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The Darkwater Saga #2
The Shattered Vigil
Award-Winner Carr Delivers Latest in Fantasy Saga
Victory over the dark forces during the feast of Bas-solas should have guaranteed safety for the continent. Instead, Willet and the rest of the Vigil discover they've been outsmarted by those seeking to unleash the evil that inhabits the Darkwater. Jorgen, the member of the Vigil assigned to Frayel, has gone missing, and new attacks have struck at the six kingdoms' ability to defend themselves.
Just when the Vigil thought they had quenched the menace from their enemy in Collum, a new threat emerges: assassins hunting the Vigil, men and women who cannot be seen until it's too late. The orders of the church and the rulers of the kingdoms, fearing the loss of the Vigil's members altogether, have decided to take them into protective custody to safeguard their gift. On Pellin's orders, the Vigil scatters, leaving Willet to be taken prisoner by the church in Bunard.
In the midst of this, Willet learns of the murder of an obscure nobleman's daughter by one of the unseen assassins. Now he must escape his imprisonment and brave the wrath of the church to find the killer in order to turn back this latest threat to the northern continent.
Victory over the dark forces during the feast of Bas-solas should have guaranteed safety for the continent. Instead, Willet and the rest of the Vigil discover they've been outsmarted by those seeking to unleash the evil that inhabits the Darkwater. Jorgen, the member of the Vigil assigned to Frayel, has gone missing, and new attacks have struck at the six kingdoms' ability to defend themselves.
Just when the Vigil thought they had quenched the menace from their enemy in Collum, a new threat emerges: assassins hunting the Vigil, men and women who cannot be seen until it's too late. The orders of the church and the rulers of the kingdoms, fearing the loss of the Vigil's members altogether, have decided to take them into protective custody to safeguard their gift. On Pellin's orders, the Vigil scatters, leaving Willet to be taken prisoner by the church in Bunard.
In the midst of this, Willet learns of the murder of an obscure nobleman's daughter by one of the unseen assassins. Now he must escape his imprisonment and brave the wrath of the church to find the killer in order to turn back this latest threat to the northern continent.
458 pages, Paperback
First published November 1, 2016
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Patrick W. Carr
15 books658 followersPatrick Carr was born on an Air Force base in West Germany at the height of the cold war. He has been told this was not his fault. As an Air Force brat, he experienced a change in locale every three years until his father retired to Tennessee. Patrick saw more of the world on his own through a varied and somewhat eclectic education and work history. He graduated from Georgia Tech in 1984 and has worked as a draftsman at a nuclear plant, did design work for the Air Force, worked for a printing company, and consulted as an engineer. Patrick’s day gig for the last eighteen years has been teaching high school math in Nashville, TN. He currently makes his home in Nashville with his wonderfully patient wife, Mary. Patrick and Mary have four sons who are living their own adventures all across the country. Patrick thinks writing about himself in the third person is kind of weird.
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November 3, 2016
3.5 Stars
I can't actually do a proper review of this book as I didn't know at the time I got a print copy from the publisher (BethanyHouse) that is was the second book in the series. I definitely want to go back and read the first book and then read this book again, maybe I will understand more of what is really going on.
Some books are okay as a stand alone but for me, when it's high/epic fantasy, I need to start from the beginning.
I did like some of the characters in the book even though there were so many and I'm not quite sure what all happened to them in the beginning.
From what I understand from the first book reviews, the Vigil think they have taken care of the evil which I'm assuming is the Darkwater. This makes people really weird and do some strange evil things. But, something went wrong because there are still evil people out there trying to unleash the evil. I mean it's not gone like they thought.
I was very confused with the writing style as well. It took me awhile to realize that the narrator was one of the characters named, Dura. I think I finally got that figured out. So it took me a little bit to figure out who was talking when and if this was Dura's thoughts. I still think it will all be easier with the first book.
There are some killings in the book as always. Some really made me mad but I won't say what it was. I did like the fact that things could come at you without you seeing it and kill you. I mean some of the Vigil could see blips of a person or whatever and hopefully succeed at killing it. I thought that was a great idea. Not in my world, but in this world it works out to be pretty cool. Talking about being on your toes at all times.
I'm guessing there is going to be another book the way it ended. I do look forward to reading the series as a whole if that's what it's going to be and starting at book one.
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I can't actually do a proper review of this book as I didn't know at the time I got a print copy from the publisher (BethanyHouse) that is was the second book in the series. I definitely want to go back and read the first book and then read this book again, maybe I will understand more of what is really going on.
Some books are okay as a stand alone but for me, when it's high/epic fantasy, I need to start from the beginning.
I did like some of the characters in the book even though there were so many and I'm not quite sure what all happened to them in the beginning.
From what I understand from the first book reviews, the Vigil think they have taken care of the evil which I'm assuming is the Darkwater. This makes people really weird and do some strange evil things. But, something went wrong because there are still evil people out there trying to unleash the evil. I mean it's not gone like they thought.
I was very confused with the writing style as well. It took me awhile to realize that the narrator was one of the characters named, Dura. I think I finally got that figured out. So it took me a little bit to figure out who was talking when and if this was Dura's thoughts. I still think it will all be easier with the first book.
There are some killings in the book as always. Some really made me mad but I won't say what it was. I did like the fact that things could come at you without you seeing it and kill you. I mean some of the Vigil could see blips of a person or whatever and hopefully succeed at killing it. I thought that was a great idea. Not in my world, but in this world it works out to be pretty cool. Talking about being on your toes at all times.
I'm guessing there is going to be another book the way it ended. I do look forward to reading the series as a whole if that's what it's going to be and starting at book one.
MY BLOG: Melissa Martin's Reading List
February 7, 2017
Willet, the main characters is just as good as ever. I love him. He has a pleasing sense of sarcasm, a compassion for the poor people of the town, and a good balance of manly stoicism. He carries on what I loved about the last book while peeling away deeper layers of personality. Carr surprised me by Willet's occasional unreliable narration--not because he's lying, but because the vault in his mind from his past plays tricks on him. Willet doesn't collapse under the pain of his past like some characters, but he still feels it, even though he's gone on and formed a stable life for himself.
The array of side characters is good too: Bolt, Willet's guard, is ready with a sword or a proverb depending on the situation. The Mark, an urchin lad seems to value his own worth quite well in the midst of the prestigious company he's keeping. :) And Pellin, the unwilling head Vigil leader. I don't envy Pellin having to keep all the Vigil members with their various personalities in line. Each character has to deal with hard moral choices, heart wrenching decisions, and the weight of responsibility their gift of mind-reading brings. Lady Bronwyn's plot especially, as she faces the limits of her powers and all the memories she has collected over the years, lingered. It must be hard to have an unchosen gift that requires you to carry the joys and sorrows of countless people all the time.
Sometimes I was a confused trying to remember side characters from The Shock of Night, but not too often, and that's my own fault. I should have refreshed my memory by glancing at book one. It really wasn't too bad, though. There are four Vigil characters who have POVs. Each Vigil character has an urchin companion, a guard, and a job to accomplish. It's not too hard to follow. In fact, don't let the size deceive you: The Shattered Vigil is a fast read.
I'm not too keen on the latter half of Gail's plot yet and how she found a way to be with Willet. It fit with the story plot, but it seemed a bit cliche for female power in modern literature. The only other thing I really didn't like was the unnecessary description of courtesans/tavern women in a couple of places. There were two brief descriptions in particular that felt unnecessary either for atmosphere or for the plot. It's like finding decayed spinach in your salad.
(not fun)
Due to a plot line towards the end of the book, I strongly encourage this book for 18+. Highlight to see sensitive thematic elements
Out of all the plot lines, Willet's was still my favorite. I love his companions most--Bolt and the urchin Rory--and knew exactly what he was trying to accomplish. Plus we got to see more of the town from book one, and tie up some plot lines. Willet feels more seasoned than Erroll (A Cast of Stones), but still super interesting to read about.
Now I'm going into shock and recovery mode so I can be emotionally stable for the release of book 3. ;) There are so many intriguing questions about Willet and the Darkwater that I want to know. I can't wait for the big reveal, and I hope my favorite characters make it to the end.
If you want an intense fantasy with deep emotional conflict, a fast pace, and characters funny and heart-wrenching by turns, The Darkwater Saga is for you. There's so much at stake. So much emotion. So much grief. So much forging ahead in the face of unknown mental fear. I'm convinced that mental fear is even more emotional than huge creatures or armies. Sometimes the fear of ourselves or of our comrades is the biggest thing we ever have to tackle.
I received this book from Bethany House Publishers. All opinions expressed are my own.
