The idea of this story seemed so good. Unfortunately, it hasn’t turned out as I’d expected at all.
I know that every author puts a lot of time and hard work in their books. That’s why I always feel a bit sorry in case of 1-star ratings.
I think, Beau’s intention was to write a really, REALLY romantic love story with soul mates, true love, being together even after life and all that. For me, it just didn’t work.
Mara is in a coma, and that’s where she meets Max. Our better say, their souls meet. They fall in love for sure, but Mara’s body in the real world is healing and so she wakes up one day. Her Max is gone. And then everything becomes so super flat and annoying that I had to force myself to go on.
I think my biggest problem was Mara. She’s probably the simplest and most naïve character I ever came across. It seems, the only thing she’s interested in is guys. And after meeting Max, it’s only him. Which is ok when you’re madly in love, but there isn’t one thought in this book without Max and how to be with him forever ( - oh, and to have s*x with him, of course). She’s absolutely blind to the rest of the world. She doesn’t even care about her parents after waking up.
My mom had tears streaming down her cheeks, and my dad looked as though his eyes were watering profusely. I wanted to scream at them that I needed to go back. I needed to find Max.
EVERY step she takes is to get to him. She even goes to a college near his town, but she doesn’t attend to a single course, she just hangs around being depressed until she gets another idea how to be closer to Max. Luckily, Max (his soul) appears from time to time and only she can see him. That’s good, because I had time to brace myself for her next depression when he disappears.
Well, too stupid that Max’s soul is refusing her quite often. He behaves like he isn’t even interested in her, he tells her, everything that had happened in the “In-Between” just stays there. And Mara? Her next step was moving near his town to see him more often. Urgh. I really wanted to shake her, it was just so stupid and not logic at all.
The idea of Max’s soul appearing to her in the real world was a nice one. But with Mara’s behavior it turned out not romantic at all, but more weird as Mara gives the impression that she’s a total psychopath.
What I also didn’t like was the time skipping. It didn’t feel suitable when the author used to jump forward 3 months and nothing changed. There wasn’t really a sense to do so.
Last but not least, there are sooo many grammar and language mistakes. I mean, I’m not a native speaker and normally I wouldn’t even recognize them in English books, but this one was full of them.
I wouldn’t recommend this book. One star as I unfortunately didn’t enjoy it at all.
(I received this book in exchange for an honest review.)