a fairly good one! and again, david-lloyd’s reading enhances the writing by quite a lot. the music is also much better in this audio story than in the previous ones, less obnoxious + overpowering.
one thing i found really strange, however, was that the characters were all quite mean to each other? gwen was mean to rhys, and then jack + ianto were mean to gwen?! it felt like more than playful bantering, too. aside from this, the characterisations were pretty good; nobody felt like a caricature of themselves.
another problem that i find in almost ALL of these torchwood audios is that the authors really don’t know how to write jack. and it’s understandable, as he’s a rather difficult character to get right, as you need to capture his authority and darkness, but also the juxtaposing silliness and wit. but it is something that stands out quite a lot.
one moment i like in particular is when ianto thinks: “how many times throughout history had jack bleached his teeth?” […………] “—or did they grow back with his body?”
it just made me chuckle :D i enjoy when things like this are mentioned/questioned, as it just makes it feel more realistic.