The array of side characters is good too: Bolt, Willet's guard, is ready with a sword or a proverb depending on the situation. The Mark, an urchin lad seems to value his own worth quite well in the midst of the prestigious company he's keeping. :) And Pellin, the unwilling head Vigil leader. I don't envy Pellin having to keep all the Vigil members with their various personalities in line. Each character has to deal with hard moral choices, heart wrenching decisions, and the weight of responsibility their gift of mind-reading brings. Lady Bronwyn's plot especially, as she faces the limits of her powers and all the memories she has collected over the years, lingered. It must be hard to have an unchosen gift that requires you to carry the joys and sorrows of countless people all the time.
Sometimes I was a confused trying to remember side characters from The Shock of Night, but not too often, and that's my own fault. I should have refreshed my memory by glancing at book one. It really wasn't too bad, though. There are four Vigil characters who have POVs. Each Vigil character has an urchin companion, a guard, and a job to accomplish. It's not too hard to follow. In fact, don't let the size deceive you: The Shattered Vigil is a fast read.
I'm not too keen on the latter half of Gail's plot yet and how she found a way to be with Willet. It fit with the story plot, but it seemed a bit cliche for female power in modern literature. The only other thing I really didn't like was the unnecessary description of courtesans/tavern women in a couple of places. There were two brief descriptions in particular that felt unnecessary either for atmosphere or for the plot. It's like finding decayed spinach in your salad.
(not fun)
Due to a plot line towards the end of the book, I strongly encourage this book for 18+. Highlight to see sensitive thematic elements
Out of all the plot lines, Willet's was still my favorite. I love his companions most--Bolt and the urchin Rory--and knew exactly what he was trying to accomplish. Plus we got to see more of the town from book one, and tie up some plot lines. Willet feels more seasoned than Erroll (A Cast of Stones), but still super interesting to read about.
Now I'm going into shock and recovery mode so I can be emotionally stable for the release of book 3. ;) There are so many intriguing questions about Willet and the Darkwater that I want to know. I can't wait for the big reveal, and I hope my favorite characters make it to the end.
If you want an intense fantasy with deep emotional conflict, a fast pace, and characters funny and heart-wrenching by turns, The Darkwater Saga is for you. There's so much at stake. So much emotion. So much grief. So much forging ahead in the face of unknown mental fear. I'm convinced that mental fear is even more emotional than huge creatures or armies. Sometimes the fear of ourselves or of our comrades is the biggest thing we ever have to tackle.
I received this book from Bethany House Publishers. All opinions expressed are my own.
October 28, 2016
Here’s another mainline Christian fantasy. Carr’s writing makes it enjoyable. But, as Christian fiction there’s not a lot here. However, it is entertaining. Patrick creates characters who are compelling and complex. Plus, the relationships are intense and convoluted. Carr gives us several surprises as he weaves a dark, nasty tale.
Like with many second books, I found I felt oppressed by the constant tension and the sheer nastiness. You know how it is. We know the second book must be where the heroes and heroines are put in an impossible situation. In fact, as is common, several of them die, or tortured mentally. In other words, second books are a pain. And, this one is no exception.
As is common, we have no solution for this tension and darkness because book three is not written yet. If I weren’t reviewing (and if I could afford these expensive books), I’d wait for the entire series. In this way the extremely negative second book would find resolution in the overall read of the series.
Mainline Christian fantasy is often disturbing
Don’t get me wrong, the Darkwater series is a clean read—pretty much. It fits the pablum requirements of the modern Christian bookstore. Carr is a master of entertaining fantasy. I just wish there were some spiritual Truth.
The author ticks all the boxes: maligned, untrusted main character; a glorious girl friend; immensely talented cohorts; barely revealed, horrible nasty enemies; and a threat to the whole world. He gives us a second book where the situation just gets worse, more dire, more anxious, and… You know the drill.
Spiritually, it’s not even Christian
The characters move through a lot of church activity, and religious thought. We see a well constructed world, deeply compelling. But, Carr hid spiritual Truth so well that it doesn’t really exist. Patrick came up with analogs for Father, Son, and Holy Spirit. However, I found no indication of a savior, and the Holy Spirit has no part in this story.
This characters show gifts under their personal control in this world. These gifts present exciting tales of magic and personal power. But, there is almost no concept of a God who is involved with His people, a Savior who gave His life in redemption, or an internal spiritual presence to help and guide the believer.
In reality, the individual does not control any spiritual gifts. The Lord gives us gifts as He determines the need. Yet, the Lord is very active in our lives with daily testimonies of His workings in our lives. He walks with us, talks with us, and responds to our prayers. And, this series gives us none of this.
The book seemingly offers mainline Christian fantasy, or three star spirituality. However, a Savior and Holy Spirit do not take part in the book, at all. In addition, I do not remember any scriptures two days after finishing the book because the religious life buries them so well. I only saw scraps of poetic nonsense of a religious nature. As a result, the book never reaches even 2-star. Carr gives us 1-star clean read.
The evil is not spiritual
I found plenty of horrid nastiness, but no spiritual component to this evil. In reality, mainline Christian fantasy contains worldly, almost cartoonish, spirituality. As a result, the characters find this evil scary and horrifying, because they are on their own with no spiritual help. But, I mostly felt a deep sadness for the good guys—many times throughout this book.
Do I recommend this book?
Yes, even though I find it disturbingly bland in the midst of horrid evil. As a result, parents may want to discuss these things with their children before or after they read the book. You can tell them that they might find it disturbing. But, parents need to be prepared to tell them why it is scary and let them know that in the real world we truly do have help and protection from evils like this.
The publisher gave me a copy to review, and I'm grateful for the opportunity.
Like with many second books, I found I felt oppressed by the constant tension and the sheer nastiness. You know how it is. We know the second book must be where the heroes and heroines are put in an impossible situation. In fact, as is common, several of them die, or tortured mentally. In other words, second books are a pain. And, this one is no exception.
As is common, we have no solution for this tension and darkness because book three is not written yet. If I weren’t reviewing (and if I could afford these expensive books), I’d wait for the entire series. In this way the extremely negative second book would find resolution in the overall read of the series.
Mainline Christian fantasy is often disturbing
Don’t get me wrong, the Darkwater series is a clean read—pretty much. It fits the pablum requirements of the modern Christian bookstore. Carr is a master of entertaining fantasy. I just wish there were some spiritual Truth.
The author ticks all the boxes: maligned, untrusted main character; a glorious girl friend; immensely talented cohorts; barely revealed, horrible nasty enemies; and a threat to the whole world. He gives us a second book where the situation just gets worse, more dire, more anxious, and… You know the drill.
Spiritually, it’s not even Christian
The characters move through a lot of church activity, and religious thought. We see a well constructed world, deeply compelling. But, Carr hid spiritual Truth so well that it doesn’t really exist. Patrick came up with analogs for Father, Son, and Holy Spirit. However, I found no indication of a savior, and the Holy Spirit has no part in this story.
This characters show gifts under their personal control in this world. These gifts present exciting tales of magic and personal power. But, there is almost no concept of a God who is involved with His people, a Savior who gave His life in redemption, or an internal spiritual presence to help and guide the believer.
In reality, the individual does not control any spiritual gifts. The Lord gives us gifts as He determines the need. Yet, the Lord is very active in our lives with daily testimonies of His workings in our lives. He walks with us, talks with us, and responds to our prayers. And, this series gives us none of this.
The book seemingly offers mainline Christian fantasy, or three star spirituality. However, a Savior and Holy Spirit do not take part in the book, at all. In addition, I do not remember any scriptures two days after finishing the book because the religious life buries them so well. I only saw scraps of poetic nonsense of a religious nature. As a result, the book never reaches even 2-star. Carr gives us 1-star clean read.
The evil is not spiritual
I found plenty of horrid nastiness, but no spiritual component to this evil. In reality, mainline Christian fantasy contains worldly, almost cartoonish, spirituality. As a result, the characters find this evil scary and horrifying, because they are on their own with no spiritual help. But, I mostly felt a deep sadness for the good guys—many times throughout this book.
Do I recommend this book?
Yes, even though I find it disturbingly bland in the midst of horrid evil. As a result, parents may want to discuss these things with their children before or after they read the book. You can tell them that they might find it disturbing. But, parents need to be prepared to tell them why it is scary and let them know that in the real world we truly do have help and protection from evils like this.
The publisher gave me a copy to review, and I'm grateful for the opportunity.
August 10, 2017
Willet Dura and the Vigil discover that the evil coming from the Darkwater is worse than they could have imagined, and that the Darkwater is growing.
This book picks up right where the last book left off, but they must face new evils in their search for the truth of what hides in the depths of the Darkwater.
