Upon completing this book, it dawned on me the reason for its tedium and superficiality. It appears that the writer had, in her opinion, devised a very clever way to end a novel, but had no story to complement the ending. Consequently, she needed to create approximately 300 pages preceding her ingenious conclusion (something like a college term paper). The result is a dull, simplistic, empty and clichéd yarn narrated by a very confused, indecisive and foolish character due to the book being first person. Of course, I could be wrong, but many readers will find it so. Notwithstanding what I have already stated, I have several concerns with this novel.
First, I wonder about the inconsistencies of the book including its writing style such as the use of obscene language. For example, the "F"word is used only once in the first 50% of the book, but in the second half of the book it is used about 30 times. It is as if the writer discovered the word and started using it as her favorite adjective. Another example relates to one of the characters. He is a "successful" photographer who states that he knows nothing about painting (really?!). I'll stop there because some of the other inconsistencies are related to the "surprise" ending.
Second, the book frustrates the reader because the characters spend so much time "waiting" instead of "doing." For example, the primary character of the story waits for over a year before she does something to discover what befell the most important person in her life. Rather the reader is forced to wander through pages describing how she starts a cafe. It seems as every time characters decide to do something they are "waiting for luggage", or waiting for tomorrow because they just missed seeing another character, or being convinced by friends to wait for a better day. Eventually the reader becomes frustrated with all this inactivity.
Finally, and maybe this is just me, the book is simply not literature. Yes, it tells a drawn out story, but the characters don't really explain "why" they do things even though the story is primarily told in first person. The reader never knows how characters feel when, for example, they see a sunset. The use of metaphors and similes is rare or even non-existent. It's just a story and that's all, and one that is much too long for what it tells. When it comes down to it, the writer would have been much better off to offer up a 20 page short story for her "clever ending." It would have had as much impact, and the reader would have been more satisfied with the quick conclusion.