From Heiress to NannyWhen heiress Victoria Templeton learns her fortune is gone, she has to move to the Colorado frontier to live with her uncle. But with no money to pay for the trip, she must accept a position as a traveling nanny for a widowed rancher. And, much to the chagrin of the man entrusting his children to her care, she soon finds herself in over her head. Mitch MacLeod lives for two his ranch and his children. And pampered Victoria isn't qualified to help with either. But the former socialite has more grit-and determination-than he first thinks. If her uncle has his way, though, Mitch will soon lose his ranch-and any hope of a future with Victoria.
Faith is fine but to go about life, even through the small everyday things, weighing everything on the scale of right and wrong, reward and punishment, sin and virtue is taking things waaaay too seriously. I am okay with God (any religion/faith) being there in a story as a source of strength and compassion but not to evoke guilt and fear. The author has characters show one or more textbook sinful/unchristian/unvirtuous qualities and then goes about beating them for it.
Those were simple yet hard times and faith would have helped. But, I am sure folks had much to do without overthinking things sooo much. Bottomline - I did not like the author’s take on faith and ‘inspired’ story-writing.
When Victoria's step-father dies and leaves Victoria and her mother with embarrassing debts and bankruptcy Victoria's mother is determined to leave Boston in secret. She sends Victoria to her uncle in Colorado. Victoria's pride will not allow her to ask her uncle for money for the trip to Colorado so when Mitchell shows up on their doorstep asking for a nanny for his children while travelling to Colorado Victoria jumps at the chance to earn her train fare. Even though Victoria has no idea how to care for children she is determined to learn quickly. When Mitchell learns that Victoria is the niece of the crooked banker that holds the lease on his ranch he is less than happy! Thinking that once they reach Proud Bend they will go their separate ways Mitchell doesn't count on Victoria's tenacity in desiring to care for his children. Victoria has no desire to marry her uncle's business partner, but what is a penniless debutante to do?
I really liked the characters in The Nanny Solution. I loved how determined Victoria was to learn to earn her own way. I liked how she desired to be independent. I liked Mitchell in that he desired to take care of his children no matter what. I was frustrated that even though Victoria and Mitchell were attracted to each other that they kept denying it and pushing each other away. But at the same time I liked the message of pride becoming a person's downfall. The bit of suspense and the dastardly characters of Victoria's uncle and his business partner added a bit of excitement to the story and kept the story line moving along. I thought that it took Mitch and Victoria a bit too long to get to their "a-ha" moment, but they did eventually get there and the ending was sweet.
This is a sweet inspirational story with plenty of action. It also tells about when baby formula was introduced -very interesting. Victoria and Mitchell fight their circumstances, attraction to each other and their pride. It has a very sweet hea.
The big M on steroids. But if you like a story where the heroine has to turn herself inside out and grovel to the hero for approval or acceptance this could be your cup of tea. Or if a dumb as rocks hero is your turn on go no further.
While this wasn't a bad story, there were some serious flaws. The heroine was....weak. I don't think I've ever seen a heroine cry so much at the drop of a hat. She was also *extremely* judgmental. I liked her less and less as she met each new person in her life - even up until the end of the story, when she gets all judgmental about a saloon girl who wants to turn her life to Jesus. It didn't help that the hero was kind of a major jerk for 95% of the story. While there are some definite, serious reasons behind it, I'm just not sure he made enough of a believable turnaround for me to like him.
The non-romance part of the plot was very convoluted. Normally I like a lot of layers in my plot, but there were almost too many. When some new twist (which were actually rather obvious) presented itself, it was more eye-roll inducing than anything else.
Additionally, I just don't think the author did enough research. Some of the speech seemed very out of place for the time period. And I *know* some of it was. For example, the heroine mentions in passing the game of Chutes and Ladders - simple research shows that this game was a morality building game called Snakes and Ladders until Milton Bradley in 1943. This story takes place in the 1800s. It was a side thought, quickly mentioned and forgotten, and didn't have any direct impact on the story at all. Why include something so anachronistic, especially when it does nothing to further your plot?
It's not a bad story, and there are hints that more stories will be coming out of the town of Proud Bend. I can only hope that they'll improve.
1: It was a romance book, but it was sweet and not all ooshy-gooshy! It was the perfect amount without going over any lines!
2:I loved the fact that a few times an element of suspense was thrown into the mix.
3: I loved the children. They added a lot to the story, and to the plot and how everything played out. And also how Mitch and Victoria both just accepted Emily like she was.
4: Rachel may not have had a huge part in every chapter, but she added something to the whole dynamic of the story. She was compassionate to the woman of ill-repute (no bad details given!) and also to her cousin who she seemed to empathize with even after knowing hr for such a short time! It was one of my favorite things.
5: The masterful use of Pride, and the repeated Bible verse, it was beautifully woven into the work. It was really maybe more influencial to the story line than about anything else in the book! Well done!
The Nanny Solution by Barbara Phinney. This Historical book takes place in 1882. Victoria Templeton lived in Boston with her mother after her father died. With bills to be paid and all the family lost all their money. Her mother left town so Victoria left to go live with her uncle in Colorado. A rancher, Mitch MacLeod, was in Boston to get his five kids after his wife died. He hires Victoria to care for the children on the train trip. With Victoria having lots of money and a maid she didn't know how to do anything. She did her best at taking care of the children. Mitch needed to hire someone to care for the children when he got home. Victoria wanted the job but Mitch wouldn't hire her knowing she didn't know how to do anything in the house. Mitch was going to lose his ranch if he didn't make the next mortgage payment. Victoria's uncle is the one after Mitch's ranch for mineral rights. A good historical read.