Potentially the final installment in the Stone Braide Chronicles, Storm picks up somewhat after the end of Lightning. Selah has made it back to Tic City, only to discover that she is being exiled from there on account of her father’s death in the previous book. She sets off for the west with her mother Pasha, younger brother Dane, friend/ward Amaryllis, sister Mari, boyfriend Bodhi, and guardians/mentors Taraji and Mojica. But nothing goes as planned; from malfunctioning transport systems to hostile locals, the team seems to confront obstacle after obstacle. Will they reach the west before it is too late for Selah?
In form, the third book is comparable to the first two; some of the writing is quite good, and some of it is rather choppy. At times it felt as though the author was simply writing to meet a deadline rather than putting much thought into the words. At other places, the reader is quite drawn in to the story. Speaking of the story, it is also a bit choppy in some places, and rather episodic in nature overall, and in some places it is difficult to discern the purpose of various scenes. That is not to say that the book is bad, or the story uninteresting; rather, it is simply blight on an otherwise engaging and original story.
It seems as though Selah does not really become a character the reader cares about until the third book; that may be partly because she does not really seem to be in danger throughout the other stories, whereas towards the end of Storm, her future really does become uncertain. The climax of the story is one where [SPOILER ALERT] the reader really does not know if Selah will survive; she is lying on her death bed, with only minutes to live, when she finally is transitioned to the Third Protocol. While this certainly added great tension, it did not get drawn out much, which might be good for some people, but it takes away a bit of the drama that could have been. The scene is also seen from Bodhi’s perspective, not Selah’s, which might be a little jarring since Selah is the main character; the reader should like to see her near-demise from her perspective. At the same time, it may be given that much more power being seen from the perspective of a different character, one who cares deeply about Selah. In a way, it allows the reader to share Bodhi’s feelings about what is happening to her and makes it more personal.
That being said, there are some things left hanging open at the end of the book. [SPOILER ALERT] Selah leaves Treva behind at the beginning of the book, because Treva believes that Cleon, her betrothed and Selah’s step-brother, is still alive (he “died” in the second book, though we were never actually certain of his death). This part of the story is not really tied up; Treva is mentioned at the end in Selah’s thinking, and she wishes to reunite with her. She is potentially being set up to return to the Mountain, which is where Cleon was left, and where Treva is near. There is also reference to the far future, when there will be a great battle between good and evil. These endings left open, seem to hint at or at least allow for a future book. After all, the series is called The Stone Braide Chronicles, not the Stone Braide Trilogy. That being said, while Storm wraps the story up well enough, there is enough left open that the author could pursue another book if she felt so inclined.
All-in-all, the book was good, if a bit random and episodic at times.