Having read numerous books by this author, this NetGalley reviewer always jumps at the chance to receive an ARC in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. However, this one really missed the mark with me. As a big fan of Scottish historical romance that is loaded with brogue, I was surprised to find this one was overly done. So much so, I often found myself having to reread parts to understand the dialog.
But the real turn off happened about 30% into it, and ultimately I couldn’t put it behind me. You see, the main couple are intimate, after only sharing a couple passionate kisses. Bethoc, the heroine, is so innocent and naive she has absolutely no idea how the deed is done. So much so I felt embarrassed for her. Then, frankly, I felt angry. Why? Well, let me use the author’s own words: “He liked her, alot, and now they had made love, which he also liked a lot. Callum was just not sure if all of that equalled love, the one thing his foster parents insisted was essential for a good match.”...(Wow! I guess they left out the importance of respecting/not taking advantage of innocent women)....Then he starts thinking about all the experience he has had with numerous lasses and starts to feel bad….“Callum cursed, shaking away the moment of doubt. He could not change anything in his past and he had done no harm. (Oh, really, big boy, she could be pregnant now!)...”There was nothing to feel guilty about.” (Yeah, keep telling yourself that laddy. Maybe you’ll start to believe it!)...”He was just put off his stride by Bethoc’s innocence. …He had hunted experienced ladies who would allow a mon in their bed for awhile then he could walk away. No bonds, just pleasant memories.” (Well, isn’t he a keeper, ladies! Think of the money he saves! No cards, no flowers, probably doesn’t even buy them dinner first!). This true romantic at heart couldn’t stop that inner monolog from replaying in my head every time the hero’s character appeared in the story.
**spoilers possible**
Well, I somehow pushed on. Honestly, mostly because I received an ARC and hate not finishing a book. Plus, I very much wanted to love this book, because I’m a fan of this author. By 46%, the nonsensical drawn out plot featuring Bethoc’s abusive fake father collecting young boys to use as child labor on his farm then having her charged with his murder, which was likely the result of a mysterious someone wanting the land, had my eyes glazing over from boredom. I also am not a fan of child abuse being written into a storyline, btw.
Too many characters and too many conversations that didn’t seem to have anything to do with the romantic plot I had been promised had me throwing my Kindle loving hands up in surrender. I’m sure eventually they get around to traveling to Laird Callum’s home and pick up where I expected to be in the first place. I’m just too exhausted from trying to like this book and frustrated by the writing to stick around to see what finally happens.
Here’s to hoping others enjoy it. I usually love this author and will definitely continue to watch for her new releases. This one just didn’t work for me.
Title: Highland Chieftain, Series: Murray Family (Book 21), Author: Hannah Howell, Pages: 352, Pub. Date: 9/27/16, stand-alone but part of a series, could not finish, questionable romantic character of the hero, wasn’t well-written, synopsis didn’t appear to be accurate, VERY steamy scene, stopped reading at 50%.
(This review is based on ARC ebook received via NetGalley in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. No monetary compensation was made. There is no relationship/affiliation between the reviewer and the author/publisher.)