Each member of the Vigil has taken an apprentice from among the urchins, and I loved seeing how Toria, Pellin, Bronwyn, and Willet mentor, and teach their young apprentices who are quick to learn and understand the gravity of the evil that the Darkwater brings. Rory and Fess are my favorites, daring, brave, yet skeptical at times and unafraid to ask questions. I especially was touched by the relationship between Fess and his mentor, Bronwyn.
Willet struggles to win the trust of the Vigil, proving himself time and again, despite the dark vault hidden deep within his mind. I like how he has grown, and though still reckless by the standards of others, he is learning more about the Vigil and the Darkwater and what his gift means for his life.
What I really liked about this book was getting to know the other members of the Vigil better, as well as the charming urchins, Rory, Fess, Lelwin, and Mark. I felt that with this book there was much stronger characterization, and even though it was the second book in the series, I never felt that it was a "filler" book, there was actually a lot more action in this book than in the last one. I really didn't want to put it down, yet at the same time I didn't want it to end!
Overall, this was the thrilling sequel to The Shock of Night. Willet struggles to find his place in a Vigil that seems to want to lock him out despite his insights. I like how in this book we see more of his vulnerabilities, which only made me like him even more. Bolt and Rory are made for each other, with their sayings, they are constantly sharing their wisdom. I can't wait to see how it all comes together in the final book! Highly recommend for anyone who enjoyed the first book in the series!
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received one or more of the products or services mentioned above for free in the hope that I would mention it on my blog. Regardless, I only recommend products or services I use personally and believe will be good for my readers. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and testimonials in Advertising."
This book picks up right where the last book left off, but they must face new evils in their search for the truth of what hides in the depths of the Darkwater.
Each member of the Vigil has taken an apprentice from among the urchins, and I loved seeing how Toria, Pellin, Bronwyn, and Willet mentor, and teach their young apprentices who are quick to learn and understand the gravity of the evil that the Darkwater brings. Rory and Fess are my favorites, daring, brave, yet skeptical at times and unafraid to ask questions. I especially was touched by the relationship between Fess and his mentor, Bronwyn.
Willet struggles to win the trust of the Vigil, proving himself time and again, despite the dark vault hidden deep within his mind. I like how he has grown, and though still reckless by the standards of others, he is learning more about the Vigil and the Darkwater and what his gift means for his life.
What I really liked about this book was getting to know the other members of the Vigil better, as well as the charming urchins, Rory, Fess, Lelwin, and Mark. I felt that with this book there was much stronger characterization, and even though it was the second book in the series, I never felt that it was a "filler" book, there was actually a lot more action in this book than in the last one. I really didn't want to put it down, yet at the same time I didn't want it to end!
Overall, this was the thrilling sequel to The Shock of Night. Willet struggles to find his place in a Vigil that seems to want to lock him out despite his insights. I like how in this book we see more of his vulnerabilities, which only made me like him even more. Bolt and Rory are made for each other, with their sayings, they are constantly sharing their wisdom. I can't wait to see how it all comes together in the final book! Highly recommend for anyone who enjoyed the first book in the series!
Disclosure of Material Connection: I received one or more of the products or services mentioned above for free in the hope that I would mention it on my blog. Regardless, I only recommend products or services I use personally and believe will be good for my readers. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and testimonials in Advertising."
February 7, 2017
Patrick W. Carr has crafted a highly creative world in his "Dark Water Saga" series, and after devouring the first book in the series (The Shock of Night), I was anxiously awaiting the chance to return to the land of Collum in this next instalment. Fortunately, I was not disappointed, as "The Shattered Vigil" again provides an absorbing read populated with fascinating characters where you aren't quite sure who is good, and who may be evil. The scenes are filled with plenty of action, and I enjoyed the way Carr peeled back the layers of mystery in this book and provided us with some more answers about what exactly is going on, while leaving plenty of unanswered questions to make the wait for the third book in the series entirely too long! There was a big reveal at the end that I just didn't see coming, and I now can't wait to find out exactly who is who and what that means as we race towards the climax of the series. I dare not say more because I hate to risk giving plot points away, but you will see what I mean as you go along! I think what I am most enjoying about the series is that the people who end up being the heroes of the story are of the unlikely sort, from Willet who we first grew to care about in the first book in the series, to the orphans rescued from the streets to become apprentices to members of the vigil. Willet's abilities to delve into people's minds and see their histories continues to intrigue me in these books, and I couldn't help but contemplate what life would be like if such gifts were actually real, where with one touch you could wade through the storehouses of someone's memories!
All in all, I greatly enjoyed this second addition to the Dark Water Saga books, and I have no doubt that fans of the series are going to enjoy the way this book moves the series forward. I can't wait for more answers to be revealed in the next novel, as the vigil fights to protect their world against the onslaught of darkness. May all Christians be similarly inspired, like the vigil, to spread God's light whereever we go!
I award this book a solid rating of 4 out of 5 stars.
Book has been provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc.
All in all, I greatly enjoyed this second addition to the Dark Water Saga books, and I have no doubt that fans of the series are going to enjoy the way this book moves the series forward. I can't wait for more answers to be revealed in the next novel, as the vigil fights to protect their world against the onslaught of darkness. May all Christians be similarly inspired, like the vigil, to spread God's light whereever we go!
I award this book a solid rating of 4 out of 5 stars.
Book has been provided courtesy of Baker Publishing Group and Graf-Martin Communications, Inc.
December 3, 2016
When you think that things are going well for Will Dura, chaos erupts!
This is the second book in the Darkwater Saga. Will and the other members of the Vigil defeated the evil of the Darkwater in the first book. They did not know that the evil is spreading and the enemy is taking a new approach to corrupt society.
In order to fully grasp this book, you really need to read The Shock of Nightfirst. The plot of this fantasy is complex. There are many people involved. The Vigil is a complex group that has religious origins. They have "gift" to sort through memories and determine a person's innocence or guilt. They can also exact justice.
The Darkwater is a forest where evil lurks. It alters minds and changes personalities. The Vigil has tries to keep people from the forest, but there are ways to entice people to enter. The way that Patrick W Carr writes his story is enticing. I could see both sides of the coin and have empathy for characters that I normally would not. He uses the most unlikely heroes who step up and do amazing things. I have enjoyed every book he has written (yes, I have read them all.)
If you are a fantasy lover and love an epic tale you should read this saga. It has violence. The people are evil and there are uncomfortable things done to good people. There is mention of rape, but it is not descriptive.
This is the second book in the Darkwater Saga. Will and the other members of the Vigil defeated the evil of the Darkwater in the first book. They did not know that the evil is spreading and the enemy is taking a new approach to corrupt society.
In order to fully grasp this book, you really need to read The Shock of Nightfirst. The plot of this fantasy is complex. There are many people involved. The Vigil is a complex group that has religious origins. They have "gift" to sort through memories and determine a person's innocence or guilt. They can also exact justice.
The Darkwater is a forest where evil lurks. It alters minds and changes personalities. The Vigil has tries to keep people from the forest, but there are ways to entice people to enter. The way that Patrick W Carr writes his story is enticing. I could see both sides of the coin and have empathy for characters that I normally would not. He uses the most unlikely heroes who step up and do amazing things. I have enjoyed every book he has written (yes, I have read them all.)
If you are a fantasy lover and love an epic tale you should read this saga. It has violence. The people are evil and there are uncomfortable things done to good people. There is mention of rape, but it is not descriptive.
November 11, 2020
The Shattered Vigil is the second book in the Darkwater Series by Patrick W Carr. It is an epic fantasy novel, for adults, from a Christian perspective.
Willet, and the rest of the people in the Vigil, have the ability to see all of a person’s memories with a single touch. Unfortunately, the Vigil’s enemies were not vanquished as was thought but are striking back harder than before.
The Shattered Vigil was too dark for me. There is so much darkness in the human soul, and Willet has the ability to see all of it. Subsequently, this book was also very dark, darker than most Christian fantasy novels. Death, betrayal, an evil that seeped into people’s souls from exposure to the Darkwater Forest — all of it was thoroughly present in this novel. Now, Willet and others fought the evil, and so there was good in their world filled with evil. But still, the evil seemed to permeate the book via a dark tone.
The good things about the book were: unique characters, a complex plot, a well-developed world, deep questions and soul-searching, engaging writing, and a fantastic cover. I did love Patrick Carr’s other series, the Staff and the Sword.
I recommend it to fans of dark-ish fantasy with a Christian perspective. Perhaps fans of Ted Dekker and Frank Peretti.
I received a complementary copy of this book. All opinions are my own, and I am not obligated to provide a positive review.
Willet, and the rest of the people in the Vigil, have the ability to see all of a person’s memories with a single touch. Unfortunately, the Vigil’s enemies were not vanquished as was thought but are striking back harder than before.
