*prepare for a raw, bare-bones review of this book from a girl who just finished it not half an hour ago*
Beach Lane by Melissa de la Cruz features three sixteen-year-old girls working as au pairs (aka well-paid babysitters) for a family vacationing in the Hamptons. At first glance, the story blurb paints Beach Lane as a fun, quick, summery read with potential for a great story. After reading this book I can say three things: yes, it was quick. Yes, it was summery. But fun? I believe Melissa de la Cruz and I have vastly different definitions of that word.
Right off the bat we are introduced to our three protagonists: Eliza, New York's former It Girl. Mara, small-town country bumpkin. And Jacqui, the beautiful and exotic Brazilian with men falling at her feet. I must admit I liked Mara best. Of the three she was the only one who wasn't remotely shallow. From the start it was clear that Eliza had intentions to climb her way back up the social ladder, with no regard to who was in her way. And Jacqui, though searching for her "true love," had no qualms about manipulating anyone in her path in order to get what she wanted. Mara seemed to be a bit of a blank page, thrown into this glamorous world with no real ulterior motive.
Melissa de la Cruz set up a wonderful story. Four kids, each with their own individual issues and predetermined goals to reach by the end of the summer. If the author played her cards right, that alone would be enough to fill up the 294 pages of this book. Unfortunately, Melissa de la Cruz preferred to throw her cards out the window and break out the booze instead.
If this book was a pie chart, at least 43% of it would be taken up with drinking. Add another 37% for partying, 22% for sex, and that leaves only 8% for actual babysitting. That adds up to 110% of bad examples for the projected audience. I mean, these girls are sixteen for crying out loud! As much as they drink in this book, their livers will be destroyed by the time they're thirty. They also show no guilt about abandoning their responsibilities as au pairs for more than half the book at least.
I won't deny I came into this book with expectations. I expected there to be more interaction with the kids. I expected them to be spoiled brats (which they were), and I expected the au pairs to be naive when it came to handling the kids (which they were), but I also expected, through trials and tribulations, for both parties to come out of it with a renewed sense of humility and responsibility, respectively (which they did not. Not in the slightest).
There was absolutely no positive message in this story. And I understand the author probably meant it to be a mindless summer read. If that's the kind of book you enjoy, then by all means, you go ahead, girlfriend. But, unlike Sex and the City and Gilmore Girls (as it has been compared to), Beach Lane had no clear/progressive character development, nor any real relationship development between the au pairs, the kids, or the love interests. There was a touch of romantic development toward the end, but it felt more like an afterthought to me, like the author was tying up all the loose ends, and not as well as she could have. If you couldn't tell, I, for one, will not be continuing this series.
I hope this review was helpful in your decision to read this book, and I apologize for any offense anyone may have taken at my review. A positive alternative to this book would be the Carter House Girls series by Melody Carlson (Book #1: Mixed Bags).