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Mel has a curse: she can see what’s invisible to most humans. We call them ghosts and demons. She calls them living nightmares.

When she was five, she had her own ghost. A good ghost. She swore to never leave his side, but over time, he scared her. She pushed him away. She broke her promise.

Now well into her twenties, Mel meets her old ghost again. And this time, he’s brought the darkness with him to prove his point…

…you don’t break a promise with a ghost.

Available March 15, 2016

24 pages, ebook

First published March 15, 2016

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S.M. Boyce

26 books804 followers
Boyce is known for action-packed epic fantasy, powerful heroes, and riveting magical stories filled with twists and intrigue. And, of course, a bit of humor sprinkled through it all. Pick up your kindle and get lost in the journey.

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Profile Image for Sherry Fundin.
2,372 reviews176 followers
October 16, 2017
I love this fabulously creepy cover that opens into an even creepier horror story, and you might want to think twice before you piss off your resident ghost.

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Profile Image for Oswaldo Martinez.
7 reviews
October 24, 2022
Muy bueno

Una historia corta pero inquietante, un final inesperado que nos da la idea que hay mucho más por ver sobre los fantasmas de la historia
Profile Image for Naznin Azeez.
355 reviews
July 25, 2017
The summary promises a chilling horror story but I found nothing that interested me. A ghost's eyes turning red is probably the only thing meant to be 'scary', in this story!. I found it quite disappointing..
Profile Image for diana marcela Ballestas.
484 reviews56 followers
November 11, 2017
bueno, tanto como amé el libro uno, puedo decir que realmente me descepcionó este. Cuanto tienes una serie y colocas una precuela, lo mínimo que te imaginas es q estan relacionados de una forma u otra, al ser un corto esperas que de algunas pinceladas para llenar posibles vacios de la historia principal o historias complementarias de alguno de los personajes secundarios o algo así y basada en su nombre, realmente creí que explicaba un poco sobre los origenes de la historia narrada en Ari.

Sin embargo, rápidamente descubrí mi error, primero, la historia no tiene naaaaada que ver con la historia narrada en el libro 1, ademas el único personaje que tienen en comun es un personaje menos que secundario, es un personaje ocasional que tuvo una intervencion de no más de 2 parrafos, en ambos libros.

Aunque la historia tenía una buena base, creo que la autora no supo explotar el verdadero potencial, más que una historia me sentí leyendo media historia, la sinopsis habla de una niña que hace una promesa a un fantasma y posteriormente la rompe despertando la furia del fantasma, pero realmente no se ve nada de esto en la historia, si hubo una niña, una promesa y la ruptura de la misma, pero de allí nada más, ademas que en fin ultimo el fantasma, que debería haber tomado un papel protagonico, se quedó chico, con dos apariciones ocasionales a lo largo de las páginas y al final ni siquiera se resuelve la historia sino que queda en una especie de limbo, que realmente me costó convencerme que realmente había terminado la historia.
Profile Image for Carole Rae.
1,689 reviews41 followers
May 1, 2022
Seen this one while randomly scrolling through the ebooks on Amazon and this fit perfectly for what I wanted. Short...horror-filled.

We follow Mel has a curse that allows her to see ghosts and demons... which most humans cannot see. It has been a living nightmare. It all started when she was five and had her own ghost and has been a good ghost. She made a vow to never his side, but over time he started scaring her so she pushed him away and broke her promise. Time went by and Mel sees her ghost again, but this time he wants vengeance for her breaking her promise.

This was short and def a prequel. Poor Mel. At first, I thought I would be on the ghost's side, but I don't blame her for pushing him away and not wanting to be on his side after he released something on her. *shudders* He released a creature that is literally a nightmare for me so that gave me the goosebumps.

I am curious about the next book! I want more especially with the cliffhanger there. Ooooo!

In the end, I read this by the bonfire and I loved it. If you want a quick horror story that will give you goosebumps, I def recommend this. 5 stars.
Profile Image for Dawn.
1,571 reviews21 followers
December 8, 2018
I chose to read this short story after receiving a free e-copy from the author. All opinions in this review are my own and completely unbiased.

This story is very short but still packs a punch. Mel promised her ghost when she was young that she'd always be his friend, but she broke her promise. Now she's in her twenties and he has decided that he doesn't want to be ignored any longer. Her good ghost isn't so good anymore...

I've always liked S.M. Boyce's writing and that's still the case in Origins which gives a little background to her horror novel Ari. I haven't read Ari yet but I'm going to have to find time to read it. I enjoy a well written horror story!
Profile Image for John Lambert.
79 reviews
April 26, 2022
Short & Sweet

I dont know what to say. It read exceptionally fast & was rather short. I wish it was longer. This isnt a sample is it? I liked it. It should still cost, even if only 49¢. Mamma needs new shoes right?
However, in the middle of a read-a-thon the exceptional shortness of the short short story was perfect. It allowed me to read two books before breakfast...
This, while my nemesis classmate, a librarian is in jail.
I win. The book is a win. Where is my coffee and cigarette?
Profile Image for Richard Forrest.
42 reviews
March 29, 2022
Wow

Okay, so I knew as soon as the promise was made that breaking it was going to cause issues. It went pretty fast to the promise getting broken, but after that the story really picked up. And the part with the dog, I guessed how it turned out but despite knowing that was coming, I thought it was written really well. What I really liked about this was that last chapter. It was a good way to end this story. I'll give you five stars for this one
Profile Image for Tawnya.
425 reviews76 followers
February 5, 2023
I read this in the anthology "Turning the Tide".