The Shattered Vigil was too dark for me. There is so much darkness in the human soul, and Willet has the ability to see all of it. Subsequently, this book was also very dark, darker than most Christian fantasy novels. Death, betrayal, an evil that seeped into people’s souls from exposure to the Darkwater Forest — all of it was thoroughly present in this novel. Now, Willet and others fought the evil, and so there was good in their world filled with evil. But still, the evil seemed to permeate the book via a dark tone.
The good things about the book were: unique characters, a complex plot, a well-developed world, deep questions and soul-searching, engaging writing, and a fantastic cover. I did love Patrick Carr’s other series, the Staff and the Sword.
I recommend it to fans of dark-ish fantasy with a Christian perspective. Perhaps fans of Ted Dekker and Frank Peretti.
I received a complementary copy of this book. All opinions are my own, and I am not obligated to provide a positive review.
August 7, 2017
Everyone has those authors – when someone asks you for a recommendation – they’re the top names to spill out of your mouth. When asked why you like them, you can try to name things like excellent style, plot, or characters, but it’s really all of those things, and yet none of them at once. It’s that otherness, that quality you can’t pin down, but that resonates so strongly with you. Most simply put, the way you read, they write.
“The Shattered Vigil” has more of everything from the previous Darkwater Saga book – more world building, more character history, more twists. There is never a moment where the reader knows what is coming next, as nothing is ever revealed as you would think. This is edge-of-your-seat storytelling at it’s finest.
The story has so much going on, so many plot threads weaving and looping back on themselves, with each character getting their chance to carry the narrative. I really enjoyed that aspect, that through the individual adventures of each character, we begin to see just how vast the fight really is, and how it will impact their entire world, not just one kingdom, not just one story.
There is well-timed humor, deeply poignant moments, and pulse-racing-page-flipping action, all led by characters I don’t want to leave at the end of the work. In short, I crave the next installment!
I received a review copy of this work from the publisher through NetGalley
“The Shattered Vigil” has more of everything from the previous Darkwater Saga book – more world building, more character history, more twists. There is never a moment where the reader knows what is coming next, as nothing is ever revealed as you would think. This is edge-of-your-seat storytelling at it’s finest.
The story has so much going on, so many plot threads weaving and looping back on themselves, with each character getting their chance to carry the narrative. I really enjoyed that aspect, that through the individual adventures of each character, we begin to see just how vast the fight really is, and how it will impact their entire world, not just one kingdom, not just one story.
There is well-timed humor, deeply poignant moments, and pulse-racing-page-flipping action, all led by characters I don’t want to leave at the end of the work. In short, I crave the next installment!
I received a review copy of this work from the publisher through NetGalley
August 20, 2021
How to explain my thoughts...
I liked this book. It was a worthy continuation and ended at a good but still cliffhangery place. The plot and the world building and all the small details were so well weaved in with the characters. And the narrative voices were also pretty awesomely laid out and paced the story excellently. Also, the symbolism...that was fun to parse.
I'll put my biggest complaint in the content section, but asides from that, I will say I'm not the biggest fan of Carr's portrayal of female characters. Not that they aren't AWESOME (cause they all are amazing) but it's just a matter of opinion to me... But I do love the way he jumps from character to character and makes them all sound different.
And now for book 3!!
Content: Violence, of course, some discussion about marriage, and (spoilers)...rape. Yeah, there was an "off-screen" rape that happened which I thought was highly unnecessary both to the plot or to the story. I already said I wasn't a super big fan of Carr's female characters (but again, that's probably my own issue not his) but the rape thing was....only painful and unnecessary. Props for it not being used to spur another character into a revenge quest, though
I liked this book. It was a worthy continuation and ended at a good but still cliffhangery place. The plot and the world building and all the small details were so well weaved in with the characters. And the narrative voices were also pretty awesomely laid out and paced the story excellently. Also, the symbolism...that was fun to parse.
I'll put my biggest complaint in the content section, but asides from that, I will say I'm not the biggest fan of Carr's portrayal of female characters. Not that they aren't AWESOME (cause they all are amazing) but it's just a matter of opinion to me... But I do love the way he jumps from character to character and makes them all sound different.
And now for book 3!!
Content: Violence, of course, some discussion about marriage, and (spoilers)...rape. Yeah, there was an "off-screen" rape that happened which I thought was highly unnecessary both to the plot or to the story. I already said I wasn't a super big fan of Carr's female characters (but again, that's probably my own issue not his) but the rape thing was....only painful and unnecessary. Props for it not being used to spur another character into a revenge quest, though
January 8, 2025
I loved this book! So many twists and turns and there’s so much that is unexpected. I definitely like The Shattered Vigil more than The Shock of Night because, in my opinion, it was easier to understand and had more going on towards the middle. For the first half of this series there are so many loose ends that it takes a minute to really understand what’s going on and how everything connects, which made it all that much more original. The mystery of each book has been so complex that I can’t even guess what is going to happen next! The added side character’s, Rory, Lelwin, Fess, and Mark, drew me into the story even more, from their different, tenebrous pasts to their senses of humor.
The only thing that I found to be completely unnecessary was the tape scene. Though not explicit, as it was not the main character, it still is always unnecessary for an author to write a rape scene. Though it did affect the story, the end does not justify the means and I absolutely hate when there are any rape scenes in books because I cannot comprehend why anyone would want to be writing about that. And I get it, “it makes the book more realistic” but even a mediocre writer can come up with a better plot point that doesn’t include a rape scene. No plot should ever “require” one.
The only thing that I found to be completely unnecessary was the tape scene. Though not explicit, as it was not the main character, it still is always unnecessary for an author to write a rape scene. Though it did affect the story, the end does not justify the means and I absolutely hate when there are any rape scenes in books because I cannot comprehend why anyone would want to be writing about that. And I get it, “it makes the book more realistic” but even a mediocre writer can come up with a better plot point that doesn’t include a rape scene. No plot should ever “require” one.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 24, 2022
This was book 2 of the Darkwater Saga and boy did it get deep! It can be a bit confusing, but the main plot is that Willet and the Vigil are trying to solve the mystery of the evil Darkwater Forrest so that they can defeat it.
I like that we got more points of view in this story. There were some intense situations the characters faced. And it kept me guessing and wondering the whole time.
The urchins continue to play an important role and I enjoyed all of them.
If you like stories with a lot of complexities and edge-of-your-seat adventure, you’ll love this story!
I like that we got more points of view in this story. There were some intense situations the characters faced. And it kept me guessing and wondering the whole time.
The urchins continue to play an important role and I enjoyed all of them.
If you like stories with a lot of complexities and edge-of-your-seat adventure, you’ll love this story!
October 7, 2016
Shattered Vigil is the second installment in the Darkwater Saga. If I thought By Divine Right and Shock of Night were superb, then I have no words for Shattered Vigil.
Patrick Carr has the ability to pull the reader into a new world and immerse that reader into cultures, beliefs, societies, and lands that are rich in detail. He uses not just first person point of view (Willet Dura), but also third person, to give the reader a dual experience. Let them know what is to come and what is happening, but to also be there, be that character.
When it comes to reading a fantasy novel, I want to be swept away with complex characters. Those type of characters where at times I will hate them or extremely dislike them, but other times where I view them as a hero. There are no stereotypes in this book.
Published by a Christian company, Shattered Vigil holds a multi-faceted story of the Christian faith. So many nuances and little sub-stories within parallel the stories in the Bible, and even the people of the Bible.
I was only disappointed one time in the book. And that was when it ended! The one person who was thought to be a phantom, all I can say it that the truth was surprising. I looked forward to the next book and need to find out if the mystery of Darkwater will ever be solved. Will Willa's vault be his undoing? Will the Vigil and the Urchins become more than anyone ever thought possible?
This is truly a book full of saints and sinners, but all one soul seeking truth.
***I received this book through NetGalley in exchange of an honest and complete review***
Patrick Carr has the ability to pull the reader into a new world and immerse that reader into cultures, beliefs, societies, and lands that are rich in detail. He uses not just first person point of view (Willet Dura), but also third person, to give the reader a dual experience. Let them know what is to come and what is happening, but to also be there, be that character.
When it comes to reading a fantasy novel, I want to be swept away with complex characters. Those type of characters where at times I will hate them or extremely dislike them, but other times where I view them as a hero. There are no stereotypes in this book.
Published by a Christian company, Shattered Vigil holds a multi-faceted story of the Christian faith. So many nuances and little sub-stories within parallel the stories in the Bible, and even the people of the Bible.
