It is very seldom that i give a 2 star let alone a 1 star to a book. I read this book till the end hoping that it'll get better towards the end. But no...sorry. Nope. I read the reviews and everyone said the book is awesome. I might just be the only one who doesn't like the book. So I'll give my reasons:
1) The characters in the story were just too predictable and 2-dimensional. Reclusive, handsome titled man vs overly stubborn, pretty titled girl. A pair of best girlfriends and a (possibly gay?) guy best friend. A brother and best friend that might end up with said girl friends (the hints were all over the story). Oh yes, don't forget the cliche of a villain: bitchy ex-girlfriend.
2) The heroine, Evelyn Tremaine, is flighty, annoying and stubborn veering towards childishness. She keeps wanting to travel but there's nothing in her actions that seem to support her "great dream of traveling the world" (and this is often repeated in the story as though she's trying to convince herself and used as a reason/excuse to not accept the hero's advances). She lies easily and gets into ridiculous situations. She refuses the hero, then decides to give herself to him, and then continues to refuse him until the end while along the way seem to be giving signs that she's very attracted to him. The only thing she is firm on is she wants to have adventures and travel the world. Again, note that nothing in the story shows that she is working towards doing this. Just a lot of bla bla and whining on not getting to travel if she marries Grey. Sorry...it irks me to read about heroines that are not smart but is described as one.
3) The hero, Matthew Langdon aka Earl of Grey, suffers from insta-lust/love so he automatically turns into a caveman and flaunts his chauvinistic attitude. And so he kisses the girl like he's going to devour he whole face, repeatedly and often, to shut her up and/or to show her he wants her. (Tsk...somehow it's not hot). There is not much to be said of the hero other than the fact that he is often either giving caveman kisses, glowering and staring daggers and pushing his decision to marry Evelyn.
4) The introduction of so many other characters and subplots along the way that was just distracting. Ok...i'm guessing those are supposed to open up to more stories later on. Maybe a book on Jo and St Aldywn, Belle and Simon, the Shaw twins. Wesley. And the secret group...what's that all about? The main story is all about Grey trying to convince Evelyn to marry him. Why didn't the story stick to that or maybe there's just nothing much to that story.
5) Questionable editing.
6) What i call a "wtf?" ending. After all that has happened, after all the going around and around, that was it? After a story like that, a nice little epilogue or a delicious cliffhanger ending would have made the effort of finishing the book worthwhile. But nooooo.......
However....
One saving grace is Evelyn's besties - Jo and Belle. Now they come across as more interesting characters because they (1) seem to be hiding some secret (2) they come across as girls who have character and wit. Also Wesley. It might be interesting to read about the inevitable pairing of the whole host of characters introduced in this book.
I did not enjoy the story and the MCs are just freaking annoying. You know that feeling you get when you read FSOG and it just doesn't come across as American as it's supposed to be although the setting is as American as it gets? That's the feeling i'm getting here - that this story is not as Englishy as it should be. I get that historical romance stories sometimes stretch the imagination and can be unrealistic, but this story to me is just unconvincing in its romance and improbable in being authentically historical.
Sigh.