I give 2 stars when I don't recommend a book due to morally questionable content, but the writing itself isn't horrible.
The following is the progression of my reactions as I read this Regency Era story. At the end I include a summary of questionable content that may concern parents and others like myself who prefer cleaner reads than this.
I would have liked a more compelling introduction. It started a little on the slow side, and I noticed punctuation and grammar issues right away. However, it didn't take long before I was pulled in, hook, line, and sinker, and I was willing to set aside the externals for the sake of the story. I also thought perhaps grammar and punctuation rules are different in the US and UK, so I should withhold judgment on that.
I found it to be an amusing story (not on the same level as the classics, but enjoyable nonetheless). I especially liked the horses. I have a soft spot for stories that include those beautiful beasts, and they held a prominent role in this one.
Some of the dialogue seemed a bit unnatural and contrived. Some aspects didn't seem true to history or human nature, especially male nature. However, I understand that people like to read stories that give them a break from reality, so I felt I could give it a pass in that regard.
During the stage in which the main family is planning the house party, I thought, "Bummer. It is too bad I am not rich or genteel enough to be invited to this house party because, man, does it sound fun!" Cricket, treasure hunts, and horse racing? What's not to like?
I really enjoyed the story through the first days of the house party. All sorts of unexpected things happened from the moment the main character arrived. At first I enjoyed the love story, eager to see what would happen next in her weirdly blossoming relationship with the guy she ends up liking. I had a hard time putting the book down to go to sleep, and I ended up staying awake entirely too late.
SPOILER: I could understand the main character's initial distaste for her future love interest because he was really trying to force his hand on her instead of respecting her. He did so throughout the entire book. It ticked me off a little. I suppose some people fall for jerks because of their good looks, but that is supposed to be before discovering their jerkiness, not after. It was inevitable that she would fall for him eventually though because she didn't make an ounce of effort with any other guys. Maybe the author could have thrown some of that in to keep the reader guessing.
Violence and Gore: A stallion attacks, and a few people are injured. A head wound is sewn up. A man punches another man in the nose. He punches someone else in the nose later. A man shoots another man with a gun.
Sexual Content: Make-out sessions with too much description of body contact. Discussion of sex by an unmarried couple. Sexual feelings are described. A few close calls with temptation. Premarital sex happens; however, the deed itself is not described. The lead-up is described though, and it is more than enough to get the reader's imagination going in the wrong direction if not careful.
I was really bummed by the sexual content. It is not what I want my kids to read. Or me. I thought this was going to be one of the books I would reread every so often, that is, until I came to the sexual stuff. SPOILER: The male half of the couple was a scoundrel in my opinion, and I would not want my daughters to be charmed by someone who had so little respect for her virtue. There was one moment when he ran away from temptation, and I thought he had redeemed himself, but he completely undid himself in the end. Blagh.
DISCLOSURE:
I received a free copy of this book in return for an honest review.