I was only disappointed one time in the book. And that was when it ended! The one person who was thought to be a phantom, all I can say it that the truth was surprising. I looked forward to the next book and need to find out if the mystery of Darkwater will ever be solved. Will Willa's vault be his undoing? Will the Vigil and the Urchins become more than anyone ever thought possible?
This is truly a book full of saints and sinners, but all one soul seeking truth.
***I received this book through NetGalley in exchange of an honest and complete review***
June 12, 2018
New review, 2018: So I recently got the third book in the series from Netgalley (got this one from there originally, too), and I decided to read through the whole series at once. I re-read the prequel and the first book, then moved immediately on to this one. This series definitely needs to be read all at once. A big problem with when I tried to read it the first time was that, due to the publishing schedule, there'd been a big gap in time where I'd forgotten details from the first book. Reading it immediately after the first book allowed me to enjoy it much more.
The king from book 1 is no longer around, which I thought was a good thing. I got so annoyed with how Willet kept calling him like the best king ever and such an amazing guy, but in action he was always about as impotent as it's possible for a king to me. I was constantly thinking, "No, Willet, if he can't even protect his own personal employees and allows the level of corruption in his court that exists, and can't even stop his own nobles from trying to kill his personal policeman right in front of him, no, he is not a great king. He's a crappy king. He might be noble and well-meaning, but if he can't protect those he wants to protect or keep promises he's made because of other people's political maneuvering, he's a crappy king." So anyway, he's gone, and I'm happy about that.
While the first book was from Willet's POV, this one spends about equal time with the other members of the Vigil on their own personal quests. I liked these storylines. It kept it interesting. Though sometimes it seemed pretty stupid that they were acting on their own. Toria, in particular, continues to be an absolute dumbass, and this time, other people pay the price. I hope she dies in the last book.
This story does contain what I considered a completely unnecessary violent gang-rape of a young woman, just barely off-screen. It's treated as horrific and the perpetrators eventually are killed, but it still really didn't need to happen, and I'm rather annoyed that the author felt the need to put that in.
Gael isn't in this book a whole lot, but when she is there, I like her a lot. Even though she's supposed to be 20 or 21, she always reads older to me. Maybe it's just the setting. Everyone kind of reads older, for the most part. Willet himself, even though he's like 29 or 30, I can't help but picture him as closer to 40, given his temperament and history. This story also brought in some of the (former) urchins in more important roles, and for the most part I liked how that went. Bolt continues to be cool, and Allta gets a little characterization, though the other guards never really become more than "stoic, loyal guard".
The dwimor thing is still nonsensical, and even what explanation is given isn't consistently applied. It's just dumb.
There were some nice surprises and plot turns. Some things were more tragic than I liked, but there were some cool things too (particularly what happens with Fess).
The world of this story doesn't make as much sense as the author thinks it does. There are numerous logic holes and characters being TSTL. But these things, while a constant annoyance, are so far mostly small enough that I can look past them and mostly enjoy the story.
**
Original review, 2016: I couldn't really get in to this one, even though I enjoyed the first book in the series. There were too many things (large and small) which I found unbelievable or characters behaving stupidly. The threat of invisible assassins was interesting, but the explanation for how they exist was nonsensical. I mean, if magic makes them invisible, just say it's magic, rather than coming up with some explanation of how if a person's mind is emptied of everything that makes them human, they can no longer be seen. Just doesn't make sense. I guess the author was trying to come up with some way that mind-delvers could create invisible assassins, but this explanation just doesn't cut it for me, and that took me out of the book. Smaller stuff, too. Yeah, I'm kinda bummed I didn't like this one.
The king from book 1 is no longer around, which I thought was a good thing. I got so annoyed with how Willet kept calling him like the best king ever and such an amazing guy, but in action he was always about as impotent as it's possible for a king to me. I was constantly thinking, "No, Willet, if he can't even protect his own personal employees and allows the level of corruption in his court that exists, and can't even stop his own nobles from trying to kill his personal policeman right in front of him, no, he is not a great king. He's a crappy king. He might be noble and well-meaning, but if he can't protect those he wants to protect or keep promises he's made because of other people's political maneuvering, he's a crappy king." So anyway, he's gone, and I'm happy about that.
While the first book was from Willet's POV, this one spends about equal time with the other members of the Vigil on their own personal quests. I liked these storylines. It kept it interesting. Though sometimes it seemed pretty stupid that they were acting on their own. Toria, in particular, continues to be an absolute dumbass, and this time, other people pay the price. I hope she dies in the last book.
This story does contain what I considered a completely unnecessary violent gang-rape of a young woman, just barely off-screen. It's treated as horrific and the perpetrators eventually are killed, but it still really didn't need to happen, and I'm rather annoyed that the author felt the need to put that in.
Gael isn't in this book a whole lot, but when she is there, I like her a lot. Even though she's supposed to be 20 or 21, she always reads older to me. Maybe it's just the setting. Everyone kind of reads older, for the most part. Willet himself, even though he's like 29 or 30, I can't help but picture him as closer to 40, given his temperament and history. This story also brought in some of the (former) urchins in more important roles, and for the most part I liked how that went. Bolt continues to be cool, and Allta gets a little characterization, though the other guards never really become more than "stoic, loyal guard".
The dwimor thing is still nonsensical, and even what explanation is given isn't consistently applied. It's just dumb.
There were some nice surprises and plot turns. Some things were more tragic than I liked, but there were some cool things too (particularly what happens with Fess).
The world of this story doesn't make as much sense as the author thinks it does. There are numerous logic holes and characters being TSTL. But these things, while a constant annoyance, are so far mostly small enough that I can look past them and mostly enjoy the story.
**
Original review, 2016: I couldn't really get in to this one, even though I enjoyed the first book in the series. There were too many things (large and small) which I found unbelievable or characters behaving stupidly. The threat of invisible assassins was interesting, but the explanation for how they exist was nonsensical. I mean, if magic makes them invisible, just say it's magic, rather than coming up with some explanation of how if a person's mind is emptied of everything that makes them human, they can no longer be seen. Just doesn't make sense. I guess the author was trying to come up with some way that mind-delvers could create invisible assassins, but this explanation just doesn't cut it for me, and that took me out of the book. Smaller stuff, too. Yeah, I'm kinda bummed I didn't like this one.
October 26, 2016
The Shattered Vigil is a phenomenally stunning and incredibly epic continuation to this magnificent new series! There isn’t much that you won’t find within the pages of this book. It has all of the elements of a thoroughly engaging and yet honestly raw adventure that will wrap itself around your heart and open your eyes to both the the seen the unseen. What you think you see is only a beautiful mask for the truth is much deadlier and sharper than a two edged sword. As in life there is no middle ground, so choose your side, but choose wisely. One wrong step, and you might never see the light of day again.
Willet Dura may be brash, out-spoken, and foolhardy to most who know him, but he is always true to himself and his beliefs. He refuses to walk away from people and situations that he can have a positive influence on. Of course, those are the times when he is most likely to be taken advantage of and find himself on the short of the stick. However, he doesn’t let that stop him from repeating his deep seated desire to help others no matter the cost to himself. It’s his humanity that keeps him vulnerable and yet is his greatest strength. It is his very humanity that is tested even harder and put into a fire even hotter than he has previously experienced. He will have to reply on new and old friends alike to find the courage and the will to fight a battle that is so much bigger than any one person. Will Willet find his personal limits met and exceeded, or will those most loyal to him lend him their strength and courage to help him see all that he is capable of?
Delving back into this fascinating world has been such a blessing and a privilege! The wonderful characters both old and new will shake the very foundation of your quiet life and plunge you into a harsh yet beautiful world. Everything feels amazingly real. No corners are cut and you will feel as if you are walking this journey alongside Willet and his rag tag group. The truth of this story actively seeps off the pages and absorbs directly into your very soul. You will walk away with a heavy yet thoughtful heart that has perhaps become more aware and more sensitive to those around us. We must learn that assumptions and judgements are terribly kept secrets that will eat away at our heart if we let them. Instead, view your friends and neighbors as if they are an extension of your own heart. Offer love and grace before offering anything else.
With his second epic level series, Patrick W. Carr is without a doubt a masterful creator and manipulator of the written and the unwritten word. He will make you think and feel even when that’s the last thing you want to do. His methods of persuasion are subtle yet powerful because above all else he knows that we all are all ruled by our heart to some degree. We can’t walk through our life without feeling even if we keep it quietly and tightly locked away. One thing we must never forget is that all wars are won or lost within the heart. What wars are you fighting and which side will be the ultimate victor?
