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The Slob Who Lives Down the Hall
When Cara’s daughter, Jade, begs her to ask the man from down the hall to help her with her schoolwork, Cara gives in, and finds herself learning about the most mysterious man on the compound, who as it turns out, isn’t as bad as they say or as unatt
28 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 15, 2016
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Sandra Sinclair
43 books5 followersSandra Sinclair has been a professional writer for years, but after spending most of her career writing marketing copy, she thought it was finally time to follow her passion, which thankfully for us involves igniting her readers' passion as well. Teaming up with Steam Books Erotica & Romance, Sandra's ready and willing to make her readers feel the love and lust of her prose.
Sandra has a degree in Journalism and had once created storylines for a professional video game, but her true calling is being one of the talented sirens of erotica.
Sandra has a degree in Journalism and had once created storylines for a professional video game, but her true calling is being one of the talented sirens of erotica.
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May 7, 2018
A cute, wish fulfillment kind of short story. It could have been tweaked a bit, and given more depth to be a really great short story.
May 2, 2018
When I saw the title of this book I was a little put off, but it was free so I decided to read it. I am so glad I gave it a chance.
This book is all about not judging people from appearance alone. There is always that one recluse in an apartment building that the neighbors gossip about. In this case it was Neil. He was the type who stayed to himself and didn't bother anybody. (What a horrible person - insert eye roll.) No one ever saw him leave his apartment. Since they couldn't be all up in his business, they made up stories about him.
Cara's precocious little girl Jade had a school project and decided she wanted Neil to help her. She had run into him one day while taking out the garbage and overheard him talking about a video game he was developing. Well, Miss Jade wanted his help and she wasn't taking no for an answer, prompting Cara to knock on her neighbor's door.
Neil, though he appeared slovenly, was very kind and polite. He invited his neighbor into his home and happily agreed to help Jade with her project. He started coming over to their apartment, just a few doors down, to help Jade out. While there he had dinner with the ladies and determined he liked them very much, especially Cara.
The project was a big hit and Jade was asked to present it to the entire school. Excited at the opportunity, Jade ran to thank Neil and invite him to come and watch her presentation. Cara happily agreed that he should come. When he arrived, Neil was fine! The man showered, shaved and combed his hair. The result - Neil was a snack. Cara was already feeling him because of his personality, but when she saw him cleaned up, the heat meter went up ten fold.
Well like all short stories, the relationship went fast and they ended up in bed. The author left the ending open to all sorts of HEA possibilities for this budding couple and possible new family. I would love to see them get their own novel.
This book is all about not judging people from appearance alone. There is always that one recluse in an apartment building that the neighbors gossip about. In this case it was Neil. He was the type who stayed to himself and didn't bother anybody. (What a horrible person - insert eye roll.) No one ever saw him leave his apartment. Since they couldn't be all up in his business, they made up stories about him.
Cara's precocious little girl Jade had a school project and decided she wanted Neil to help her. She had run into him one day while taking out the garbage and overheard him talking about a video game he was developing. Well, Miss Jade wanted his help and she wasn't taking no for an answer, prompting Cara to knock on her neighbor's door.
Neil, though he appeared slovenly, was very kind and polite. He invited his neighbor into his home and happily agreed to help Jade with her project. He started coming over to their apartment, just a few doors down, to help Jade out. While there he had dinner with the ladies and determined he liked them very much, especially Cara.
The project was a big hit and Jade was asked to present it to the entire school. Excited at the opportunity, Jade ran to thank Neil and invite him to come and watch her presentation. Cara happily agreed that he should come. When he arrived, Neil was fine! The man showered, shaved and combed his hair. The result - Neil was a snack. Cara was already feeling him because of his personality, but when she saw him cleaned up, the heat meter went up ten fold.
Well like all short stories, the relationship went fast and they ended up in bed. The author left the ending open to all sorts of HEA possibilities for this budding couple and possible new family. I would love to see them get their own novel.
November 30, 2018
....