Origins: A Ghostly Paranormal Horror Short Story
S.M. Boyce
3 stars
As a child Mel made friends with a ghost. Then she ignored him. Years later as an adult he has returned and now Mel worries about the safety of her son and husband. The author’s note says that Mel appears in a series “To Each His Ghost”. To date there is only one book, so I guess the author decided not to continue it.
Profile Image for Ken.
79 reviews37 followers
May 11, 2017
Origins (To Each His Ghost #0.5) by S.M. Boyce is a short story about how difficult it is to live with a ghost, and then how difficult it is to live without one. This is an engaging story that lets you feel Mel’s confusion and her dilemma. S.M.Boyce is a great writer of scary stuff, and I highly recommend her work.
Profile Image for Misty.
70 reviews8 followers
April 10, 2020
Quick but satisfying read

This intro book greatly captures my attention. I really want to figure out the truth behined Hazels death and if he can somehow be redeemed and become a good ghost again. I also loved how t hff e ending made me immediately want to start the next book on the series.
667 reviews3 followers
February 1, 2017
What a short story! Creepy ghost story that leaves you hanging. Story wrote by an exceptional author. Biting nails when dog comes in. Good storyline. I received a complimentary copy of this book for voluntary review consideration.
Profile Image for Kathy  Knuckles.
297 reviews5 followers
June 4, 2017
A Good Intro to Further Books

As an intro to for the series it gets you interested. You get the feeling that at times, a lot, that your the only one that can see a ghost, But they are there!
Profile Image for Tera Bunger.
134 reviews
September 14, 2017
Chilling

It's amazing to see how the story plays out. To see how the ghost follows and acts. To know that Hazel is her ghost. Can't wait to see what happens. To see how Mel handles things and how her life plays out.
Profile Image for Jennifer Lil'n  Dunski.
1,610 reviews15 followers
September 20, 2017
Good, short read

I love all of S.M. Boyce 's work. Although I knew this was a short story, it still seems to lack Mel's very brief appearance in "Ari" and brings how Ari's psychiatrist was able to believe Ari's story.
Profile Image for Susan Harrowa.
239 reviews
October 19, 2017
A teaser that will hook you for more....

A very short story. Just enough to whet your appetite for more of this story. Excellent strategy. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of Hazel and Mel.
Profile Image for OldBird.
1,932 reviews
April 14, 2019
A woman who started seeing a ghost as a child grows up, annoys the ghost and faces the consequences. It was an alright short story, though a bit uneven and not strong on the horror front if that's what you're looking for. More creepy/atmospheric than frightening.
Profile Image for Carol Castor.
39 reviews1 follower
January 4, 2017
Brilliant

I really enjoyed this book though I thought it could have been longer with more action from the ghost but it was still a good read
Profile Image for Sheila gullick.
280 reviews5 followers
June 8, 2017
Kept me reading

Kept me reading. Don't usually read this genre. But finding that I like it. Will for sure read the next book.
Profile Image for Maryjane.
488 reviews3 followers
August 18, 2017
Mel's story

In loved it! A kind of scary story about how a child grows up with a ghost friend only she can hear and see.
12.9k reviews194 followers
September 8, 2017
A lovely short ghost story that just flowed along. Everyone should read this.
Profile Image for Jasmine Dorsett.
144 reviews2 followers
October 8, 2017
Story Time

This is a great little preview into the story behind the story. Getting a little background information helped me understand what went on later with Ari.
Profile Image for Terri Oconnell.
303 reviews10 followers
December 20, 2017
Short quick read

This was a quick read with a introduction to the main character. Gives you a great background information. I enjoyed the insight into her past.
Profile Image for Todd.
2,370 reviews8 followers
June 9, 2022
Story of a girl's imaginary friend who wasn't so friendly after she grew up and ignored him
Profile Image for Janelle.
172 reviews
June 19, 2022
a good start

I haven’t read anything by this author yet, but I love a good ghost story so it definitely entices me to read the first in this series.
Profile Image for Jenn.
898 reviews32 followers
December 30, 2016
Creepy and intriguing. I definitely want to read more about Mel.
Profile Image for  B. Sinsational.
167 reviews13 followers
March 7, 2017
A chilling short story, that is too close to be brushed of as pure fiction. See explanation further down*

This story is skillfully told, with charm and allure. Making the reader at ease, the ghastly sensation that comes after a twist is even more prominent because of the surprise factor.

It reminds me a lot of the tales told by a campfire, late at night, aimed at spooking each other.

Here comes the major twist to the story [almost a spoiler]:

*Children often have "imaginary friends" and in the 60‘s-70s‘-80‘s a lot of research went into this trying to determine the source of this world wide phenomena. Knowing that and that the research was left inconclusive based on that they established a presence but of unknown origin, this chilled me and rattled my nerves.
Many don't remember their imaginary friends and as an adult few talk about it. What the research did find was that by getting chastised by adult and told it don't exist the child's brain is conditioned to forget. So in a sense the base for this story is not so farfetched as many may think.
Profile Image for C.L..
Author 1 book17 followers
June 3, 2017
Intriguing short intro

I found this short introductory story interesting enough to purchase To Each His Ghost #1.0. Fans of fun, supernatural tales should enjoy the easy flow of this author's writing.
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