Willet Dura may be brash, out-spoken, and foolhardy to most who know him, but he is always true to himself and his beliefs. He refuses to walk away from people and situations that he can have a positive influence on. Of course, those are the times when he is most likely to be taken advantage of and find himself on the short of the stick. However, he doesn’t let that stop him from repeating his deep seated desire to help others no matter the cost to himself. It’s his humanity that keeps him vulnerable and yet is his greatest strength. It is his very humanity that is tested even harder and put into a fire even hotter than he has previously experienced. He will have to reply on new and old friends alike to find the courage and the will to fight a battle that is so much bigger than any one person. Will Willet find his personal limits met and exceeded, or will those most loyal to him lend him their strength and courage to help him see all that he is capable of?
Delving back into this fascinating world has been such a blessing and a privilege! The wonderful characters both old and new will shake the very foundation of your quiet life and plunge you into a harsh yet beautiful world. Everything feels amazingly real. No corners are cut and you will feel as if you are walking this journey alongside Willet and his rag tag group. The truth of this story actively seeps off the pages and absorbs directly into your very soul. You will walk away with a heavy yet thoughtful heart that has perhaps become more aware and more sensitive to those around us. We must learn that assumptions and judgements are terribly kept secrets that will eat away at our heart if we let them. Instead, view your friends and neighbors as if they are an extension of your own heart. Offer love and grace before offering anything else.
With his second epic level series, Patrick W. Carr is without a doubt a masterful creator and manipulator of the written and the unwritten word. He will make you think and feel even when that’s the last thing you want to do. His methods of persuasion are subtle yet powerful because above all else he knows that we all are all ruled by our heart to some degree. We can’t walk through our life without feeling even if we keep it quietly and tightly locked away. One thing we must never forget is that all wars are won or lost within the heart. What wars are you fighting and which side will be the ultimate victor?
December 28, 2016
I’m quite picky with fantasy, and I don’t always like much of what I read. To be brutally honest, I found the first book in this series The Shock of Night a bit of a slog, to the point that I stopped enjoying it and just wanted to get it over with in the end.
I requested this one partly because the Audiobook had just been released, so I hoped to listen to that alongside this, in truth though, I think I listened to the whole thing as an Audiobook. This second instalment in the Trilogy seemed stronger than the first, with better characterization, and not so much of an emphasis on the main protagonist Willet Dura.
It was more interesting to learn something about the lives, personality and motivations of the other members of The Vigil.
(For those unfamiliar with the last story, they are mysterious group, who called themselves the Guardians of the realm, who seem to belong to the Church, but really act on their own authority, possess the frightening power to read men’s minds, delve their memories, and profess to live for Hundreds of years.)
The nature of the evil powers present in the story, and the supernatural abilities of the Vigil and others seem to become more clear and understandable in this story, unlike the last one which was more confusing, although I suppose there is meant to be some blurring of lines to reflect the flaws in human nature. The Vigil do what they think is for the best, but sometimes it backfires or their actions raise serious questions about the morality of their motives. If people were ‘gifted’ by God with superhuman abilities, as they are in this story, would it be right to use their power and ‘gifting’ to punish evil or escape danger, if it meant destroying others, and such a course was forbidden to them?
The characters’ wrestle with these issues and their own demons throughout the story, which adds a more credibility and depth. Also, I appreciated that Willet did not seem quite so smarmy and cocky in this story. It got annoying after a while in the last one. He doubts himself here, and had to rely on the help of others.
One or two other reviewers said they would have preferred more action in this story, but I think many stories rely too much on non-stop action, and it often detracts from other aspects of storytelling, such as world-building, or character and plot development. Sometimes a slower-paced story with depth and well-drawn realistic characters is better than a fast- paced thriller.
I confess, this is not my favourite pseudo-Medieval fantasy series (it feels too modern to be in any sense ‘historical’). I still prefer The Traitor’s Heir by Anna Thayer, but this one is worth a read (or a listen) for lovers of Imaginative Fantasy which explores moral themes.
I requested an e-book version of this title from the Publisher via Netgalley for review, and purchased the Audible book of my own volition. I was not required to write a positive review and all opinions expressed are my own.
I requested this one partly because the Audiobook had just been released, so I hoped to listen to that alongside this, in truth though, I think I listened to the whole thing as an Audiobook. This second instalment in the Trilogy seemed stronger than the first, with better characterization, and not so much of an emphasis on the main protagonist Willet Dura.
It was more interesting to learn something about the lives, personality and motivations of the other members of The Vigil.
(For those unfamiliar with the last story, they are mysterious group, who called themselves the Guardians of the realm, who seem to belong to the Church, but really act on their own authority, possess the frightening power to read men’s minds, delve their memories, and profess to live for Hundreds of years.)
The nature of the evil powers present in the story, and the supernatural abilities of the Vigil and others seem to become more clear and understandable in this story, unlike the last one which was more confusing, although I suppose there is meant to be some blurring of lines to reflect the flaws in human nature. The Vigil do what they think is for the best, but sometimes it backfires or their actions raise serious questions about the morality of their motives. If people were ‘gifted’ by God with superhuman abilities, as they are in this story, would it be right to use their power and ‘gifting’ to punish evil or escape danger, if it meant destroying others, and such a course was forbidden to them?
The characters’ wrestle with these issues and their own demons throughout the story, which adds a more credibility and depth. Also, I appreciated that Willet did not seem quite so smarmy and cocky in this story. It got annoying after a while in the last one. He doubts himself here, and had to rely on the help of others.
One or two other reviewers said they would have preferred more action in this story, but I think many stories rely too much on non-stop action, and it often detracts from other aspects of storytelling, such as world-building, or character and plot development. Sometimes a slower-paced story with depth and well-drawn realistic characters is better than a fast- paced thriller.
I confess, this is not my favourite pseudo-Medieval fantasy series (it feels too modern to be in any sense ‘historical’). I still prefer The Traitor’s Heir by Anna Thayer, but this one is worth a read (or a listen) for lovers of Imaginative Fantasy which explores moral themes.
I requested an e-book version of this title from the Publisher via Netgalley for review, and purchased the Audible book of my own volition. I was not required to write a positive review and all opinions expressed are my own.
December 11, 2016
So basically I was dying the whole way through this? If the stakes in the last book were high, this one raises them way higher. You start to understand a lot more about the Vigil - and what they're fighting - so in a lot of ways this book is more intense than the first one.
I was already invested in the characters, but in this one they got fleshed out a lot more - including some minor characters, like the urchins. There were a lot of them too, so it's pretty impressive that the author could make me care so much about them all. The relationships between some of them were very sweet (even if they were painful at times). And I loved getting to see more of Bolt. His relationship with Lord Dura is awesome.
The world building was superb as always; the government and church bureaucracies were complex in a very realistic way, and the more you go on, the more you understand about the gift the Vigil possesses. And the Darkwater. If that place isn't horrifying, I don't know what is.
The plot had me on the edge of my seat for most of the time. What with the mystery of the Darkwater, and things generally trying to kill them, and the race to defeat whatever is in the forest, it's a gripping read. It deals with lots of complex themes, and it doesn't give pat answers either. The only issue is that it was kind of hard to identify a central conflict, with three or four main characters all going different directions. (Of course, the upside of that is that we get to know all of them much better)
As aforementioned, The Shattered Vigil is really intense. Even if you don't know what it is, the Darkwater represents terrible darkness and evil; and now that evil is escaping, enslaving men and women and invading their minds. There's plenty of killing, not only by the sword but in slightly more disturbing ways as well. Though nothing is described, one minor character is raped. (As Dura points out, it's not just the Darkwater that makes people do evil). One non-English word is used as a curse, and Bolt swears several times that we don't hear.
Overall I loved this book. It's excellently written, and the Christian foundation of the work shines through in a way that actually adds to the story instead of overpowering it. However, I'm not going to recommend it to my younger brother until he's a bit older.
I was already invested in the characters, but in this one they got fleshed out a lot more - including some minor characters, like the urchins. There were a lot of them too, so it's pretty impressive that the author could make me care so much about them all. The relationships between some of them were very sweet (even if they were painful at times). And I loved getting to see more of Bolt. His relationship with Lord Dura is awesome.
The world building was superb as always; the government and church bureaucracies were complex in a very realistic way, and the more you go on, the more you understand about the gift the Vigil possesses. And the Darkwater. If that place isn't horrifying, I don't know what is.
The plot had me on the edge of my seat for most of the time. What with the mystery of the Darkwater, and things generally trying to kill them, and the race to defeat whatever is in the forest, it's a gripping read. It deals with lots of complex themes, and it doesn't give pat answers either. The only issue is that it was kind of hard to identify a central conflict, with three or four main characters all going different directions. (Of course, the upside of that is that we get to know all of them much better)
As aforementioned, The Shattered Vigil is really intense. Even if you don't know what it is, the Darkwater represents terrible darkness and evil; and now that evil is escaping, enslaving men and women and invading their minds. There's plenty of killing, not only by the sword but in slightly more disturbing ways as well. Though nothing is described, one minor character is raped. (As Dura points out, it's not just the Darkwater that makes people do evil). One non-English word is used as a curse, and Bolt swears several times that we don't hear.