It’s a novella. It started promising and then went from zero to 69 before I understood what was going on. Then it ended.
I was left very confused.
It’s a novella. It started promising and then went from zero to 69 before I understood what was going on. Then it ended.
I was left very confused.
September 26, 2020
Good story!
It was short and to the point and enjoyable! Interesting storylinethere was great chemistry between Neil and Cars. I truly recommend it to all my fellow romance readers. You will truly enjoy it.
It was short and to the point and enjoyable! Interesting storylinethere was great chemistry between Neil and Cars. I truly recommend it to all my fellow romance readers. You will truly enjoy it.
August 6, 2018
Too short
I liked the premise of meeting the neighbor that no one really knows. It was a sweet story just way too short.
I liked the premise of meeting the neighbor that no one really knows. It was a sweet story just way too short.
December 22, 2018
Great stories
Because it was a page turner. Kept me wondering what's the next book is about. Keep up the good work!!
Because it was a page turner. Kept me wondering what's the next book is about. Keep up the good work!!
January 4, 2019
Rushed ending
Felt it held its own until the end which was rushed, it could of been explored more and a few chapters longer ..such a shame
Felt it held its own until the end which was rushed, it could of been explored more and a few chapters longer ..such a shame
May 12, 2019
Interesting, I liked it very much.
Told from a different angle. First time reading this Ruth's work. Will gladly do so again. I enjoyed the story line.
Told from a different angle. First time reading this Ruth's work. Will gladly do so again. I enjoyed the story line.
May 21, 2019
Too short
Find it was too short if it was just little longer and would have had more insight into the characters then it would have given it 5 stars.
Find it was too short if it was just little longer and would have had more insight into the characters then it would have given it 5 stars.
July 13, 2019
The Geek and the Girl
The story was something else. Kind of cute and a little unrealistic. But it was a nicely told story. Worth 4.0 stars.
The story was something else. Kind of cute and a little unrealistic. But it was a nicely told story. Worth 4.0 stars.
February 28, 2020
Sweet
I chose this rating because it was a wonderful read. It out you in a mood of respect and knowing things can happen for anyone.
I chose this rating because it was a wonderful read. It out you in a mood of respect and knowing things can happen for anyone.
April 12, 2020
Short but fun
Not too heavy. Just a short, sweet story about two people finding each other. Nothing more to really say about it.
Not too heavy. Just a short, sweet story about two people finding each other. Nothing more to really say about it.
July 5, 2020
Cute short novella. Not much of a story.
December 30, 2020
Good
It was a good quick read nice characters wish it were longer. Has great full length potential. Would recommend sweat read
It was a good quick read nice characters wish it were longer. Has great full length potential. Would recommend sweat read
May 27, 2025
Sandra Sinclair's "The Slob Who Lives Down the Hall" introduces Cara, a mother who, at her daughter Jade's urging, seeks help from the mysterious neighbor across the hall for schoolwork. This premise sets up a potentially intriguing story about discovering the true nature of someone misunderstood.
The novella starts with a promising setup, hinting at the enigmatic quality of the neighbor and the curiosity surrounding him. However, due to its extremely short length (just 28 pages), the narrative rushes through its developments at an incredibly fast pace. The story quickly moves from introduction to key romantic moments without sufficient build-up or character development, leaving the reader feeling disoriented rather than engaged. It feels as though the story jumps from one plot point to the next without the necessary connective tissue to make the progression feel earned or understandable.
While the core idea of uncovering the truth about a reclusive neighbor is appealing, the execution is hampered by the brevity. There isn't enough space for the characters to truly develop, for their relationship to blossom organically, or for the reader to genuinely connect with their journey. The potential for a sweet or compelling short story is present, but it ultimately feels underdeveloped and lacks the depth needed to make a lasting impression.
In conclusion, "The Slob Who Lives Down the Hall" has a cute premise that could have been quite charming. Unfortunately, its novella format is too restrictive, leading to a rushed plot and a lack of narrative substance. Readers looking for a quick, light read might find it mildly entertaining, but those seeking a more developed story will likely be left confused and wanting more.
