I really liked this book when I was a teenager, but have read it in many years. Um, it's story is still interesting and I enjoyed the various machinations, but this story is really missing something in the character development area. I don't remember noticing that years ago, but it was very apparent when I was rereading it today I'l give it 4 stars for how much I enjoyed it back in high school.
One problem is that the authors never give us any insight into the characters. We don't really get to see what makes them tick. The authors also do an info dump. When a secondary character Regina befriends the heroine, Magpie, it's ridiculously easy. As another reviewer states, Regina is a too-perfect Mary Sue-ish character. Magpie and the hero, Raven, argue a lot and this is blamed on Magpie being liking him and being jealous of the attention he gives other girls. At one point, I guess the authors feel we need more insight into Magpie so they have Regina explain Magpie's history to Raven. What gets me is that if the characters were more real, Magpie would be REALLY unhappy with Regina for violating her confidences. If she wanted Raven to know her history, then she would have told him.
There's also the problem with the paper-thin romance between Raven and Magpie. While I can believe that Magpie is attracted to Raven, I can't believe that Raven feels anything more for her than the attraction he seems to feel for any woman. They argue at the beginning and she's snippy with him after he doesn't show any attention to her and he likes how she looks when she gets dressed up at one point. Then he later confronts her about her snippiness and they argue and he tells her she doesn't need to be jealous of the beautiful Regina and kisses her. The only other interlude the duo share is when Magpie has a nightmare and he comes into her room to comfort her. It ends with her offering to let him 'stay' and him leaving. There really doesn't seem to be much of an attraction or even affection between the two. They aren't even friends for most of the book.
SPOILER ALERT
At the end of the book, there is a huge fire and the Bards work to help people survive it and when the fire is over, Regina is re-baptized as a new person who is noble and can thus marry her ducal lover. This is really hard to believe, that simply baptizing someone with a new name, can make them a different person who is then noble enough to marry the Duke. Regina spends the rest of the book as his street-born mistress who loves him, but cannot marry him since she isn't noble. The thing is that her being his mistress isn't exactly a secret, how is marrying her under a different name going to render it more acceptable?
The other eye-rolling romance moment at the end of the book is between the hero and heroine, Raven and Magpie. He actually tells her he loves her and proposes. Seriously. Based on their interactions up to this point, the chance of him loving her is practically nil. He just never seems that 'into' her and since the book ends on this proposal scene, its hard to like this book.