I won this book from Goodreads; I entered the giveaway because I was intrigued by the New Zealand setting, and the description sounded interesting. However, this book was so poorly written that it was very hard to follow. Like many self-published novels (and this appears to be that), it is in desperate need of an editor and a competent proofreader. Grammatical and punctuation errors are prevalent, and someone needs to enlighten the author on the proper use of the exclamation mark. At one point the author switches to present tense for a paragraph or two for no reason. One of the more frustrating moments (early on) was when the author had four characters in the same room engaged in two separate conversations (two on two), but the dialogue on the page switches back and forth between the two conversations without identifying the speakers - which made it very hard to follow. Then the author does the same thing a chapter or two later!
There are a lot of very specific references to New Zealand culture and geography, most of which are never adequately explained. There are some end notes in the back of the book (which I only discovered about halfway through) but most of those either a) defined things I already knew or could figure out from context; b) didn't cover things I had questions about; or c) went off on tangents irrelevant to the story. There's also a list of characters in the back of the book - which brings up another issue. There are a lot of characters in this book, not necessarily a bad thing in and of itself, but most of them are so ill defined that it was difficult to keep track of who's who. About five different storylines run through the book, intermingling; a complex structure that never comes together (at least for this reader).
If I hadn't won this book on a First Reads giveaway, I would have abandoned it about a third of the way through (something I almost never do), but since I did, I stuck with it until the end. Although by the end, I didn't really know or care what was happening to whom.