Overall I loved this book. It's excellently written, and the Christian foundation of the work shines through in a way that actually adds to the story instead of overpowering it. However, I'm not going to recommend it to my younger brother until he's a bit older.
February 7, 2017
Described as a Fantasy Mystery, The Shattered Vigil is a very complex novel with many threads that need to be followed in order to reach the end. The tone is dark and suspenseful, with few moments of mirth to lighten the impact of the plot. Those who pick up this series (and especially this second book) should be ready for an intense struggle against the darkness that lurks in the Darkwater.
Strangely enough, I enjoyed this book more than I did the first. While both are just as dark, The Shattered Vigil played out on a grander scale and offered more answers to how the Vigil functions (or barely functions). The urchins also have a more prominent role, offering some childlike hope to the otherwise bleak worldviews of the adults.
I'm not sure what to expect in the final book of the trilogy. So far it seems difficult to imagine a truly happy ending, though I do hope that Willet and the others find one. And that lack of faith in a happy ending is what ultimately leaves this book with less than a perfect rating. Because while Carr has woven an epic story and world, I would have preferred it if there had been a least one character whose worldview wasn't completely shattered.
I have provided an honest review after having received a copy of the book from the publisher.
Strangely enough, I enjoyed this book more than I did the first. While both are just as dark, The Shattered Vigil played out on a grander scale and offered more answers to how the Vigil functions (or barely functions). The urchins also have a more prominent role, offering some childlike hope to the otherwise bleak worldviews of the adults.
I'm not sure what to expect in the final book of the trilogy. So far it seems difficult to imagine a truly happy ending, though I do hope that Willet and the others find one. And that lack of faith in a happy ending is what ultimately leaves this book with less than a perfect rating. Because while Carr has woven an epic story and world, I would have preferred it if there had been a least one character whose worldview wasn't completely shattered.
I have provided an honest review after having received a copy of the book from the publisher.
August 22, 2018
This was the 2nd book in the Darkwater Saga. I read the fist one as well, and enjoyed it! It starts off at a fast pace, and is a bit confusing as you wind your way back into the story. The members of the vigil play a more central role, and the urchins carry a lot of weight. It was great getting to know the members of the vigil better, to understand them more.
I was really pulled into the story, and was pulled along with the adventure. I had to take the story slowly because there's so much to digest about the intricacies of the world they live in. My curiosity of the Darkwater has grown because it's such an unknown. I hope at some point the author will explain exactly what it is other than it's evil.
I'm looking forward to book 3 with high expectations!
*I received this book for review from Bethany House. This is my opinion.
I was really pulled into the story, and was pulled along with the adventure. I had to take the story slowly because there's so much to digest about the intricacies of the world they live in. My curiosity of the Darkwater has grown because it's such an unknown. I hope at some point the author will explain exactly what it is other than it's evil.
I'm looking forward to book 3 with high expectations!
*I received this book for review from Bethany House. This is my opinion.
May 27, 2020
A lot of the reviews I've read about this book spoke of the hopeless feel to it. I understand what they are saying, but I think a better word is desperate.
That's why I enjoyed the book, because when there's no good way to move, sometimes you just have to move forward, despite the consequences. The development of the relationship between Fess and Lady Bronwyn was so well done.
Starting The Wounded Shadow now...
That's why I enjoyed the book, because when there's no good way to move, sometimes you just have to move forward, despite the consequences. The development of the relationship between Fess and Lady Bronwyn was so well done.
Starting The Wounded Shadow now...
March 29, 2020
This was a very good sequel to The Shock of Night. I enjoyed the Darkwater Saga a lot more than I thought I would. Some of it got a little slow, making me stop for short breaks, but I pushed through it and thoroughly enjoyed each bit of it. This is a recommended fantasy read for any bookworms.
November 20, 2016
The Shattered Vigil
The Darkwater Saga #2
By Patrick W. Carr
Their victory over the Darkwater forces during the feast of Bas-solas should have given them a reprieve in their war against the growing darkness. But all too soon the Vigil learns the true cost of their victory - it has provided cover for the enemy's latest attack. And the Vigil is vulnerable to this newest threat that has come against them ~ an enemy that cannot be seen.
Willet Dura has yet to gain the Vigil's trust due to the vault hidden within his mind - a vault that cannot be opened and may be linked to his night within the Darkwater Forest. Yet he, along with the street urchins he has befriended, may be the Vigil's best hope for survival. For survival has just become their greatest priority when yet another member goes missing.
With the darkness tightening its grip, the Vigil is faced with a choice reveal what they know and submit to the church. Or they scatter to the far reaches of the Northern Continent searching for answers to the questions now confronting them while staying ahead of those hunting them.
Meanwhile Willet is forced to confront his feelings for Gael and her refusal to accept his decision to leave her behind. And then there is Willet's friendship with Ealdor which was brought into question by the Vigil in The Shock of Night.
If possible this second book in the series is even better than the first and the ending leaves the reader wondering what comes next. The Shattered Vigil is the perfect name for this book as it describes the book in three words. And, yes, you do have to read the first book to fully appreciate this series.
The writing style of Patrick Carr is fantastic as it draws one into the story - one can easily see why he is an award-winning writer. If you enjoy fantasy that has a spiritual undercurrent get ready to be transported to a world where the lines between darkness and light are become harder to discern.
I received a free review copy of this book from the publisher. No review, positive or otherwise, was required—all opinions expressed are my own.
The Darkwater Saga #2
By Patrick W. Carr
Their victory over the Darkwater forces during the feast of Bas-solas should have given them a reprieve in their war against the growing darkness. But all too soon the Vigil learns the true cost of their victory - it has provided cover for the enemy's latest attack. And the Vigil is vulnerable to this newest threat that has come against them ~ an enemy that cannot be seen.
Willet Dura has yet to gain the Vigil's trust due to the vault hidden within his mind - a vault that cannot be opened and may be linked to his night within the Darkwater Forest. Yet he, along with the street urchins he has befriended, may be the Vigil's best hope for survival. For survival has just become their greatest priority when yet another member goes missing.
With the darkness tightening its grip, the Vigil is faced with a choice reveal what they know and submit to the church. Or they scatter to the far reaches of the Northern Continent searching for answers to the questions now confronting them while staying ahead of those hunting them.
Meanwhile Willet is forced to confront his feelings for Gael and her refusal to accept his decision to leave her behind. And then there is Willet's friendship with Ealdor which was brought into question by the Vigil in The Shock of Night.
If possible this second book in the series is even better than the first and the ending leaves the reader wondering what comes next. The Shattered Vigil is the perfect name for this book as it describes the book in three words. And, yes, you do have to read the first book to fully appreciate this series.
The writing style of Patrick Carr is fantastic as it draws one into the story - one can easily see why he is an award-winning writer. If you enjoy fantasy that has a spiritual undercurrent get ready to be transported to a world where the lines between darkness and light are become harder to discern.
I received a free review copy of this book from the publisher. No review, positive or otherwise, was required—all opinions expressed are my own.
January 6, 2022
I will begin by saying that Patrick W Carr is an amazing author and I was really excited about this series. I began with the Novella that had me completely invested in the characters, the Vigil, the evil that they were fighting. However, going from the novella, The Divine Right, through Book 1 and into book 2, The Shattered Vigil, my delight in the series was shattered.
Within Christian Fiction, there has to be a thread of redemption and gleam of light, no matter how dark the evil that is being confronted may be. Unfortunately, The Shattered Vigil amplified the darkness to the point I felt heavy reading and sad for the characters. Although there were mentioning of Christian belief and doctrine, it felt more like everyone was simply playing a Christian role but not truly committed to their faith. That is troubling to me when a book is meant to be Christian.
*SEMI SPOILER AHEAD
The worst part for me was the addition of a COMPLETELY UNNECESSARY gang rape scene, that even though was more off the page STILL hit extremely hard. I say this was unnecessary for several reasons. The first is that it added nothing to the plot but only stood to intensify the darkness but not in a way that made any sense for the story. It destroyed a character for no reason at all, one who never fully recovers, and it only stood to make those of the Vigil seem even more stupid than they were already coming off as being.
To me, they were too ancient to have remained so ridiculous and spiritually immature. I wanted to like this series, but even reading book three did not serve as its saving grace.
