If there is one thing that is certain about Our Sunshine, it's that the prose is superb. Robert Drewe has created a poetry here; be it in the monologue and thoughts of Ned Kelly or in the short sections removed from his view. I know a fair bit about the life and times of Ned Kelly, and Drewe deals with the legend and how it connects to the man behind the (iron) mask.
There are moments here where it actually surpasses Peter Carey's Booker Prize-winner True History of the Kelly Gang (one of my favourite books), but when viewed holistically, Our Sunshine is by far the inferior.
Drewe's strongest character is (of course) Ned) with his deputy Joe Byrne ranking second. Joe Byrne is not the ill-tempered, opium smoking intellectual of Carey - in some ways he is closer to the soft-spoken, legend-making, hard-drinking "flash writer" of real life. Aaron Sherritt, the Kelly Gang's traitor would rank number three in this list.
Unfortunately Dan Kelly and Steve Hart (the Gang's fourth member) do not rise as particularly memorable characters, unlike Carey's telling. Other than some anti-Orangemen sentiment, Hart's character does not stick in my memory (a pity - he was a bit of a character in real life, but seems to get the short end of the stick in fiction). Dan is barely more present - however, there is one line from one of the shortest but most memorable sections I have not forgotten about him:
"Dan stayed on his horse. He didn't trust Aaron even then."
The build-up to the Massacre at Stringybark Creek is done perfectly (surpassing Carey), and the incident itself is told very well. However, Carey chooses to characterise Ned as a man discovering the horror of having taken human life for the first time. while Drewe concentrates on the outlaw he is becoming. In his recollection, he insists that only he and Joe Byrne killed the policemen (mostly supported by historical fact: Kelly killed two; the second shooter is unknown). They are both interesting accounts and I take no favourites here.
The weakest point of the novel is a rather far-fetched romance between Kelly and a landowner's wife (Mrs C). It feels untrue, out-of-place, and only has significance in the plot as an alibi (which Ned does not use, for obvious reasons) for his location during the Fitzpatrick incident, and to explain where he got his horse from. Kelly's romance and marriage in TTHOTKG comes off as far more plausible and realistic.
The oddest point of the novel is the presence of a circus-zoo at Glenrowan.
As a Kelly buff, I find it a pleasure when Drewe takes the small true moments of history and incorporates them into the novel.
Thomas Curnow is a practically absent character in the novel, which is ironic and works well.
Interestingly, Kelly's final personal stand at Glenrowan is downplayed and severely cut down from fact here, in an (intentionally) jumbled hallucinatory sequence that despite its fine prose, ultimately does not do justice to the man and myth of Edward Kelly. Peter Carey's economic telling - part eyewitness manuscript, part forged-document account - at the beginning and end of his own True History of the Kelly Gang recreates this scene in far superior fashion, and reintroduced the lesser known but true quote:
"I am the b----y Monitor, my boys".
However, the downfall of the Gang is conveyed well, with the deaths of Dan, Joe and Steve conveyed as accurately as possible (though Dan and Steve presumably died of asphyxiation from the smoke, though suicide is another possibility).
I've always wondered, Why do most of the Kelly novels portray his relationship with his stepfather George King as hostile? According to history, they seemed to get on well enough. However, I liked the way the relationship between Ned and his real father, Red Kelly, is done.
Our Sunshine is a minor Australian classic, but a classic all the same. It was the first of the revisionary/visionary novels on Ned Kelly, and it should not be forgotten.