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Star Force: Phase 1 - The Origin Series #17-20
Star Force: Origin Series 17-20
Star Force is now colonizing planets in other star systems and pushing for more. Trouble is, we didn't have to go very far until we ran into some unfriendly neighbors who are obsessed with galactic domination. Thankfully they're not the Dinosaurs, but still...ouch.
395 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 19, 2016
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Aer-ki Jyr
242 books265 followersAer-ki Jyr is one of the top 20 science fiction authors on Amazon due to his extremely long and ongoing space opera epic STAR FORCE, one of the longest military science fiction series ever written.
Check out his website and forum at www.aerkijyr.com
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June 2, 2019
Space War
I am excited about tech advances, and what will happen in future! Kicked Lizard butt! I wonder where they came from, it definitely goes into it in this book but I’m not sure if it’s a case of more will be revealed or if I just want to know more because mostly we get SF POV and sometimes 3rd wall info.. I remember a bit where I was reading and it said something about the Lizards maybe that our characters didn’t know yet. Aside from maybe 5 ppl.. I need a character map! Ps totally check out the website in the Bk.. found a way cool forum!! All about SF except that I was mainly confused since I started from Origins and have read nothing else yet.
I am excited about tech advances, and what will happen in future! Kicked Lizard butt! I wonder where they came from, it definitely goes into it in this book but I’m not sure if it’s a case of more will be revealed or if I just want to know more because mostly we get SF POV and sometimes 3rd wall info.. I remember a bit where I was reading and it said something about the Lizards maybe that our characters didn’t know yet. Aside from maybe 5 ppl.. I need a character map! Ps totally check out the website in the Bk.. found a way cool forum!! All about SF except that I was mainly confused since I started from Origins and have read nothing else yet.
May 28, 2025
Good story. Lacks polish.
The story line is good with entry of world building and character development.
The time jumps are a little disconcerting sometimes but mostly manageable.
The grammar is lacking by a fair margin and should have undergone more proofreading. There are tense changes that are mostly just annoying, and then there are instances of incorrect homonyn usage that make me want to punch a wall. All of this could have been avoided with a simple grammar checker, and it diminishes the story to have so many avoidable errors.
It makes me wonder if an AI was used to build some of the sentence structure.
Still a good story, but the grammar needs better editing.
The story line is good with entry of world building and character development.
The time jumps are a little disconcerting sometimes but mostly manageable.
The grammar is lacking by a fair margin and should have undergone more proofreading. There are tense changes that are mostly just annoying, and then there are instances of incorrect homonyn usage that make me want to punch a wall. All of this could have been avoided with a simple grammar checker, and it diminishes the story to have so many avoidable errors.
It makes me wonder if an AI was used to build some of the sentence structure.
Still a good story, but the grammar needs better editing.
October 15, 2019
Wow!
Great action, problems solved, enemies destroyed. The offer of help from the balloon race brings up a possible problem, I'll do it backwards. Let's say the Archons found a planet with 16th century Mongols and American Indians. You know they can fight, but if you give them modern weapons, after they help you, what is to stop them from wanting more than you may want to give and attacking you?
Great action, problems solved, enemies destroyed. The offer of help from the balloon race brings up a possible problem, I'll do it backwards. Let's say the Archons found a planet with 16th century Mongols and American Indians. You know they can fight, but if you give them modern weapons, after they help you, what is to stop them from wanting more than you may want to give and attacking you?
September 15, 2018
More I read the more I enjoy this series
Entertaining read gets a little unbelievable at times because of the technology differences. Still an entertaining read. It may help one some in the reading if you have a familiarity with video games like halo. If you play video games you would like this series.
Entertaining read gets a little unbelievable at times because of the technology differences. Still an entertaining read. It may help one some in the reading if you have a familiarity with video games like halo. If you play video games you would like this series.
January 25, 2020
Good read, but a bit tedious near the end
Good continuing narrative, but too much focus on a long and ultimately, hard to keep chugging through to get to the end. Have totally enjoyed this series so far, so hoping that this is just a one-off anomaly. Don’t get me wrong -still a good read overall. Just too much tome spent killing “lizards” by the thousands....
Good continuing narrative, but too much focus on a long and ultimately, hard to keep chugging through to get to the end. Have totally enjoyed this series so far, so hoping that this is just a one-off anomaly. Don’t get me wrong -still a good read overall. Just too much tome spent killing “lizards” by the thousands....