Within Christian Fiction, there has to be a thread of redemption and gleam of light, no matter how dark the evil that is being confronted may be. Unfortunately, The Shattered Vigil amplified the darkness to the point I felt heavy reading and sad for the characters. Although there were mentioning of Christian belief and doctrine, it felt more like everyone was simply playing a Christian role but not truly committed to their faith. That is troubling to me when a book is meant to be Christian.
*SEMI SPOILER AHEAD
The worst part for me was the addition of a COMPLETELY UNNECESSARY gang rape scene, that even though was more off the page STILL hit extremely hard. I say this was unnecessary for several reasons. The first is that it added nothing to the plot but only stood to intensify the darkness but not in a way that made any sense for the story. It destroyed a character for no reason at all, one who never fully recovers, and it only stood to make those of the Vigil seem even more stupid than they were already coming off as being.
To me, they were too ancient to have remained so ridiculous and spiritually immature. I wanted to like this series, but even reading book three did not serve as its saving grace.
June 17, 2018
I don't know how he does it!
Patrick Carr has quickly become my favorite living Christian author of fantasy. He excels at building a concept of the church that exists in his imaginary realm that is at once novel and familiar. Doing so, he allows us to experience both the strengths and weaknesses we often see in our fellow believers, but outside of our specific denominational concepts, it can be easier to weigh these in light of Scripture instead of our man-made traditions. Anyone who says they don't see Christianity in his work is not paying attention, because he definitely speaks to the church. Just because there's no character hearing the gospel and coming to Christ, (or Iosa, as he's called here), doesn't mean the work is lacking in a Christian perspective, anymore than we expect every non-fiction book about the Christian life to be about the gospel. There are many facets to a life of faith that a Christian author can write about in fiction, and here Carr focuses on how we treat "the least of these" among our fellow man, using our God-given talents, and battling the sin nature.
But with all of this he's given us a compelling tale that was far from unremittingly dark as some said in their reviews. There were many moments of tenderness and hope. I loved how things that seemed insignificant were brought out to be key parts of the tale when I least expected it. Down to the very last page.
I'll be starting The Wounded Shadow immediately.
Patrick Carr has quickly become my favorite living Christian author of fantasy. He excels at building a concept of the church that exists in his imaginary realm that is at once novel and familiar. Doing so, he allows us to experience both the strengths and weaknesses we often see in our fellow believers, but outside of our specific denominational concepts, it can be easier to weigh these in light of Scripture instead of our man-made traditions. Anyone who says they don't see Christianity in his work is not paying attention, because he definitely speaks to the church. Just because there's no character hearing the gospel and coming to Christ, (or Iosa, as he's called here), doesn't mean the work is lacking in a Christian perspective, anymore than we expect every non-fiction book about the Christian life to be about the gospel. There are many facets to a life of faith that a Christian author can write about in fiction, and here Carr focuses on how we treat "the least of these" among our fellow man, using our God-given talents, and battling the sin nature.
But with all of this he's given us a compelling tale that was far from unremittingly dark as some said in their reviews. There were many moments of tenderness and hope. I loved how things that seemed insignificant were brought out to be key parts of the tale when I least expected it. Down to the very last page.
I'll be starting The Wounded Shadow immediately.
April 11, 2019
Star Rating: 5 stars
Note: This is the 2nd book in the Darkwater Saga so this will not be an in-depth review.
After discovering Patrick W. Carr through his Staff and the Sword series that I found on the shelves of my local library and LOVING it, I decided to read his follow-up series, The Darkwater Saga. I recently finished book 2, The Shattered Vigil, and I have to say it now stands as one of my favorite books from this author, although The Hero’s Lot by him is still my all-time favorite.
My favorite part about this book is that absolutely none of Carr’s characters is prefect, in that most of them suffer from PTSD, and there are multiple characters that have autism or very similar conditions. Although, many authors feature characters like this, it takes a very special writer to be able to convey the mindsets and interactions of these characters with any authenticity as it has to do be with knowledge and respect. I really appreciated the way that Carr handles these characters with dignity, and I hope he continues setting this high standard for other authors to aspire to.
If I go into any more details about why I like this book, then I will be into spoiler territory so all I will say is that this book totally lived up to the Patrick W. Carr name. 5 stars!!!!!!!
Note: This is the 2nd book in the Darkwater Saga so this will not be an in-depth review.
After discovering Patrick W. Carr through his Staff and the Sword series that I found on the shelves of my local library and LOVING it, I decided to read his follow-up series, The Darkwater Saga. I recently finished book 2, The Shattered Vigil, and I have to say it now stands as one of my favorite books from this author, although The Hero’s Lot by him is still my all-time favorite.
My favorite part about this book is that absolutely none of Carr’s characters is prefect, in that most of them suffer from PTSD, and there are multiple characters that have autism or very similar conditions. Although, many authors feature characters like this, it takes a very special writer to be able to convey the mindsets and interactions of these characters with any authenticity as it has to do be with knowledge and respect. I really appreciated the way that Carr handles these characters with dignity, and I hope he continues setting this high standard for other authors to aspire to.
If I go into any more details about why I like this book, then I will be into spoiler territory so all I will say is that this book totally lived up to the Patrick W. Carr name. 5 stars!!!!!!!
August 5, 2019
Knowing that this book would be filled with darkness (particularly as it's book 2, where it must get so much worse before we get resolution in book 3), sadness and violence, I knew I needed to be in a particular mood to be able to carry the weight of it and appreciate the story. Time passed. A lot of time passed. It's now been 4 years since I read the first book, which was a really great story. But it is fantasy; there is world and religion building, characters and histories I have forgotten. This novel does not stand alone, and I am just not up to rereading the first book, suffering and battling alongside Willet, so that I can journey into the dark waters of the second book, for the hope of the third.
But for those who are not as sensitive as I am (most everyone), I would highly recommend this book and this series. This author really is fantastic.
But for those who are not as sensitive as I am (most everyone), I would highly recommend this book and this series. This author really is fantastic.
June 25, 2018
Could not put this allegory down. In the vein of Narnia, for young adults and adults. The Vigil discovers that they’ve been outsmarted by the evil in the Darkwater. There is a new threat to the Vigil – assassins who cannot be seen – except by children! In order to protect them, the church decides to take them into protective custody. Pellin orders the Vigil to scatter, except Willet, who is taken prisoner by the church in Bunard. Meanwhile, Willet finds out about a murder, which is linked to the latest threat to the northern continent. He escapes his imprisonment, and searches for the killer.
March 6, 2019
Oh MY GOODNESS!!!! What can possibly happen next?! I could barely catch my breath with so much action going on, and to top things off who can we even trust? With so much doubt and suspicion and well meaning wrong thinking, I find myself resting in the most dramatic of characters the conflicted Willet, who always, without fail, falls into the most dangerous of situations and the one who happens to make the most beneficial mistakes. I know I know, I'm talking a bit in a circle but I will not ruin this for you. All I will say is strap in because this second book is sure to sweep you away. Definitely a fantastic read!
August 15, 2018
Despite the horrors of Bas Solas, the evil of the Darkwater is spreading and its up to the Vigil to find and destroy the person behind it. But people are being infected and with that infection, are bent on destroying the Vigil, which upholds church and king. To protect themselves each member separates looking for clues and help. But with seperation comes a price and it may be too much for some. A bit more exciting than the first, the second of the trilogy brings answer and questions in regards to Willet Dura and the Darkwater, while yet exploring God's Sovereignty, justice and forgiveness.
November 6, 2018
Patrick Carr continues to amaze, giving us an epic fantasy in the religious genre. While Carr writes in the religious genre, he manages to do so without being cloyingly pious; instead, he gives us complex characters who wrestle with the more difficult questions and with the hypocrisy and elitism that so often come wrapped in religious garb.
But rest assured, if you aren't religious this is still an epic fantasy worthy of your time. Carr's worldbuilding comes close to being on par with writers like Sanderson and Rothfuss, and he writes gloriously flawed and conflicted characters.
But rest assured, if you aren't religious this is still an epic fantasy worthy of your time. Carr's worldbuilding comes close to being on par with writers like Sanderson and Rothfuss, and he writes gloriously flawed and conflicted characters.
May 7, 2019
This book picks up where the first one left off, and continued the coherent and very entertaining adventure by characters that are at times at odds with one another. The teenager "apprentices" adds into the depth of the character developments and provides the author several opportunities to reflect on a deeper meaning of existence.
And the highest praise for the second book in a series: I want to read the third one... and I was very annoyed when I learned that I had to wait 4 months for it to be available.
And the highest praise for the second book in a series: I want to read the third one... and I was very annoyed when I learned that I had to wait 4 months for it to be available.
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