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Kindle Edition
First published October 14, 2013
• girl moves into an apartment
• girl gets coffee
• girl gets a job
• girl gets coffee
• girl makes friends
• girl gets coffee
• girl has a meet cute with the love interest
• girl goes to college
• girl gets more coffee (SHOCKER!!!)
• girl hangs out with her friends
• girl goes shopping with friends
• girl (or author) apparently forgot that she has a job and it's never mentioned again after
• girl parties with friends
• girl is so freaking, painstakingly boring yet the author decides to focus 70% of this novel on her mundane life
I felt cheated. I wanted a mafia/crime novel. The introduction set off what was supposed to be gritty, dark, mysterious, etc. Instead, we got lengthy, detailed paragraphs on mundane, ordinary crap. I wanted dark/gritty scenarios, not chick flick montage. If I wanted a chick flick montage, I would have read any other NA novel
Not only did it focus on mundane events, it was fucking slow as fuck. The pacing was so slow that I found myself glossing over certain pages just to see if anything exciting happens. At 14%, I was already to mark this as a big ol' DNF. I powered through because I wanted to know who killed Lauren's father (and why). [Note: I don't mind slow pacing, just as long as it doesn't drag on. And this novel dragged for so long that I wasn't even sure if anything was going to happen at all]
I swear to god, Lauren was such a bland protagonist. Mischa was a bland character. Their romance/relationship was cute (at times), but mostly bland overall. I just didn't care for their relationship at all. I don't even understand what they see in each other. Frankly, the romance just didn't do anything for me.
Everything about this book was bland. There was no excitement whatsoever. The conflict/resolution was so anticlimactic that when the reason behind Lauren's father's murder was revealed, I found myself screaming THAT'S IT? WHAT? ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS? I WENT THROUGH 70% OF BORING, BLAND BULLSHIT FOR THIS?
I didn't find myself caring for any of the characters at all. Except Alex. Poor Alex.
Would not recommend to anybody. I feel so cheated. All of the 4 & 5 star praises have misled me.







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