Rating: 2.5/5 stars
My Rating System:
1⭐️: The book didn’t hold my interest and/or had significant issues that overshadowed any redeeming qualities for me, but generally not my cup of tea. Most likely did not finish the book.
2⭐️: The book didn’t quite resonate with me, and while my experience wasn’t remarkable, I did finish it. It had some redeeming qualities and potential but fell short in execution. Recommendable, though with some reservations.
3⭐️: Good read, but didn’t quite stand out. Still worth recommending to others.
4⭐️: Really enjoyed it and stayed engaged throughout. Would read the book again. Definitely recommendable.
5⭐️: Incredible writing that made me deeply connect with the characters. I was completely absorbed in the world and didn’t want it to end. This book stayed with me even when I wasn’t reading it. I'd gladly reread it and highly recommend it to everyone!
The novella starts with a promising setup, hinting at the enigmatic quality of the neighbor and the curiosity surrounding him. However, due to its extremely short length (just 28 pages), the narrative rushes through its developments at an incredibly fast pace. The story quickly moves from introduction to key romantic moments without sufficient build-up or character development, leaving the reader feeling disoriented rather than engaged. It feels as though the story jumps from one plot point to the next without the necessary connective tissue to make the progression feel earned or understandable.
While the core idea of uncovering the truth about a reclusive neighbor is appealing, the execution is hampered by the brevity. There isn't enough space for the characters to truly develop, for their relationship to blossom organically, or for the reader to genuinely connect with their journey. The potential for a sweet or compelling short story is present, but it ultimately feels underdeveloped and lacks the depth needed to make a lasting impression.
In conclusion, "The Slob Who Lives Down the Hall" has a cute premise that could have been quite charming. Unfortunately, its novella format is too restrictive, leading to a rushed plot and a lack of narrative substance. Readers looking for a quick, light read might find it mildly entertaining, but those seeking a more developed story will likely be left confused and wanting more.
Rating: 2.5/5 stars
My Rating System:
1⭐️: The book didn’t hold my interest and/or had significant issues that overshadowed any redeeming qualities for me, but generally not my cup of tea. Most likely did not finish the book.
2⭐️: The book didn’t quite resonate with me, and while my experience wasn’t remarkable, I did finish it. It had some redeeming qualities and potential but fell short in execution. Recommendable, though with some reservations.
3⭐️: Good read, but didn’t quite stand out. Still worth recommending to others.
4⭐️: Really enjoyed it and stayed engaged throughout. Would read the book again. Definitely recommendable.
5⭐️: Incredible writing that made me deeply connect with the characters. I was completely absorbed in the world and didn’t want it to end. This book stayed with me even when I wasn’t reading it. I'd gladly reread it and highly recommend it to everyone!
February 3, 2016
It was a quick read but it wasn't cute and light and fun. Instead it was a series of stereotypes sort of being broken down. The main character lacks depth, which can be achieved even in a short story.
February 19, 2016
Too Short
This is shorter than a sample...by the time they set up the story the book was over...it was too quick
This is shorter than a sample...by the time they set up the story the book was over...it was too quick
April 4, 2016
Great short story which did leave me wanting more but even still I enjoyed it. Love the single parent theme. Don't judge a neighbor by his clutter!!!
June 11, 2016
25 minutes
That's how long it took me to read this short story. Too bad it couldn't have been longer. It had the makings of a good romance.
That's how long it took me to read this short story. Too bad it couldn't have been longer. It had the makings of a good romance.
December 6, 2016
This was a nice short story. The characters are believable and it moved at a somewhat realistic pace. The male and female leads did not instantly fall in love but felt a growing attraction.
January 10, 2017
Cute. Not the cutest ever. Sweet. Not the sweetest ever. It's fun, somewhat cliché, mindless, cozy reading, in good form. At 28 pages, there's a quick plot; you can't lose.
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