thinks he is still a virgin. She finds out his friends played a prank on him. They dared him to drink a beer for the first time and after succumbing to peer pressure he finds out that they spiked his beer with one of their dads viagra. He is hard and it won't go down. It has been about an hour now. They talk and it is awkward for him but she gets him to admit that he already tried to masturbate and it didn't work. The so some google search and come up with some ideas. Ice is one of them. She gets him some ice and gets him to take his pants off to apply it directly. He is shy and makes her turn around but she sees him in her mirror. She can't believe how much he is packing. It is the biggest and girthiest she has ever seen. It wasn't that big when he was 11! The ice didn't work and started to hurt.

The next thing they try is a warm bath. She gets him to take his clothes off with her there but he is embarrassed. He makes a joke that if it no big deal why does she have clothes on? She takes her clothes off and gets in the bath with him. He comments that this is not going to make his erection go away. She gets him to admit that she is beautiful and she compliments him on his huge package. That he would be a catch for any woman. The warm water isn't working. If it takes more than 4 hours then he will have to go to the emergency room and he doesn't want that. She asks him if doing it himself didn't work, maybe he needs someone else to help him. Does he know a girl that would come over to give him a hand? He doesn't. He is a virgin. She then tells him she will help him. She tells him to pretend that she is his crush from school and starts giving him a handjob. She can't believe how big he is. This is getting her horny. She also starts to get a little jealous that he is thinking of his school crush and not her. After he cums he is still hard but very happy. He is out of it for a minute but he does open his eyes in time to see her tasting a drop of his semen. She tells him he tastes sweet and loves his state. He admits that he was thinking of her and not his crush. He also admits that he was thinking of her the first time he masturbated and recounts the story.

She takes him back to her room and tells him she will try something else. She wants to suck his c**k. He tastes so good. When she starts he admits to her that he wanted to taste her as well. They end up in a 69 position and is gives her a couple of orgams. He also gives her a rimjob which she loves and is something no other guy has ever done. After he comes again he is still hard. They only have about an hour left so she tells him she wants to have sex with him. He is shocked but she retorts that she already gave him a handjob and blowjob and made him come twice. She doesn't care if it is taboo. She wants to feel him inside her. They start kissing. She loves the feeling of closeness they now have. She mounts him and goes to town. After another orgasm he rolls her over and pounds into her and she loves it. They kiss some more until he comes for the 4th time. He finally gets soft. She tells him to get some rest because tomorrow they are going to f**k again and the next time he won't have viagra to help him.

Overall I liked the story. The taboo nature was mild. Everything that happened had a little bit of logic to the progression. There was enough of a backstory to make the characters more real and the sex was hot.

[Tom · Rating 3 out of 5]

Eighteen-year-old Sam came home from an evening with a group of guys at one guy’s house. His friends pulled a practical joke on Sam, and it had a lasting effect. When he got home and passed his nineteen-year-old sister’s bedroom on the way to his own bedroom, she told him that their mother had called to say that she and their father would be staying at grandma’s house that night to avoid a late 2 hour drive home. Sam continued on to his room but was unable to resolve by himself the problem caused by the practical joke. So, he went back to ask his sister, Denise, for her help.

The siblings recalled a similar but less intense situation from their younger years. Today, they felt that the problem would not resolve itself. So, Denise did an Internet search for possible ways to handle her brother’s difficulty. As they tried things, going from simple ones to more involved ones, they found it necessary to trust each other more and more. When they got past this hardship, they realized that they would be closer in their daily lives.

It says on the title page that this is the Amazon Edition of the book. That may mean that this edition differs from the original by the addition of a paragraph stating that Denise and Sam are step-siblings and are not biologically related. Also, just before the climactic event of the book, Denise reminds Sam that they are not natural siblings. It is unfortunate but unsurprising. It also affects the rating of the book.

Regardless of the above, whether the relationship is full, half, or step, when a guy finds that he has a hard problem, he should take it to his sister for help.