Ruthless Flight

by Kathryn Hunter

Months of online interaction lead Davis to board a plane bound to meet Seth, her Master. What she doesn't count on, though, is the dominant in the seat beside her.

This is a 4,000-word erotic short story with strong D/s themes.

Genres: BDSM

14 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 21, 2014

About the author

Glad you're here. I write erotic short stories, most of them free, when the spirit moves me. I also blog and tweet a good bit, so get in touch.

Disclaimer: The shorts are not suitable for work, not suitable for minors, and not suitable for some adults.

If you have an idea or a special request, I'm listening.

-kh

Reviews

[Kit · Rating 4 out of 5]

WOW... what a quick, hot read. Read this with my morning coffee and now I think I need a drink!

While this book was short, only 16 pages, it jumped right in to the story. It definitely left me wanting more, more, MORE! t

This story really has the basis of being a great novel. What happened *after* the flight when Davis actually meets her Master? I *need* to know! Will there be more? Is this just a prologue to more? I certainly hope so.

Warning: Not a book to just casually read while sitting at your desk.. you *will* squirm!

Only the shortness and cliffhanger keep this from being a 5 star read for me.

[Gem Larkspur · Rating 3 out of 5]

This short was a little disappointing. From the cover and blurb, I was expecting something along the lines of an erotic stranger encounter. Instead, Ruthless Flight describes Davis’ entry into submission and a slave role in a Master/slave relationship. What I liked about it was that the relationship between Davis and her Master, Seth, built up over months. No ‘instant love’ or ‘instant trust.’ What I didn’t like was the internal inconsistency. Seth is a really strict Master. I had trouble accepting Davis easy submission to Stephen based on limited evidence that it was on Seth’s instructions. Stephen doesn’t even use Seth’s training words. If that had been clearer, I think I would have liked this a lot more.

I also had a problem with the underlying misogyny in places. Stephen is clearly contemptuous of most women. If Seth really did set up the encounter on the plane, I wonder about his character. That was a cruel thing to do someone entering a submissive/slave role for the first time and a slave he has yet to meet in person. It’s possible this is destined as a ‘dark read,’ in which case this might all sort out in later books. That being the case, I’m rounding up from 2.5 stars to 3.

[marcella Atkinson · Rating 5 out of 5]

i downloaded a free .mobi version to review from Smashwords.com. This was a pretty hot short. i feel like the girl in the book at times. i have definitely sensed Dominant men many times in day to day interactions. Always with the blushing and avoiding eye contact lol! If only some of the men i had run into would have been sent in for quick prep work by my Master! Such an awesome fantasy played out. Would like to see this author do the meeting of Davis and Seth as well, would probably be super hot!

[Rachael · Rating 2 out of 5]

I was given this book for an honest review.

With that being said....It was hard to enjoy a book when every other work is either "cunt" or "bitch." While I know that is a common theme in many BDSM books, this one went overboard.

The basis is that Davis meets a man online and after 6 months she flies to meet him in person. He has sent his friend to sit next to her on the flight. The so called friend "plays" with her during the flight.

This is a very short story.