Lola Evergreen thought this was innocent fun. Secretly following her father and his men to the legendary Blackwood pack, to see if the future alpha lived up to all the stories.
Keaton Thunders.
Future alpha of the Blackwood pack. Powerful, stunning, and deadly. Is set to be the most powerful alpha in America.
note spelling/grammar issues - ride instead of rid, to = too, your = you're!!!!! grrr
the grammatical sentences frankly seemed like they were written by a 16 yr old= 'then all the sudden we hear this growl', ...'it was my mate still had a hold of the one of the rogues neck'-authors note; sorry this chapter wasn't that exiting I have been busy' -just painful to read tbh hmm do i need to exit this book now and give up its that bad?
mixing up tenses past and present- so sentences have some past and present in the same sentence referring to the same thing!!
terrible!!!! the story is childish and incredibly poorly written.
i actually think this book is a work in progress and shouldn't frankly be on goodreads to be reviewed because for a budding author reviews like mine are unhelpful however in fairness to me no where does it state that this is a work in progress that needs development, editing and proofing.
I read this book on one of those ‘pay per chapter’ apps.
So he doesn’t want her, constantly cheats on her and the mate bond, but the minute she leaves him, he’s literally mid thrust and he goes oh wow I stuffed up I love her and need her?? Yet he would link her while with other women and that wasn’t wrong? And it’s all eventually forgiven? Just wish the female characters would have more guts. She does leave I’ll give her that.