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152 pages, Paperback
First published September 1, 2003
a) it wasn't set up at all (Billy's powers and the Missing Five and Echo's baby as the necessary "ingredients"? none of this was hinted at beforehand, nor is it at all apparent why they're the ingredients)
b) it doesn't feel earned at all (this ending commits the cardinal sin of skipping the climax then jumping ten years later to the epilogue where ~life is rebuilt~)
c) it doesn't make sense! I can deal with a lot of handwaving in fiction, but because you don't even see the recovery happen here, it just seems unbelievable.
d) the moral quandaries feel forced and ridiculous. The 'choices' that the Remnants bellyached over didn't feel like legitimate choices to me (just don't tell the others about the risk! it's an easy choice! why are we wasting time discussing this!), meanwhile they don't even consider the slightly darker options that I wanted them to take (yes, kill Newton! just go ahead and kill Newton! HE IS GOING TO CAUSE PROBLEMS).
and e) all of the characterisation and character development is jettisoned along the way, along with their interesting mutations, which I had been hoping would be a much bigger deal than they were. Talk about lack of payoff. And why did the mutations just go away? That doesn't make sense either. It's all too easy, not earned; the characters should have to live with the metaphorical (and literal) scars and repercussions of their experiences.