June 14, 2020
Headache
Great story. I feel that there's to much fighting, fluff. The story jumps decades forward. I feel that I need to keeps a time table. Talk more about figuring out tech a lot less fighting.
Great story. I feel that there's to much fighting, fluff. The story jumps decades forward. I feel that I need to keeps a time table. Talk more about figuring out tech a lot less fighting.
July 20, 2022
Very Good Series
I have joyful it read 20 books in the series. Up to this set, no misspelled words or misused words. Aside from 3 or 4 bloopers, very well written and paints a very graphic word picture.
Well done!
I have joyful it read 20 books in the series. Up to this set, no misspelled words or misused words. Aside from 3 or 4 bloopers, very well written and paints a very graphic word picture.
Well done!
October 4, 2023
Good read
I am so enjoying this series,sometimes I feel that some of the fight scenes are too long. However; the author has a right to do it his way😄.
Character development is very good! I would recommend this series to avid sci-fi readers
I am so enjoying this series,sometimes I feel that some of the fight scenes are too long. However; the author has a right to do it his way😄.
Character development is very good! I would recommend this series to avid sci-fi readers
March 28, 2018
Very compelling
I truly enjoy this type story. The historical progression over the centuries of our main characters keeps me coming back for more.
I truly enjoy this type story. The historical progression over the centuries of our main characters keeps me coming back for more.
May 2, 2018
Slightly boring as it was all land battles. Not sure if it was necessary to read to get the rest of the series
November 28, 2018
Lizards
The fighting begins. Characters remain steady. Plot mostly predictable but not always. Pretty good story line though. . . .
The fighting begins. Characters remain steady. Plot mostly predictable but not always. Pretty good story line though. . . .
December 18, 2018
Powerful
A blazing, original theme, this series redefines the long haul. It sets up an ongoing saga defining the future of humanity for millennia.
A blazing, original theme, this series redefines the long haul. It sets up an ongoing saga defining the future of humanity for millennia.
May 11, 2019
I enjoyed this set and have just started the next one.
August 29, 2019
a tad wordy
the story line is inventive but has become a futuristic form of "The Perils if Pauline.".It dies have a decent plot line that gets a little convoluted at times.
the story line is inventive but has become a futuristic form of "The Perils if Pauline.".It dies have a decent plot line that gets a little convoluted at times.
May 9, 2020
Action All the Time
The full tilt action I'd such that when it slows down it's still full speed. Like a baseball pitcher who throws so hard his change -up comes in at 92 mph.
The full tilt action I'd such that when it slows down it's still full speed. Like a baseball pitcher who throws so hard his change -up comes in at 92 mph.
July 31, 2020
Rereading the whole series
I like the series so much Im rereading it. Actually wish we lived it. This part is the start of the lizard wars.
I like the series so much Im rereading it. Actually wish we lived it. This part is the start of the lizard wars.
August 3, 2020
Not worth it
Sadly, the series has devolved. Too much battle detail, too little plot. It reads like a video game description. No fun
Sadly, the series has devolved. Too much battle detail, too little plot. It reads like a video game description. No fun
February 16, 2021
Great book
I like it keep the plot moving waiting to see more development so far the book are just what I wanted
I like it keep the plot moving waiting to see more development so far the book are just what I wanted
March 5, 2021
Fighting Lizard is harder than it looks
The lizards are direct fighters with a lot of complexity.
Can we beat them?
Do we want to make alliances without complete understanding?
The lizards are direct fighters with a lot of complexity.
Can we beat them?
Do we want to make alliances without complete understanding?
October 8, 2024
Action packed
If you like plenty of action this has it! And the good guys don't always have it a easy time against a clever opponent
If you like plenty of action this has it! And the good guys don't always have it a easy time against a clever opponent
October 29, 2016
Starting to love these books.
December 23, 2018
From the first book this series is hard to put down and full of action. The best science fiction series I have read in a long time and I have read thousands of books. The Star Force series keeps me wanting to read more of it's books.
December 13, 2016
Action is building.
The action is building up to where I'm unable to stop reading. Aer-ki Jyr Origin series is a page turner.
The action is building up to where I'm unable to stop reading. Aer-ki Jyr Origin series is a page turner.
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July 13, 2016New episode, new people added in every book
August 17, 2016
I'm enjoying these in spite of the writing quirks.
In fact I've been staying up way past my bedtime to read them.
In fact I've been staying up way past my bedtime to read them.
January 12, 2022
The writing has been improving as this series has continued. I am getting invested in the main characters and want to know where they go next.
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